Billy Goatee

Billy Goatee's Arc

2 Chapters

Billy Goatee's dream is creating a signature lure design that every serious fisher will demand..

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by @Acelynn
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Chapter 1

Billy Goatee twisted copper wire around the hook, testing the balance in his palm. The lure needed to wobble just right to catch a trout's eye. He lived alone in his marsh for this exact reason—every fish species he needed swam within casting distance. His neighbors kept asking him to join their potluck dinners, but he always said no. Someone might spot his designs and steal them. One day, fishers everywhere would ask for his lures by name. But not yet. Not until he got it perfect. His fishing cabin sat right where the marsh met deeper water. Colorful flags fluttered from the roof posts, left behind by the previous owner. Flowers and vines climbed the walls in a riot of colors he'd never bothered to trim back. The cabin extended out over the water on thick wooden posts. Billy could stand on the planks and drop his test lures straight down into prime fishing spots. He'd caught bass, pike, and catfish all in one morning last week. Each species taught him something new about what worked and what didn't. The cabin kept his work private and his testing efficient. Perfect. But testing from the water's edge only showed him half the picture. Billy needed to see how fish reacted before they struck. He'd built a watch platform high up in a nearby tree with thick branches that held rainbow-colored bark. From up there, he could spot schools of fish moving through the shallows. He watched how they turned toward certain colors and ignored others. The platform swayed slightly in the wind, but it gave him a clear view of everything below. Up high, he could study the patterns that would make his lures impossible to resist. Down low, he could test his theories. Between the two spots, Billy had everything he needed to create something fishers would travel miles to buy. Inside the cabin, Billy kept his workbench stocked with materials. Bright feathers, shiny beads, and strips of reflective metal covered the surface. His tackle box sat open beside dozens of test lures in every color combination he could think of. This was where the real work happened. He'd sketch a design, build it at the bench, then test it in the water below. The fish told him what worked. He just had to listen. Billy picked up a half-finished lure with yellow and silver sides. Tomorrow he'd try it on the pike. One of these designs would be the one that made his name. He could feel it getting closer.

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Chapter 2

Billy needed to learn what the fish wanted before he could give it to them. He grabbed his tackle box and climbed down to the water's edge. The morning sun lit up the shallows. He tied on a red and silver lure he'd finished last night. Three casts later, a bass struck hard and fast. Billy reeled it in, studying how the lure had twisted in the water. The fish had hit from the side, not below. He made a mental note and released the bass back into the marsh. One test down, dozens more to go. But Billy's test catches only told him so much. He needed to know what real fishers looked for when they opened their tackle boxes. The thought made his stomach tight. Real fishers meant people. Crowds. Strangers who might ask questions about his designs. Still, he packed three of his best lures in a small pouch and headed out. He'd heard about a lake where fishers gathered to compete and swap stories. Trees surrounded the water, and bright flowers grew thick along the shore. Billy spotted a dozen fishers casting lines from the banks. He kept his distance, watching them change lures and discuss their catches. One fisher held up a standard spinner bait and complained it wasn't getting any bites. Another laughed and said the fish here were too smart for basic designs. Billy's hand moved to the pouch at his side. Maybe just one question. Maybe just one opinion. He took a breath and walked toward the nearest fisher, his heart hammering against his ribs. The fisher glanced up as Billy approached. Billy cleared his throat and asked what kind of action the fish were responding to today. The fisher shrugged and said nothing was working right. Billy pulled out one of his lures, a green and copper design with a unique wobble. He offered to let the fisher try it. The man took it, examined it closely, then tied it on his line. Two casts later, his rod bent hard. He whooped as he reeled in a fat trout. Three other fishers crowded around to see what lure had done the trick. Billy's chest tightened. Too many eyes. Too many questions. He mumbled something about needing to go and backed away from the group. Back at his cabin, Billy set up his bug zapper on a post near his workbench. The light would let him work after dark when his mind was clearest. He walked to his wooden fish cleaning station and scrubbed it down, ready for tomorrow's test catches. The trip to the lake had taught him something important. His lures worked. Real fishers wanted them. But showing them off meant dealing with crowds and questions he wasn't ready for. Billy picked up his wire cutters and started on a new design. He'd keep testing. Keep improving. When he finally opened his bait shop, the lures would be so good that fishers would come to him. He wouldn't have to go to them.

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