Edmund Harrow

Edmund Harrow's Arc

7 Chapters

Edmund Harrow's dream is exposing a charlatan cult leader who preys on desperate believers.

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by @wazels
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Chapter 1

Edmund knelt in the mud behind the storage shed, examining the metal box he'd just pulled from beneath the warped floorboards. The cult leader had hidden it well, wrapped in oilcloth and buried deep. Inside, a simple speaker connected to a microphone lay nestled in black velvet. He'd tracked the charlatan's operation for three weeks, watching families arrive at the crumbling temple with cash-filled envelopes. They'd kneel before the gilded statue while muffled voices emerged from its base, speaking the names of their drowned children. The widow who'd lost her son had sobbed with relief when the statue "spoke" his final words to her. Edmund had watched her hand over everything. Now he understood the trick. The cult leader hid nearby with the microphone, whispering into this transmitter while families wept before the statue's speakers. The ritual markings on the temple walls were just theater. The ancient swamp deity was just painted plaster and electronics. Edmund photographed the device from every angle, then carefully rewrapped it. He placed the box back under the floorboards exactly as he'd found it. The families had left tokens at a small shrine near the temple entrance—photos, toys, candles for children the swamp had taken. Those grieving people deserved to know the truth. Tomorrow, he'd bring the sheriff and a crowbar.

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Chapter 2

Edmund studied the map spread across his truck's hood. Three weeks of watching had taught him the cult leader's patterns, but not where he lived. The sheriff would arrive tomorrow at dawn with a warrant. That gave Edmund one night to search the charlatan's home for evidence beyond the transmitter. He found the shack two miles deeper into the swamp, moss clinging to its weathered walls like a second skin. Black smoke curled from the crooked chimney. The cult leader was home. Edmund crouched in the cattails, waiting. An hour passed before the front door opened and the man emerged, climbing into a rusted sedan. The engine coughed to life and disappeared down the dirt road. Edmund counted to sixty, then moved toward the shack. A low growl stopped him cold. The wolf in the wooden shelter beside the porch had lifted its head, yellow eyes fixed on him. Edmund froze. The animal watched him for three long breaths, then settled back down with a huff. Inside, the shack reeked of cigarette smoke and mildew. Edmund worked quickly, checking drawers and cabinets with gloved hands. He found the duffel bag shoved under the bed. The zipper stuck, then gave way. Cash and gold coins gleamed in the dim light. Beneath them lay leather notebooks filled with names, dates, and dollar amounts. The widow's name appeared six times, each entry higher than the last. Edmund photographed every page. This wasn't just fraud. This was systematic predation, documented in the charlatan's own handwriting. Headlights swept across the window. Edmund's stomach dropped. The cult leader's car was pulling back into the drive. He shoved the notebooks into the bag, zipped it closed, and pushed it back under the bed. The front door rattled. Edmund slipped out the back window as the lock clicked open behind him. He ran low through the darkness, the wolf's bark erupting behind him. By the time he reached his truck, his hands were shaking. But the photographs were safe in his camera. Tomorrow the sheriff would see exactly what kind of monster had been feeding on grief.

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Chapter 3

Edmund crouched behind the cypress until his knees ached, watching the house on stilts. The cult leader didn't come back out. One hour passed, then two. The sedan sat silent beside the porch, its trunk still open. Edmund's camera hung useless around his neck, the film exhausted. He could leave and meet the sheriff at dawn, but the charlatan might vanish before then with everything loaded. He could stay and watch, but that meant losing a night of sleep with nothing to show for it except cold mud soaking through his boots. The decision crystallized when a light went out on the second floor. The cult leader was settling in for the night. Edmund moved closer, using the darkness as cover. The porch boards creaked under his weight. He peered into the nearest crate beside the sedan. Recording equipment, wire spools, and a tangle of microphone cables. The second crate held folded tapestries and bundled candles. The third was empty except for a set of robes crumpled at the bottom, one sleeve torn half off and the hem thick with dried mud. Too damaged to be useful anymore. Edmund photographed them anyway with the last exposure on his roll, then grabbed the torn robes and carried them back to his truck. The fabric stank of mildew and swamp water. Tomorrow the sheriff would see this costume for what it was — not holy vestments but stage props for a con man. Edmund draped the robes across his passenger seat and drove back toward town. The cult leader might finish loading before dawn, but he couldn't run far. Not with Edmund's photographs and now physical evidence linking him to the fraud. Headlights appeared in his rearview mirror a mile down the road. Edmund's grip tightened on the wheel. The sedan came fast, closing the distance between them. The cult leader must have seen something — a footprint on the porch, the missing robes, some sign that someone had been there. Edmund pressed the accelerator, but the old truck had nothing left to give. The sedan pulled alongside him on the narrow road. Through the window, Edmund saw the man's face twisted with rage. Then the sedan swerved hard, metal screaming as it clipped the truck's front fender. Edmund's wheels left the road. The truck plunged sideways into the ditch, water rushing through the floorboards as it settled. By the time Edmund kicked his door open and crawled out, the sedan's taillights were disappearing into the darkness. The robes floated in the flooded cab, already sinking. Edmund stood in the knee-deep water, watching his evidence drift away. The cult leader knew he'd been discovered. And now he had a head start.

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Chapter 4

Edmund walked back to the temple at first light. His boots were still wet from the ditch. The truck sat abandoned where it had crashed, everything inside ruined. He needed to understand what he'd missed. The widow had believed so completely that she'd emptied her bank account. Other families had done the same. The temple stood at the end of an overgrown path, marked by an ancient tree strung with glass bulbs that flickered with battery-powered light. Someone had wrapped the wires around the branches months ago, maybe years. The bulbs cast weak yellow circles on the moss below. Edmund stopped beneath them and looked at the offerings piled against the trunk. Coins pressed into the bark. Photographs pinned with rusted nails. A locket on a water-stained chain, hanging from a low branch. He opened it. A child's painted face stared back at him, blue eyes too bright against the tarnished silver. The parents had left this here, believing it would help free their daughter's spirit. They'd paid money for that belief. They'd hung their most precious thing on a tree and walked away lighter, thinking they'd bought her peace. Edmund closed the locket and left it hanging. He understood now. The fraud wasn't just the transmitter or the prerecorded voice. It was this — the tree, the lights, the careful staging of hope. The cult leader had built a place where grief could land, where it could be named and given a price. People didn't come here because they were fools. They came because the alternative was carrying their dead children alone. Edmund had spent three weeks documenting the mechanics of the con, but he'd never asked why it worked. Now he knew. The charlatan hadn't just sold miracles. He'd sold the one thing grief couldn't manufacture on its own: the feeling that someone else understood. Edmund turned back toward town. He'd lost his evidence, but he'd found something the sheriff needed to hear. The families weren't victims because they were stupid. They were victims because they were desperate. And that made the crime worse.

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Chapter 5

Edmund walked toward town with the locket still hanging in his mind. The sheriff would listen, but words wouldn't be enough. He needed proof that the cult leader hadn't just invented a con. He needed to show that the temple itself was older than the fraud, that something darker had been here first. He circled back through the marsh instead of following the road. The temple sat on a raised patch of dry ground, but behind it the water spread out in shallow pools. Edmund had focused on the floorboards and the transmitter during his first visits. He'd never walked the perimeter. Fifty yards past the back wall, he found what remained of a stone marker rising from the mud. The obelisk stood taller than him, cracked down the middle and covered in moss. He scraped away the green growth with his pocket knife. Symbols carved deep into the stone appeared beneath — not letters, but interlocking patterns that repeated down each face. At the base, someone had chiseled words in English: offerings made here 1847. The temple was seventy years older than the cult leader. Someone else had built this place to appease something, long before the charlatan arrived. Edmund pushed through the cattails toward the temple's foundation. The back wall had collapsed inward, exposing the interior from a different angle. Inside, half-buried in mud and broken boards, sat a stone box. He climbed through the gap and crouched beside it. The sarcophagus was smaller than a coffin, its lid carved with the same symbols from the obelisk. Water had pooled inside when the lid cracked. He could see bones floating beneath the surface — small ones, arranged in a circle. Around the outer edge of the box, more words: feed the water its due. Edmund's hands went cold. This wasn't a temple for grief. It was a place built to give something what it wanted. The cult leader had found it empty and repurposed it, but the original builders had meant it for something else entirely. He photographed the obelisk and the sarcophagus with the camera he'd borrowed from the boarding house. Inside the temple, beneath years of rot and moss, he found the lectern the original builders had used. Its pages were swollen and illegible, but the gilt letters on the backing board were still visible: Levold. A family name, maybe, or the name of whatever they'd been trying to please. Edmund gathered his evidence and walked back to town. The cult leader was a fraud, but he'd chosen his stage carefully. The temple had always been a place where desperate people came to bargain with death. The charlatan had just changed the terms. Now Edmund had proof the lie went deeper than one man's greed — and that made it harder to explain, but impossible to ignore.

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Chapter 6

Edmund walked back to town with the photographs in his borrowed camera, but he didn't go straight to the sheriff. The evidence proved the temple was older than the cult leader's fraud, but it didn't explain what had happened in the last three days. Three families who'd paid for liberation rituals had come to the boarding house asking for him. Each one described the same dream — something rising from dark water, reaching toward the surface. They'd all had it the same night, then again the next. Now they wanted to know what it meant. He found the first family at their home near the edge of town, a two-story place with a wide porch facing the bayou. The father met him at the door with hollow eyes. Inside, the mother and two children sat at the kitchen table, none of them touching the food in front of them. Edmund asked them to describe the dream in detail. The father spoke first — dark water, a shape beneath it, hands breaking the surface. The mother interrupted to add the circular stones around the edge. Edmund's chest went tight. He asked the children to draw what they'd seen. Both sketched the same thing: a pond ringed with rocks, something underneath pushing up. Neither child had been to the temple. Neither had seen the sarcophagus or the arrangement of bones inside it. But they'd dreamed it perfectly. Edmund walked to the pond behind their house. It sat thirty yards from the back porch, circled by stones the father had placed there years ago. The water was murky and still. He knelt at the edge and stared into it, looking for anything that might explain a shared dream. Nothing moved below the surface. But when he stood and turned back toward the house, he understood what he was facing. The cult leader's fraud had been built on top of something real. The temple had worked once, long ago, and the rituals the charlatan sold had opened a door he didn't know existed. Edmund couldn't prove the dreams were connected to the bones or the inscription, but he couldn't prove they weren't. And that uncertainty changed everything. He'd come to expose a liar, but now he had to decide whether to tell desperate families they'd paid money to wake something that had been sleeping for seventy years.

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Chapter 7

Edmund did not sleep that night. He sat at the boarding house window with the children's drawings spread across the desk. Before dawn, the father from the first family pounded on his door. His youngest, a boy of seven, was gone. The bed was empty. The back door stood open. A neighbor had seen the boy walking barefoot toward the temple road, eyes half-shut, moving like he already knew the way. Edmund grabbed his coat and the flashlight and ran with the father toward the swamp. The temple sat quiet in the gray light. Edmund found small footprints in the mud leading through the collapsed wall and stopping at the edge of the interior pond. The water was black and still. The father dropped to his knees and shouted the boy's name. Edmund pulled him back and told him to search the trees. Then Edmund found an old fisherman's harpoon leaning against the outer wall, left behind by someone long dead. He waded into the pond with it, dragging the shaft along the bottom in slow arcs. On the third pass, the point caught cloth. He hauled up a sodden nightshirt, then an arm, then the boy. The child was cold but breathing. On the child's tongue Edmund found a soft pale disc, half-dissolved, flecked with brown specks. He recognized the shape from the ceremonies. The cult leader had been feeding it to the families as communion. It was laced with swamp mushrooms. Edmund carried the boy out of the temple and did not take him home. If the dreams pulled the child back tonight, the father could not stop him. Edmund crossed the low ground to a stranded riverboat wreck he had passed on his first walk out. He climbed inside the hull, laid the boy on a dry bench, and sent the father to fetch the mother and dry clothes. Then he sat with the child and waited for the drug to pass. By midmorning the boy woke, confused but whole. He remembered walking. He remembered the water calling him by his dead brother's voice. Edmund had the wafer wrapped in a handkerchief in his pocket. He had the boy alive. He had a father who would swear in front of anyone what he had seen. The fraud case was no longer only a fraud case. The cult leader had been drugging his believers into dreams and drawing their children toward the pond. Edmund told the father to keep the boy on the wreck until nightfall and to trust no one from the ceremonies. Then he started back toward town. He would not go to the sheriff yet. The other two families had children too, and the next dream was coming.

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