Bor'gazak

Bor'gazak's Arc

4 Chapters

Bor'gazak's dream is raising orphaned warriors abandoned by war into a loyal fighting family..

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by @AlastorReid
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Chapter 1

Bor'gazak planted his axe in the cracked earth and surveyed the ruins. Three stone walls still stood. Enough for a start. He'd claimed this forgotten patch of wasteland because no one else wanted it, and that suited him fine. Here he would rebuild what honor demanded—a clan worth the name. He dragged the heavy shield from his pack and drove it into the ground beside the entrance. The bleached boar skull stared out across the empty training yard, two crossed greatswords gleaming in the sun above it. Let anyone who came see what awaited them. This ground now belonged to warriors, not ghosts. He would fill it with orphans the world had cast aside, and those who survived his training would become the brothers his blood clan had failed to be. But first, the old ways demanded a marker. Bor'gazak hauled stones from the rubble and stacked them into a crude base. He bound the beast skulls he'd carried for three years with leather cord—wolf, bear, sand drake. Each kill had been clean. Each enemy had seen his eyes. He lashed them together into a towering column and planted it in the center of the pit. The totem cast a jagged shadow across the sand. His father's clan had torn down monuments like this when they stopped caring about honor. This one would stand. The first orphan arrived at sunset. A girl, maybe ten winters, with a knife wound still bleeding through her tunic. She stared at the skull-crowned entrance and didn't run. Bor'gazak pointed to the meal hut beside the training pit. "Eat. Sleep. Tomorrow we see if you're worth keeping." She nodded once and limped inside. One recruit. The beginning of something that wouldn't rot from within.

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Chapter 2

The next morning, Bor'gazak stepped past Krel's crooked hut and found the man awake, sitting cross-legged in the dirt. A bundled cloth lay before him. Krel unfolded it without looking up—inside, a red banner emblazoned with a fierce boar in black. The blood clan sigil. "I carried this since I was sworn in," Krel said. "Thought it meant something. Thought the clan meant something." He held it out. "It's yours to burn or keep. I won't wear it again." Bor'gazak took the banner and studied the boar's snarling face. His father had worn this symbol before dishonor rotted the clan from within. Now it was just fabric and broken promises. He turned toward the totem in the training pit, then stopped. The girl stood nearby, watching. She'd seen her own village burn. She knew what abandoned symbols meant. Bor'gazak crouched and met Krel's eyes. "You don't get to throw away your shame that easy. Keep it. Hang it inside your hut where only you see it. Let it remind you what you're building instead." Krel's face hardened, then cracked. He took the banner back with shaking hands and pressed it against his chest. "I won't fail again." Bor'gazak stood and gestured toward the training pit. "Then prove it. You train with her today. She's faster than you and half your size. Keep up or sleep hungry." He watched Krel rise and follow the girl to the pit, the banner still clutched in one fist. The warrior had come expecting mercy. What he'd found instead was the same brutal clarity Bor'gazak offered everyone—your past stays with you until you're strong enough to carry it without breaking. That night, Bor'gazak checked the hut Krel had built. Through the entrance, he saw the red banner hanging from a bone rafter, swaying slightly in the wind. The boar's eyes caught the moonlight. Krel slept beneath it, exhausted from drills, his broken sword propped outside where the rust could catch the morning sun. Bor'gazak turned back toward the ruins. He'd expected satisfaction from watching a blood clan warrior grovel. What he felt instead was colder, sharper—the weight of knowing he could reshape broken men into something worth keeping. One orphan learning to fight. One failure learning to rebuild. This was how a clan grew, one scar at a time. And he would make every one of them earn their place beside him.

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Chapter 3

Three days later, a boy arrived at dawn. He couldn't have been more than twelve winters old. His skin burned with fever, and his ribs showed through torn cloth. He made it to the edge of the ruins before his legs gave out. Bor'gazak found him there when he went to wake the others for drills. He crouched beside the boy and pressed a hand to his forehead. Too hot. The fever would kill him before nightfall if it wasn't broken. Bor'gazak had planned to run drills at first light, test whether Krel could keep pace with the girl after yesterday's failures. But a dead orphan served no purpose. He carried the boy to an empty stretch of ground and barked orders at Krel to gather furs and bone poles from the supply pile. Together they raised a crude shelter—orange fabric stretched over a frame, lined with pelts to trap what little coolness the morning still held. The boy went inside, barely conscious. Bor'gazak set up a low table outside the shelter, carving symbols into the wood with his knife while Krel fetched water and what herbs grew near the ruins. Clay pots, bone tools, strips of cloth—he laid them out the way the old clan healers had taught him before everything fell apart. He mixed a bitter paste and forced it between the boy's cracked lips, then waited. The girl watched from the training pit, her stance uncertain. She wanted to know if this boy would train with them or die trying. Bor'gazak didn't answer because he didn't know yet. By midday the fever broke. The boy's breathing steadied and his skin cooled enough that Bor'gazak knew he'd live. But the child was still too weak to stand, let alone fight. Bor'gazak walked to the far edge of the ruins where bones and hides formed a low structure—a place for the broken ones who couldn't yet earn their place in the pit. He dragged the boy inside and left him on a pile of furs with water and dried meat within reach. When he returned to the training grounds, Krel and the girl were waiting. Bor'gazak looked at them both and realized something had shifted. He'd spent the morning saving a life instead of hardening warriors, and it hadn't weakened him. It had given him another piece to rebuild with. The old ways protected the weak until they were strong. He'd forgotten that part. Now he wouldn't.

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Chapter 4

The warriors came at dusk, three of them on horseback with weapons strapped across their backs. Bor'gazak saw them from the training grounds where he'd been drilling Krel and the girl. The riders stopped at the edge of the ruins and didn't dismount. One of them carried a torch. The leader rode forward and threw something at Bor'gazak's feet. A skull with an axe buried in the forehead, worms crawling through the eye sockets. "Krel returns with us or we burn everything you've built. You have until the moon rises." The warrior gestured toward the bone arch at the ruins' entrance, the one Bor'gazak had woven from twigs and small finger bones to mark territory. The torch-bearer moved his horse closer to it. Behind Bor'gazak, Krel went rigid. The girl's hand drifted to her blade. Bor'gazak picked up the skull and walked toward the riders. He stopped ten paces away and met the leader's eyes. "Krel stays. He trains under my command now. If you want him back, challenge me properly—name the terms, choose your ground, look me in the eye when you try to kill me." The leader spat. "We don't follow those rules anymore. Neither did you when you abandoned your blood." The torch moved closer to the arch. One spark and it would catch. Bor'gazak felt Krel step up beside him, then the girl on his other side. Both ready to fight three mounted warriors with a torch that could destroy everything. Bor'gazak threw the skull back at the leader's horse. It struck the animal's shoulder and it reared. "Then you're bandits, not warriors. And I don't negotiate with bandits." He turned his back on them and walked toward the recovery shelter where the fevered boy still slept. The riders could burn the arch or charge his back—either way, he'd shown his orphans that some things mattered more than survival. The horses shifted behind him. No hoofbeats came. When he glanced back, the warriors were riding away, the torch still burning in the lead rider's hand. The arch remained standing. Krel exhaled beside him, and Bor'gazak realized the boy hadn't been holding the clan banner. He'd left it in his tent and stood here as just another orphan. That mattered more than any threat the blood clan could make.

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