Thornan Redheart

Thornan Redheart's Arc
Chapter 1 of 2

Thornan Redheart's dream is learning the human language to help scared people trust him..

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by @Ellie
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Chapter 1

Thornan pressed his clawed finger against the worn page, tracing the strange human symbols. The book felt small in his red hands. He sat in the shade of a crumbling wall, repeating the sounds under his breath. "Hel-lo. I am friend." The words felt clumsy on his tongue, but he kept trying. In New Xaxsuroth, scared people ran when they saw his horns and red skin. Children hid behind their parents. If he could speak their language, maybe they would see past his demon face. Maybe they would trust him enough to let him help them. He turned the page and started again. The library helped, but most people still avoided him. He needed somewhere different. Somewhere people already felt comfortable. Somewhere they came for simple, happy things. That's when he saw the refreshments bar at the edge of the market. Wooden posts held up a shade cover. Benches sat empty beneath it. The owner had left weeks ago, and no one had claimed it since. Thornan walked around it slowly. This place could work. People got thirsty in the desert heat. They would come for water and rest. And while they drank, he could practice his words with them. He cleaned the counter and filled clay jars with cool water from the well. He arranged cups in neat rows. When the first customer arrived, Thornan's heart pounded. The man froze when he saw red skin and horns. Thornan took a breath and spoke the words he'd practiced. "Hel-lo. I am friend. Water?" His voice came out rough but clear. The man hesitated, then nodded. Thornan poured the water with careful hands. The man drank, paid with a small coin, and left without running. It was a start. Each day brought more people. Some still feared him, but others began to listen. He learned new words from them—"thank you" and "good day" and "see you tomorrow." His tongue grew stronger with each conversation. The refreshments bar became his classroom, and every customer became his teacher. He was learning. Slowly, one word at a time, he was building the trust he needed to protect them all.

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