Caelith Ironveil

Caelith Ironveil's Arc
Chapter 1 of 2

Caelith Ironveil's dream is finishing the unbinding ritual that claimed my mortal life.

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by @Ashabella
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Chapter 1

Caelith circles the stones for the third time tonight, studying the ground where he fell. Two centuries have not erased the memory of the blade shattering in his hands, the sound like ice cracking across a frozen lake. He needs to find the exact spot where the metal failed. He retrieves the quadrant from where it rests against the eastern stone. The brass arc catches moonlight as he holds it up, measuring the angle between the stone and the sky. Forty-three degrees. The same angle as the night he died. He moves to the center of the circle and kneels, running his hand over the packed earth. His fingers pass through a small depression in the ground, barely visible after two hundred years of rain and wind. There. The place where the blade struck the earth and split into seven pieces. The unbinding ritual failed because he stood three steps too far west, where the resonant ore lay dormant beneath cold stone instead of exposed to moonlight. But the hammer tells a different story. He floats toward it where it lies half-buried in leaf litter, just outside the circle's edge. The splintered shaft points southwest. His hand hovers over the stone head, remembering the weight of it swinging down for the final strike. He was standing here when the blade shattered, not at the center. Three steps too far east, not west. The hammer fell from his living hands and he collapsed forward, into the circle. The ore surfaced exactly where it should have. He miscounted his own position. He picks up the largest fragment of the broken sword, moss clinging to its jagged edge. The blade rang perfect. The temperature was correct. The moon sat at exactly forty-three degrees. Every measurement precise except the one that mattered most. He stands at the hammer's position and looks toward the center. The ore would have surfaced directly beneath his feet if he had taken three more steps forward. Instead he swung the hammer from here, reaching too far, throwing his balance off by the width of a breath. The ritual didn't backfire. He simply stood in the wrong place.

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