Thunder

Thunder's Arc
Chapter 1 of 7

Thunder's dream is bringing peace, love, and beauty everywhere.

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by @Rayne
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Chapter 1

Thunder walked the dirt road north, watching the forest thin as the path widened. He carried nothing but what fit in his pack. Three days to the settlement. Three days to listen until someone spoke the truth that would free them all. He'd done this before in a dozen places. He would do it again. But ahead, beneath the shade of an oak tree with roots that buckled the road, a child sat cross-legged in the dust. Thunder slowed. The child looked up at him with dark eyes and said nothing. Thunder stepped to the side to pass, but the child shifted to block him. He moved left. The child moved too. Thunder crouched down to eye level and asked what was wrong. The child stared at him and whispered, "You're tired." Thunder's breath caught. Not hurt. Not lost. Not waiting for someone. Just tired. He opened his mouth to thank the child, to say he was fine, to keep walking. Instead he sat down in the road beside her. The child leaned against his shoulder. Thunder closed his eyes and let the weight settle. The child had a blanket spread beside her with a book laid open on top. She'd been waiting here a long time. Long enough to make a place. She didn't ask him to explain or to fix anything. She just stayed still against him while the oak's shadow moved across the road. Thunder felt something crack inside his chest, something that had been holding him upright for months. When he finally opened his eyes, the child was watching him. She stood and picked up her blanket and book. Then she walked back toward the trees and disappeared. Thunder stayed in the road until his breathing evened out. When he rose and kept walking north, the weight he carried felt different. Not lighter. Just known. Before he could take more than a few steps, the child appeared at the tree line again. She held something small in her hand. A rose. The petals glowed pink and purple in the forest shade, each one shaped like a tiny heart. She walked to him and pressed it into his palm without a word. Thunder looked down at the flower, then at her. She said, "So you remember you can stop." Then she turned and was gone. Thunder stood in the road holding the rose. He tucked it carefully into his pack and continued north. For the first time in years, he walked knowing he might return.

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