Fawn

Fawn's Arc

6 Chapters

Fawn's dream is staying out of trouble and being loving and devoted to his lifetime partner.

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by @DebW
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Chapter 1

Fawn paced near the fence, eyes fixed on the road. Spot would be home any minute now from Storyland Canada. The Easter Bunny had picked her because she was kind — not just to Fawn, but to everyone. That thought made his chest feel warm and tight at the same time. He'd tried to make everything perfect for her return. A mound of fresh hay sat near the stone outcrop where they used to sit as youngsters. The necklace — the one with the heart that caught the light just right — lay nestled in his hoof. He'd kept it there all afternoon, turning it over and over. Staying out of trouble was harder when Spot wasn't around to anchor him. A flash of movement on the road made him freeze. But it was just a truck passing by, not her at all. Fawn's stomach growled. He could smell something from the Hansens' house — something warm and salty. French fries, maybe. His body started to turn before his mind caught up. Wait. No. Spot deserved to come home to him here, not to an empty fence and another mess to clean up. He gripped the necklace tighter and sat down hard on the stone. His hooves stayed planted. The smell faded, and he was still there, waiting. For the first time in longer than he could remember, wanting to be somewhere mattered more than wanting to chase something else.

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Chapter 2

The smell hit him first — salt and grease, sharp in the cool air. Fawn turned his head toward the sound of voices and saw the Hansens walking from their house, carrying something in their hands. His body went still. The necklace pressed against his hoof, warm from being held so long. Mrs. Hansen stumbled on a root near the vegetable stand they kept by the roadside. The basket flew from her hands. Fries scattered across the dirt at Fawn's feet — golden, still steaming, right there. His nose dropped before he could think. The first fry was in his mouth, then three more, then he wasn't counting anymore. Salt burst on his tongue. His hooves moved on their own, pushing fries toward his mouth as fast as they'd go. A laugh cut through the fog. Fawn looked up, a fry hanging from his lips. Spot stood at the edge of the flower beds that lined the road, still wearing her Easter ribbon. She wasn't angry. She was laughing — actually laughing — at the sight of him covered in salt and grease. But her eyes held something else too. That tired look he knew by heart, the one that said she'd seen this before and would see it again. Fawn stepped back from the fries, his chest tight. The necklace had fallen into the dirt beside the red box. He picked it up and walked to Spot, not bothering to wipe his face. "I waited for you," he said. "I did. I stayed right there until—" She touched his nose, quiet. The laugh was gone now. She knew he'd tried. That mattered. But they both knew trying wasn't the same as succeeding, and the space between those two things was where they lived.

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Chapter 3

Fawn walked Spot back to the barn, the necklace still in his hoof. She didn't say much on the way, just touched his shoulder once and smiled. That smile made something settle in his chest, but it also made him want to do more. He spent the next hour running between tasks. First he hauled a fresh bale to her stall, the kind with clover mixed in that she liked best. Then he scrubbed the water trough until his hooves ached, dumped the old water, and filled it fresh from the pump. The washtub took longest — he had to drag it from behind the barn, rinse it twice, then work up a mountain of soapy bubbles the way Spot loved. By the time he finished, his legs were shaking and sweat dripped from his nose. Spot found him sitting beside the tub, too tired to stand. She looked at the hay, the clean water, the bubbles spilling over the edges. Her face softened. She stepped into the tub and sank down with a sigh that sounded like relief. Fawn wanted to tell her about the letter he'd written too, the one with pressed flowers he'd tucked under her hay, but his throat felt tight. He'd done it. He'd actually finished something without getting distracted halfway through. "You didn't have to do all this," Spot said quietly. Fawn shook his head. He did have to. Not because she expected it, but because for once the part of him that loved her had won the race against every other impulse pulling him away. The feeling wouldn't last — he knew that. But right now, watching her close her eyes in the warm bubbles, he'd proven to himself that it could happen at all.

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Chapter 4

Fawn woke the next morning with his muscles still sore from yesterday's work. Spot was already up, moving around her stall. He watched her step over to the fresh hay he'd brought, the pile he'd tucked the letter under. His heart picked up speed. Any moment now she'd find it. But Spot didn't reach for the hay. She turned and walked past it, heading out toward the pasture. Fawn stood there, confused. Maybe she'd find it later. He wandered outside and spotted something near the big boulder in the corner of the field — a bright pack of gum sitting on the flat stone surface, and beside it, his letter. The pressed flowers were still visible through the folded paper. Mrs. Hansen sat nearby on a wooden stool, holding that fancy letter opener she used for her mail, turning the envelope over in her hands like she was deciding whether to open it. Fawn's stomach dropped. She must have found it this morning while tidying Spot's stall. He moved closer, slow and careful. Mrs. Hansen looked up and smiled at him, then set the letter down unopened. "This yours?" she asked. Fawn nodded, his throat tight. She picked up the letter opener, slid it under the flap, then stopped. "Actually, I think someone else should read this first." She stood and walked back toward the barn, leaving the letter on the boulder. Fawn stared at the envelope. It was still sealed, still whole. Mrs. Hansen hadn't read it. She'd figured out it wasn't meant for her. He picked it up carefully and carried it back to Spot's stall, this time placing it right on top of her water trough where she couldn't miss it. The letter had survived being found by the wrong person. Now he just had to trust that Spot would find it herself. He'd done what he could — the rest wasn't in his control anymore, and somehow that felt okay.

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Chapter 5

Fawn watched from the barn doorway as Spot walked toward her water trough. His heart hammered in his chest. The letter sat right on top where she couldn't miss it, the pressed flowers still visible through the paper. She stopped at the trough and tilted her head. She picked up the letter carefully, turned it over, then walked away from the barn. Fawn's stomach twisted. He wanted to follow, to see her face when she read it, but something held him back. This wasn't about him watching — it was about her receiving something meant only for her. He saw her settle under the wooden gazebo near the greenhouse, surrounded by terracotta pots full of early spring flowers. She unfolded the letter and went still. Fawn waited, forcing himself to stay put. Minutes passed like hours. Then Spot stood and walked back toward the barn, and Fawn's breath caught. Her face wasn't tired. It wasn't the patient, worn expression he knew by heart. She looked bright, almost fizzy, like cold orange pop on a hot day — something sparkling and alive that hadn't been there before. She met his eyes and smiled, really smiled, and held the letter against her chest. "You meant all that?" she asked. Fawn nodded, unable to speak. Spot stepped closer and touched his shoulder. "Then I believe you," she said quietly. Something shifted between them, something Fawn could feel but not name. He'd wanted her to read it, to know what he couldn't always show. Now she did. And instead of doubt or weariness, she'd chosen to trust the words he'd left behind. That trust felt fragile and huge at once, like something he'd have to protect every single day going forward.

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Chapter 6

Fawn stayed close to Spot for the rest of the morning, helping her carry hay and refill the feed bins. He felt lighter than he had in weeks, like the letter had lifted something heavy off both of them. But around noon, Mrs. Hansen called Spot over to the greenhouse. Fawn followed without thinking, stopping at the greenhouse entrance where clear plastic stretched over a wooden frame. Mrs. Hansen knelt beside a wooden shovel, pointing at a hole in the dirt floor. Clay pots lay beside it, covered in patterns that looked like grain stalks. "Someone farmed here before us," Mrs. Hansen said quietly. "Look at these." Spot leaned closer, studying the pots. Fawn felt something stir in his chest — whoever made those had cared about this place the way Mrs. Hansen did now. The way he was learning to care about Spot. He wandered outside while they kept talking. Near the back of the greenhouse stood an old iron archway, ivy growing thick over the metal. The archway led nowhere now, just stood there like it was waiting for something that never came. Fawn touched the cold iron and understood suddenly — someone had stayed here once, built things, planted things, loved this ground enough to leave marks behind. That person was gone now, but the archway remained. Like the letter he'd left for Spot. Like the choices he kept making to stay instead of running after the next smell of food. Spot found him there a few minutes later. She didn't say anything, just stood beside him looking at the archway. Fawn realized he'd been trying to prove himself through tasks and letters, but what mattered was this — showing up, staying present, being here when she needed him. The ancient farmer had loved this land fiercely enough to leave beauty behind. Fawn could love Spot that way too, not through grand gestures but through the small choice to stay, made over and over until it became who he was. He reached for her hoof and held it, and she didn't pull away.

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