Chapter 6
Juan's hand shook as he reached for his old Casterton Industries keycard in his desk drawer. The name was wrong—he'd been thinking Mercury Solutions for weeks, filling notebooks with the wrong company name. His carefully memorized alibis, his sketches of escape routes, even his practice runs near that hardware store—all of it pointed to a building that had nothing to do with his revenge. He sat down hard in his chair and pressed his palms against his eyes. Three years of planning, and he'd mixed up the target because anger had scrambled his focus. The real enemy was Casterton Industries, the place that had framed him and stolen his career. He opened his notebook and stared at page after page of useless notes. His confidence cracked like thin ice. He'd have to start over.
He grabbed his fedora and left the apartment, needing air. His feet carried him through the streets without direction until he stopped at an urban water feature near a building entrance. Water flowed down a steel frame in smooth sheets, catching the city lights in ripples of color. He watched the water fall and reset, fall and reset, over and over. Nothing changed. Nothing progressed. Just the same motion repeating forever. Juan touched the keycard in his pocket and felt the weight of his mistake pressing down. All his preparation meant nothing if he burned the wrong building. The supplies in his closet, the witnesses he'd arranged, the timing he'd rehearsed—everything had to be rebuilt from scratch. He turned away from the water wall and started walking home. Casterton Industries would burn eventually, but tonight he was just a man who'd wasted three years chasing the wrong target.
A sculpture caught his eye across the street. Two hands locked in a handshake, one side crumbling to pieces. He stopped and stared at the broken hand, how the fingers fell apart while trying to hold on. That's what Casterton had done to him—shook his hand while destroying everything behind his back. Juan's jaw tightened. The statue reminded him why he couldn't quit, why the mistake didn't matter in the end. He would rebuild his plan, trace Casterton's routines, memorize new escape routes. The rage hadn't gone anywhere. It just needed better direction. He walked past the sculpture and headed toward his apartment. The notebooks could be rewritten. The alibis could be adjusted. Casterton Industries would still burn, and he would still watch their faces when it happened. This setback only meant he had more time to get it right.
Juan turned down his street and spotted a red fire hydrant on the corner. He slowed his pace and studied it—the brass valve, the worn paint from years of city use. A cold thought settled in his chest. When Casterton Industries burned, firefighters would use hydrants like this one to fight the flames. They would arrive fast, hook up their hoses, and spray water through broken windows. His mistake with Mercury Solutions had saved him from a bigger problem. He'd never tested response times. Never checked how quickly help would arrive. The anger that had driven him for three years had blinded him to basic facts. Juan stood under a streetlight and felt something shift inside him. Maybe the plan itself was flawed. Maybe watching their faces wasn't worth spending the rest of his life in prison. He touched the brim of his fedora and walked the last block home, the keycard heavy in his pocket, doubt settling in where confidence used to live.
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