Chapter 2
That evening, Torres called Hashim to the equipment shed. Inside, rifle parts covered a wooden table. "You want respect? Learn your weapon blind." Torres scattered the pieces. "Reassemble. No light." He killed the lamp and walked out. Hashim's hands found cold metal in the darkness. His fingers traced each part—bolt carrier, spring, trigger assembly. He fit pieces together by feel alone. Sweat dripped off his nose. Minutes passed. His hands moved faster, more certain. Click. The final pin slid home. Torres appeared in the doorway, flashlight in hand. He swept the beam across the completed rifle. For three long seconds, he said nothing. Then he picked up the weapon, checked it, and set it down. "Tomorrow, oh-five-hundred. Be ready." He walked out. Hashim stood alone in the dark, his heart pounding hard against his ribs.
At oh-five-hundred, Torres met him at the mess hall. The building stood solid in the pre-dawn light, its sign clear above the door. Cacti and desert flowers grew thick around it. Torres pushed through the entrance and pointed at a table in the back corner. They sat across from each other. Torres pulled out a notebook and opened it flat. "You passed the physical tests. You learned your weapon." He tapped the page. "But being a soldier means more than that. It means thinking fast when things go wrong." Torres slid a tactical map across the table. "Study supply routes. Learn combat medicine. Master field communications." He closed the notebook and stood. "You've got potential. Don't waste it." Torres walked toward the door, then stopped and looked back. "Keep showing up like this." He left. Hashim sat at the empty table, the map spread before him. For the first time since arriving at camp, he felt like he belonged.
That night, training ran late. Hashim grabbed a lantern from the supply shed and carried it to the rifle range. The rugged metal frame felt solid in his grip. He set it on the ground and lit it. Orange light pushed back the darkness. He dropped to his belly in the sand and field-stripped his rifle. Once. Twice. Ten times. His hands moved in the lantern's glow until muscle memory took over. Around midnight, Torres walked past on his rounds. He stopped and watched from the shadows. Hashim didn't notice. He was too focused on getting faster, getting better. Torres said nothing, but he nodded once before moving on. Hashim finished another rep and wiped the sweat from his face. He would master every skill Torres demanded. He would prove he belonged in this squad.
The next morning, Torres pointed him toward a metal workbench near the training area. Guns and repair kits covered its surface. Cacti grew around it in the sand. "Your weapon breaks in the field, you fix it yourself. No exceptions." Torres dropped a damaged rifle on the bench. "Get it working." He walked away. Hashim picked up the rifle and examined it. The firing pin was cracked. He found tools in the kit and got to work. His hands were steady now, confident. He replaced the pin, cleaned each part, and tested the action. Click. Perfect. Torres returned an hour later and picked up the rifle. He worked the bolt, checked the chamber, aimed down the sights. Then he set it down and looked at Hashim. "Good." One word. But it was enough. Hashim had taken his first real steps. The path ahead was long, but he was moving forward.
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