Juan Harrison

Juan Harrison's Arc
Chapter 4 of 9

Juan Harrison's dream is burning down the business that betrayed and robbed him completely.

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Chapter 4

Juan sat at a corner table in a diner called The Grease Trap, watching people through the front window. Three years ago, he'd eaten lunch with coworkers who smiled while they set him up. Now he trusted no one, which made planning easier. He sipped black coffee and opened his notebook to a new page. Mercury Solutions would burn, but first he needed to see how people moved through their routines without noticing what happened around them. A server refilled his cup without looking at his face. Perfect. That's exactly what he needed—to be invisible while he worked. He closed the notebook and left cash on the table, another small test complete. Outside, the afternoon sun beat down on the concrete. Juan walked along the sidewalk, his fedora blocking the glare. A large tree stood ahead, its branches spreading wide over the street corner. He stopped beneath it and felt the temperature drop. The shade made the heat bearable. People passed without looking at him—a woman on her phone, a man carrying bags, kids kicking a can. All of them focused on their own lives. Juan leaned against the trunk and watched Mercury Solutions across the street. Employees moved past windows on the second floor. One laughed. Another pointed at a computer screen. They had no idea he was out here. No idea what was coming. He studied the building's entrance, counting how many people went in and out in ten minutes. Fifteen people. All distracted. All predictable. He pushed off from the tree and walked away. Every detail mattered. Every observation brought him closer to the night when Mercury Solutions would finally pay. Juan walked three more blocks until the street opened into a wider intersection. A tall metal tower rose above the buildings, its antenna arrays stretching toward the clouds. He stopped and studied it. The structure stood visible from multiple directions, its beams catching the afternoon light. When Mercury Solutions burned, he would need a place to watch from a distance. The tower would help him mark his position. He could find a rooftop or parking garage with a clear view, using the tower as a reference point. Juan pulled out his notebook and sketched the tower's shape, adding notes about the streets around it. His three alibis were already prepared—receipts, witnesses, all the evidence pointing away from him. But he needed to see their faces when the fire started. Needed to watch them understand what they'd lost. The tower would guide him to the perfect spot. He closed the notebook and kept walking, his plan now one step closer to complete. He turned down a narrow passage between two buildings where foot traffic disappeared. Ivy climbed the brick wall on his left, green tendrils weaving through cracks in the old mortar. The passage would make a good escape route—forgotten, overgrown, the kind of space people avoided. Juan ran his hand along the rough brick, feeling where the ivy had loosened the structure. Mercury Solutions had a similar alley behind their loading dock. He'd walked it twice already, noting the cameras and lights. This passage showed him what neglected spaces looked like, how nature crept in when buildings aged. He emerged onto another street and headed home. The tree for cover, the tower for navigation, the ivy-covered wall for escape. Each piece fit together like numbers in a ledger. Soon the books would balance, and Mercury Solutions would pay what they owed.

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