Ivor Mcdool

Ivor Mcdool's Arc
Chapter 2 of 5

Ivor Mcdool's dream is establishing a grand fortress that becomes the realm's most secure stronghold.

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Chapter 2

The bird arrived at dawn, three days late. Ivor untied the message from its leg and read it twice. The surveyor he had sent east to map the lord's boundary was gone. His last camp had been found abandoned, his tools scattered, his horse still tethered. The only writing left behind was a single line scratched into the dirt with a stick: Holensnow. Ivor rode east with Ethan at first light. They found the surveyor's camp by midday, marked by a lantern still burning among twisted roots at the forest edge. The flame cast pale light through rusted iron. Inside the tent, a water-stained logbook lay open on the ground. The last entry read: "Boundary ends at the old markers. Lord's eastern claim extends to the plateau base. They've already started digging." The ink had run where water pooled on the page. Ethan checked the ground while Ivor studied the words. No blood. No signs of a fight. Just tools left where they fell and a message that pointed north. They rode to the plateau's southern approach and found fresh earthworks carved into the slope. A shovel stood upright in a mound of turned soil, its blade crusted with salt and rust as though it had been worked for weeks. Beyond it, timber stakes marked foundation lines. The force that had taken Holensnow wasn't just occupying the ground. They were building on it. Ivor dismounted and walked the perimeter of the stakes. The surveyor had mapped the lord's claim, and the claim ran right up to this ground. The lord had known. He had sent Ivor chasing a boundary survey while someone else broke earth on the only site that mattered. Ivor returned to the barracks and sent word to the lord. The message was brief: the survey was complete, the boundary confirmed, and the eastern claim now overlapped with an armed occupation. He offered no accusation and asked no questions. He simply requested an immediate meeting to discuss terms. The lord's silence over the surveyor's disappearance was answer enough. Ivor would not waste time proving what he already knew. The fortress would not be built on trust or patience. It would be built on what he could take and what he could hold, and the lord had just shown him the cost of waiting.

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