Fawn

Fawn's Arc

13 Chapters

Fawn's dream is staying out of trouble and being loving and devoted to his lifetime partner.

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by @DebW
Chapter 1 comic
Chapter 1

Fawn paced near the fence, eyes fixed on the road. Spot would be home any minute now from Storyland Canada. The Easter Bunny had picked her because she was kind — not just to Fawn, but to everyone. That thought made his chest feel warm and tight at the same time. He'd tried to make everything perfect for her return. A mound of fresh hay sat near the stone outcrop where they used to sit as youngsters. The necklace — the one with the heart that caught the light just right — lay nestled in his hoof. He'd kept it there all afternoon, turning it over and over. Staying out of trouble was harder when Spot wasn't around to anchor him. A flash of movement on the road made him freeze. But it was just a truck passing by, not her at all. Fawn's stomach growled. He could smell something from the Hansens' house — something warm and salty. French fries, maybe. His body started to turn before his mind caught up. Wait. No. Spot deserved to come home to him here, not to an empty fence and another mess to clean up. He gripped the necklace tighter and sat down hard on the stone. His hooves stayed planted. The smell faded, and he was still there, waiting. For the first time in longer than he could remember, wanting to be somewhere mattered more than wanting to chase something else.

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Chapter 2

The smell hit him first — salt and grease, sharp in the cool air. Fawn turned his head toward the sound of voices and saw the Hansens walking from their house, carrying something in their hands. His body went still. The necklace pressed against his hoof, warm from being held so long. Mrs. Hansen stumbled on a root near the vegetable stand they kept by the roadside. The basket flew from her hands. Fries scattered across the dirt at Fawn's feet — golden, still steaming, right there. His nose dropped before he could think. The first fry was in his mouth, then three more, then he wasn't counting anymore. Salt burst on his tongue. His hooves moved on their own, pushing fries toward his mouth as fast as they'd go. A laugh cut through the fog. Fawn looked up, a fry hanging from his lips. Spot stood at the edge of the flower beds that lined the road, still wearing her Easter ribbon. She wasn't angry. She was laughing — actually laughing — at the sight of him covered in salt and grease. But her eyes held something else too. That tired look he knew by heart, the one that said she'd seen this before and would see it again. Fawn stepped back from the fries, his chest tight. The necklace had fallen into the dirt beside the red box. He picked it up and walked to Spot, not bothering to wipe his face. "I waited for you," he said. "I did. I stayed right there until—" She touched his nose, quiet. The laugh was gone now. She knew he'd tried. That mattered. But they both knew trying wasn't the same as succeeding, and the space between those two things was where they lived.

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Chapter 3

Fawn walked Spot back to the barn, the necklace still in his hoof. She didn't say much on the way, just touched his shoulder once and smiled. That smile made something settle in his chest, but it also made him want to do more. He spent the next hour running between tasks. First he hauled a fresh bale to her stall, the kind with clover mixed in that she liked best. Then he scrubbed the water trough until his hooves ached, dumped the old water, and filled it fresh from the pump. The washtub took longest — he had to drag it from behind the barn, rinse it twice, then work up a mountain of soapy bubbles the way Spot loved. By the time he finished, his legs were shaking and sweat dripped from his nose. Spot found him sitting beside the tub, too tired to stand. She looked at the hay, the clean water, the bubbles spilling over the edges. Her face softened. She stepped into the tub and sank down with a sigh that sounded like relief. Fawn wanted to tell her about the letter he'd written too, the one with pressed flowers he'd tucked under her hay, but his throat felt tight. He'd done it. He'd actually finished something without getting distracted halfway through. "You didn't have to do all this," Spot said quietly. Fawn shook his head. He did have to. Not because she expected it, but because for once the part of him that loved her had won the race against every other impulse pulling him away. The feeling wouldn't last — he knew that. But right now, watching her close her eyes in the warm bubbles, he'd proven to himself that it could happen at all.

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Chapter 4

Fawn woke the next morning with his muscles still sore from yesterday's work. Spot was already up, moving around her stall. He watched her step over to the fresh hay he'd brought, the pile he'd tucked the letter under. His heart picked up speed. Any moment now she'd find it. But Spot didn't reach for the hay. She turned and walked past it, heading out toward the pasture. Fawn stood there, confused. Maybe she'd find it later. He wandered outside and spotted something near the big boulder in the corner of the field — a bright pack of gum sitting on the flat stone surface, and beside it, his letter. The pressed flowers were still visible through the folded paper. Mrs. Hansen sat nearby on a wooden stool, holding that fancy letter opener she used for her mail, turning the envelope over in her hands like she was deciding whether to open it. Fawn's stomach dropped. She must have found it this morning while tidying Spot's stall. He moved closer, slow and careful. Mrs. Hansen looked up and smiled at him, then set the letter down unopened. "This yours?" she asked. Fawn nodded, his throat tight. She picked up the letter opener, slid it under the flap, then stopped. "Actually, I think someone else should read this first." She stood and walked back toward the barn, leaving the letter on the boulder. Fawn stared at the envelope. It was still sealed, still whole. Mrs. Hansen hadn't read it. She'd figured out it wasn't meant for her. He picked it up carefully and carried it back to Spot's stall, this time placing it right on top of her water trough where she couldn't miss it. The letter had survived being found by the wrong person. Now he just had to trust that Spot would find it herself. He'd done what he could — the rest wasn't in his control anymore, and somehow that felt okay.

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Chapter 5

Fawn watched from the barn doorway as Spot walked toward her water trough. His heart hammered in his chest. The letter sat right on top where she couldn't miss it, the pressed flowers still visible through the paper. She stopped at the trough and tilted her head. She picked up the letter carefully, turned it over, then walked away from the barn. Fawn's stomach twisted. He wanted to follow, to see her face when she read it, but something held him back. This wasn't about him watching — it was about her receiving something meant only for her. He saw her settle under the wooden gazebo near the greenhouse, surrounded by terracotta pots full of early spring flowers. She unfolded the letter and went still. Fawn waited, forcing himself to stay put. Minutes passed like hours. Then Spot stood and walked back toward the barn, and Fawn's breath caught. Her face wasn't tired. It wasn't the patient, worn expression he knew by heart. She looked bright, almost fizzy, like cold orange pop on a hot day — something sparkling and alive that hadn't been there before. She met his eyes and smiled, really smiled, and held the letter against her chest. "You meant all that?" she asked. Fawn nodded, unable to speak. Spot stepped closer and touched his shoulder. "Then I believe you," she said quietly. Something shifted between them, something Fawn could feel but not name. He'd wanted her to read it, to know what he couldn't always show. Now she did. And instead of doubt or weariness, she'd chosen to trust the words he'd left behind. That trust felt fragile and huge at once, like something he'd have to protect every single day going forward.

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Chapter 6

Fawn stayed close to Spot for the rest of the morning, helping her carry hay and refill the feed bins. He felt lighter than he had in weeks, like the letter had lifted something heavy off both of them. But around noon, Mrs. Hansen called Spot over to the greenhouse. Fawn followed without thinking, stopping at the greenhouse entrance where clear plastic stretched over a wooden frame. Mrs. Hansen knelt beside a wooden shovel, pointing at a hole in the dirt floor. Clay pots lay beside it, covered in patterns that looked like grain stalks. "Someone farmed here before us," Mrs. Hansen said quietly. "Look at these." Spot leaned closer, studying the pots. Fawn felt something stir in his chest — whoever made those had cared about this place the way Mrs. Hansen did now. The way he was learning to care about Spot. He wandered outside while they kept talking. Near the back of the greenhouse stood an old iron archway, ivy growing thick over the metal. The archway led nowhere now, just stood there like it was waiting for something that never came. Fawn touched the cold iron and understood suddenly — someone had stayed here once, built things, planted things, loved this ground enough to leave marks behind. That person was gone now, but the archway remained. Like the letter he'd left for Spot. Like the choices he kept making to stay instead of running after the next smell of food. Spot found him there a few minutes later. She didn't say anything, just stood beside him looking at the archway. Fawn realized he'd been trying to prove himself through tasks and letters, but what mattered was this — showing up, staying present, being here when she needed him. The ancient farmer had loved this land fiercely enough to leave beauty behind. Fawn could love Spot that way too, not through grand gestures but through the small choice to stay, made over and over until it became who he was. He reached for her hoof and held it, and she didn't pull away.

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Chapter 7

Fawn was still holding Spot's hoof when the ground inside the greenhouse gave a low groan. Mrs. Hansen stepped back fast. The dirt floor sagged, then dropped away in a slow, sickening slide. Clay pots tipped into the dark. Fawn bolted to the doorway. A wide hole now opened where Mrs. Hansen had been kneeling. Loose earth piled around its edges in a rough mound. Down in the hole, old stone steps showed through the dust, leading further than Fawn could see. Mr. Hansen came running. He stopped at the lip and stared. "It's not a farm," he said quietly. "Not just a farm." Mrs. Hansen knelt by the edge, brushing dirt from a piece of folded parchment caught in a root. Faded writing. Old seals. A list of names that stretched back further than any of them. Fawn's first thought was to run. Find Spot, hide, pretend he hadn't seen. Old habit. But Spot was right there beside him, watching Mrs. Hansen's hands shake over the paper. Fawn stayed. He pressed his shoulder against Spot's and didn't move. Mrs. Hansen looked up. "Honestly," she said, "I think this place was waiting for someone to come back." Mr. Hansen put a hand on her shoulder. He didn't speak. He didn't need to. The glass walls above the hole caught the afternoon light, holding steady over the broken floor. The greenhouse hadn't fallen. It stood like a roof over something much older. Fawn understood then that the land had a name before the Hansens, and his staying — small as it was — was part of how a place got loved enough to keep.

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Chapter 8

Mrs. Hansen carried the parchment out of the greenhouse and laid it flat on an old wooden desk pulled into the yard. The afternoon light fell across the faded names. Mr. Hansen leaned in close. Fawn followed Spot to a hammock strung between two trees and settled beside her to watch. Mrs. Hansen read the names aloud, slow and careful. Halfway down the list, Spot went still. Her ear twitched once. Fawn felt it before he understood it — the small shift in her body that meant something had landed. "Read that one again," Spot said. Mrs. Hansen looked up. She read it again. Spot stepped down from the hammock and walked to the desk. From under the lace of her collar she drew out a ring on a thin cord — a heavy gold stone set in worked silver. She laid it beside the parchment. "My grandmother's," Spot said. "She told me the name once. I didn't think it meant a place." She touched the line on the parchment with the edge of her hoof. "It meant here." Fawn stayed in the hammock and watched her. He had known her whole life and had never asked. The thought sat heavy and quiet in him. Spot looked back at him, and her tired face was there, and something else underneath it — older than him, older than the barn. He climbed down and went to stand beside her at the desk. He didn't speak. He just stayed.

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Chapter 9

Spot picked up the ring from the desk and looked at Fawn. She tipped her head toward the garden shed at the edge of the yard. Fawn followed her past the smiling scarecrow planted between the rows, its wooden arms wide. Spot stopped beside it and turned to face him. "In here," she said, and pushed open the shed door. Inside it was quiet. Spot set the ring on an upturned crate. Beside it she laid a small chip of golden stone — a shard that had broken from the band long ago, she said, and she had kept it in her pocket all this time. "One promise," she said. "Just one. Not about fries. Not about staying out of trouble. About this." She touched the ring. "You keep it safe. You don't lose it. You don't trade it for anything. Ever." Fawn opened his mouth and the easy yes was already there, the way it always was. He stopped it. He looked at her tired face, and the shard, and the ring that had been her grandmother's before this place had a name he knew. "I promise," he said. Slow. Once. He picked up the ring and closed his hoof around it tight. "If I break this, I lose you. I know." Spot watched him a long moment. Then she nodded — small, settled. "Then it's yours to carry," she said. She pressed the shard into his other hoof and closed his fingers over it. The door stayed open behind them. Fawn stood very still, holding both pieces, and felt the weight of a thing he could not eat his way out of.

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Chapter 10

Fawn left the shed with the ring heavy in his hoof. He could not carry it loose all day. He found an old carved jewelry box tucked on a shelf inside the shed, its lid polished, its corners bright with brass. He set the ring and the golden shard inside and clicked the lid shut. Then he carried the box out to the big round bales near the barn and pushed it deep between two of them, where no hoof could knock it and no breeze could reach. Safe. He patted the hay flat and stepped back. The trouble started before he was halfway across the yard. The wind shifted. The smell hit him like a wall — hot oil, salt, the soft sting of vinegar. The red and white chip truck had parked itself near the road, awning out, window open. Steam curled from its little chimney. A painted french-fry sign stood propped on the gravel beside it, grinning, one cartoon arm pointing the way in. A trail of dropped fries lay scattered from the sign to the truck window, gold against the dirt. Fawn's hooves moved before his head did. One step. Two. His mouth was already open. He stopped. He made himself stop. He thought of the box wedged in the hay, and the tired face that had handed him the ring, and the promise he had said only once. He turned his back on the truck. He walked the long way around the barn — past the trough, past the scarecrow — so the smell could not find him. He did it again at noon. He did it again at dusk. When the truck rumbled away, Fawn went straight to the bales. He dug. His hoof closed on the carved box. He opened it. The ring sat where he had left it, the shard beside it, both shining. He carried the box to the shed and set it on the crate. He had kept his word for one whole day. It was the smallest, hugest thing he had ever done — and tomorrow the smell would come back, and he would have to do it all again.

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Chapter 11

Morning came gray and cold. Fawn walked to the bales with his head high. He had done it once. He could do it again. But when he rounded the corner, the hay was already wrong. Loose straw lay flung in a wide, messy fan, gold scattered across the dirt like something had been clawed open in a hurry. Spot sat on the wooden bench beyond the bales. The carved box was open on her lap. Her hooves rested on the lid. Inside, the velvet was bare. No ring. Only the golden shard, lonely in the corner. Fawn's chest went hollow. He stepped closer. "Spot. I put it there. I swear I put it there." She did not look up. "I know you did." Her voice was quiet. "I came to find you. The box was already dug up." She closed the lid with a small click. "The ring is gone, Fawn." He dropped to his knees in the scattered straw and dug. He dug until his hooves ached. Hay flew. Dirt flew. The topaz did not appear. Somewhere between dusk and dawn, someone or something had found his hiding place. The one promise he had said only once was broken before breakfast. Spot stood. She tucked the box under her arm and walked past him without a word. She did not slam anything. She did not cry. That was worse. Fawn stayed on his knees in the ruined hay, and knew he would have to find the ring himself, or lose her for good.

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Chapter 12

Fawn was still on his knees in the scattered hay when the barn door creaked open. Mrs. Hansen stepped inside. Her boots were dusty. Her jacket was buttoned against the cold. In one hand she held a small paper form. In the other, pinched between her fingers, was the topaz ring. "I found it this morning," she said. "On the kitchen counter, sitting out like it was nothing." Her voice was plain and steady. "I took it into town. Had it looked at by the jeweler under the sign with all the metalwork." She held out the appraisal slip. Numbers and neat checkmarks filled the lines. Fawn could not read most of it. He only saw the gold of the stone catching the gray light. "Honestly, Fawn, it's worth more than this farm." Mrs. Hansen's mouth softened. "But that's not why she gave it to you. You know that." She placed the ring in his hoof and closed his fingers over it. "Spot's outside. By the bench. Go." Fawn stood. The ring was warm from her hand. He did not run. He walked, because running was the old him, and the old him had already lost this once. Spot was waiting on the bench where she had left him. He opened his hoof. The topaz sat there, whole. She looked at the ring. She looked at him. She did not take it back. "Hold it," she said quietly. "Just hold it for now." And Fawn understood. The ring was found. The promise was not. That part, he still had to earn.

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Chapter 13

Fawn sat beside Spot on the bench with the ring closed in his hoof. The wind moved through the wooden chimes above the barn door. Each note was small and clean. He had carried so many things wrong in his life. He held this one carefully. Spot looked out toward the fence post by the gate. A string of amber beads hung there, glowing in the gray light. "My grandmother's," she said. "I put it out this morning." She paused. "You walk past that post every day on the way to the feed bags. Every day, Fawn. For a whole season. Don't touch it. Don't move it. Don't trade it for anything. Then I'll believe you." He felt the old pull already, the part of him that grabbed before it thought. He pressed the ring tighter. The chimes knocked softly above them. He understood. This was not one big choice. This was a thousand small ones, lined up like beads on a string. "Okay," Fawn said. Just that. He did not promise loud. He did not swear. He only said the word and meant it. The season passed slowly. Fawn walked past the amber beads every morning and every night. Some days his hooves itched. Some days he hummed to the chimes instead and kept moving. The beads stayed on the post. The ring stayed in the carved box, checked and returned, checked and returned. On the last cold morning, Spot found him at the gate. She took the amber down. She took the ring from his hoof. Then she put both into his hooves together and closed his fingers over them. "Yours to hold," she said. "For good." Fawn did not chase anything that day. He stayed. And that, finally, was the promise kept.

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