Gedda Foss

Gedda Foss's Arc

6 Chapters

Gedda Foss's dream is restoring his mother's pottery shack into a thriving artisan workshop..

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by @Xidan
Chapter 1 comic
Chapter 1

The kiln died at midnight. Gedda felt the heat fade through the walls of the shack, a slow drop that made his chest tight. He pulled open the firebox door and stared at the dark bricks inside. The vase he'd been firing sat half-finished in the chamber, its glaze frozen in place. He'd spent two weeks rebuilding the firebox seal. Now the whole thing had cracked apart again. He sat on the floor and sketched the problem on a scrap of paper. The crack ran through three joints. He'd need a mason who knew old kilns. The only person he could think of was the girl from the village who fixed things. She'd helped repair the mill wheel last summer and asked everyone who owned it, why it broke, what they planned to do with it after. Gedda had watched her work from a distance. She never stopped talking. He looked at the vase on the wheel outside. The pattern had taken him four tries to get right. His mother would have done it in one. The clay was drying too fast now without the kiln's warmth nearby. He'd have to start over unless he got the fire going again soon. His stomach hurt thinking about explaining the project to someone. He couldn't even tell her it was his mother's shack without her asking where his mother was now. Gedda stood and walked to the door. The girl would come if he sent for her. She'd fix the kiln because that's what she did. And she'd ask questions because that's what she did too. He picked up his sketching paper and drew a simple message: kiln broken, need help. He couldn't hide the workshop forever if he wanted it to work. His hand shook as he folded the paper. This was choosing to fail in front of someone instead of alone.

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Chapter 2

She arrived two days later with a canvas bag slung over her shoulder. Gedda met her at the door and pointed toward the kiln, but she'd already stepped past him into the shack. Her bag hit the floor with a clang before he could motion for her to wait outside. The girl knelt by her tools and pulled out wrenches, setting them in a line on the floorboards. The smell rose from the shelves behind her—his mother's glazes, still sealed in their jars after all this time. The girl's nose wrinkled. She turned and looked at the table against the wall, covered in finished bowls and half-glazed cups. "This is a workshop," she said. "Why does it smell like copper and ash if the kiln's been cold for days?" Her eyes moved from the pottery to Gedda's face. "Whose work is this?" Gedda's chest went tight. He reached for the clay mound on the bench and grabbed the notebook beside it. His hands shook as he opened it and drew quickly—a simple sketch of a woman at a wheel, her hands shaping a tall vase. He wrote beneath it: my mother's. He turned the page toward the girl. She studied it, then looked back at the shelves. "Where is she now?" Gedda's pencil hovered over the paper. He couldn't draw that answer. He set the notebook down and pointed at the kiln instead. The girl watched him for a long moment, then nodded. "Alright," she said. She stood and walked to the kiln, running her hand along the cracked firebox. "I can fix this. But I'll need to come back tomorrow with more mortar. And I'll need to move some of those jars to reach the back wall." She looked at him. "Is that alright?" Gedda nodded. The tightness in his chest loosened slightly. She wasn't asking about his mother anymore. She was asking about the kiln. He picked up the notebook again and drew a simple thumbs-up. The girl smiled. "Good. I'll be here at dawn." She packed her tools and left. Gedda stood alone in the shack, staring at the sketch of his mother. He'd let someone inside. The workshop wasn't secret anymore. But the kiln would work again.

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Chapter 3

She came back at dawn with mortar and wire brushes. Gedda watched from the doorway as she set her tools beside the kiln and rolled up her sleeves. The cracked firebox needed clearing before she could patch it. She reached inside and pulled out the half-finished vase, turning it in her hands. The clay had dried unevenly where the heat had stopped mid-fire. She looked at him. "Should I move this somewhere safe?" Gedda's throat went tight. The vase had been inside the kiln for three weeks. He'd left it there on purpose—half-glazed, half-fired, frozen in the moment his mother had last touched it. If the girl moved it, she'd make space for the kiln to work again. If she moved it, the workshop would start making new things. He stepped forward and took the vase from her hands. It felt heavier than he remembered. He set it on the bench beside his mother's other unfinished pieces and pointed back at the kiln. The girl nodded and knelt down with her brush. She worked quickly, scraping out ash and old mortar. Gedda stood at the bench, staring at the vase. The glaze had cracked where it dried too fast. His mother would have known how to save it. She would have smoothed the cracks and brought it back into the fire at the right temperature. But she wasn't here. The workshop was his now, whether he wanted it or not. He picked up a scraping tool and began smoothing the glaze cracks himself. His hands shook, but he kept going. By midday, the girl had finished patching the firebox. She stood and wiped her hands on her work pants. "It needs to cure overnight. Tomorrow we can fire it." She walked over to the bench and looked at the vase he'd been working on. "That's good repair work," she said. "Your mother teach you that?" Gedda shook his head. He picked up his notebook and wrote: I watched her. The girl read it and smiled. "That counts," she said. She gathered her tools and left. Gedda stayed at the bench, holding the vase. Tomorrow the kiln would work again. Tomorrow he'd have to decide if he could finish what his mother started, or if he'd keep her work frozen forever.

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Chapter 4

The kiln sat silent in the corner, waiting. Gedda stood at the workbench with the vase between his hands. The repairs he'd made yesterday had dried overnight. The cracks in the glaze were smoothed over, ready for firing. The girl had said the firebox was ready. All he had to do was load the vase and light the fire. He opened the kiln door and placed the vase inside. His hands didn't shake this time. He arranged kindling in the firebox, struck the flint, and watched the first flames catch. The fire spread quickly, filling the chamber with heat. He fed it slowly, adjusting the airflow the way he'd watched his mother do a hundred times. The temperature climbed. The glaze began to shine. But halfway through the firing, he saw it—a hairline crack spreading across the base where the willow pattern curved. The repair hadn't held. The vase was breaking. Gedda reached for the damper to stop the fire, then stopped. His mother's work would stay broken if he pulled it out now. But if he kept firing, the crack might spread until the whole piece shattered. He stood there, hand hovering over the damper, watching the crack creep wider. Then he let go and stepped back. He fed more wood into the firebox and brought the temperature higher. The crack spread through the willow branches, but the glaze melted into the gap, sealing it with streaks of darker green. The pattern changed. It wasn't what his mother had planned, but it held together. When the firing finished, Gedda opened the kiln and lifted out the vase. The moss-green glaze had settled thick over the carved willow base, and the crack had become part of the pattern—a dark line running through the branches like a scar. It wasn't her work anymore. It was his. He set it on the shelf beside her other pieces and looked around the workshop. The girl's canvas tool bag still sat in the corner where she'd left it, wrenches and brushes spilling out across the floor. The kiln ticked as it cooled. The shed felt different now—not frozen, not waiting. Just working.

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Chapter 5

Gedda stood in the center of the workshop the next morning, looking at the shelves his mother had built. They held her finished work—bowls and cups and vases she'd made years ago. But they also held empty space where new pieces should go. The vase he'd fired yesterday sat among them now, changed but whole. He started moving things. The cooling racks went against the far wall. The tool bag the girl had left went on a hook by the door. He dragged the pottery wheel out from behind a stack of clay bins and set it near the window where the light was best. His mother had worked there before, but the wheel had sat unused so long the pedal stuck when he tested it. He worked it loose with his foot until it spun smooth again. Gedda pulled a block of clay from the bin and cut off a piece. He centered it on the wheel and started the pedal moving. The clay rose under his hands, wobbly at first, then steadier. He wasn't copying anything his mother had made. He was just shaping what the clay wanted to become—a small pot with a wide belly and a narrow neck. When it was done, he set it on the drying shelf and looked at it. It wasn't perfect, but it was his. He cleaned his hands and walked back to the shelf where his mother's work sat beside the vase with the dark crack running through it. The new pot would go there too, once it was fired. Not because it matched her work, but because it came after it. The workshop didn't need to stay frozen anymore. It needed to keep making things.

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Chapter 6

Gedda woke before dawn and lit the lamp by his bedroll. He'd slept in the workshop again, too tired to walk back to the room he rented in the village. The shelves with his mother's work caught the lamplight—her bowls, her cups, the vase he'd changed. His new pot sat on the drying rack, waiting. He stood and walked to the back corner where his mother kept her unfinished pieces. He'd avoided this shelf since she died—the works she'd left incomplete felt too private to touch. But now he pulled down a round vase with bands of color waiting for detail work. The base coat was perfect, smooth gradients from purple to cream to blue. His mother had sketched the pattern she wanted in charcoal on paper beside it—waves and flowers and stars, flowing together like water. Gedda set the vase on his work table and tried to trace one of the flowers with his brush. The line came out shaky, nothing like the confident curves in her sketch. He tried again. Worse. He set the brush down and looked at the vase, at the charcoal sketch, at his own clumsy marks. His mother had made this kind of work look easy, her hand moving across clay like she was simply revealing what was already there. But when Gedda tried to follow her path, the clay fought him. He picked up the vase and carried it back to the shelf in the corner. Some things she'd started, he realized, were meant to stay hers. He couldn't finish her work by copying her lines. He could only keep making his own, clumsy and honest, until his hands learned their own way forward. He turned toward the small table by the door—the one piece of furniture his mother had brought from her own childhood. On it sat a pot Gedda had made when he was eight years old, decorated with symbols he'd copied from a book about magic. His mother had fired it for him and set it there herself, even though the walls were uneven and the glaze had cracked in a dozen places. She'd called it his best work and left it where anyone entering the workshop would see it first. Gedda walked over and picked it up carefully. The weight felt familiar in his hands, the rough texture where his small fingers had pressed too hard. He remembered the day after she'd fired it—a man from the village had come to commission work and seen the pot. He'd laughed and asked if this was the kind of quality he could expect. His mother had gone quiet, and Gedda had felt the shame burn through him. The man left without ordering anything. After that, Gedda stopped showing anyone what he made. He only worked when no one could see, only tried when failure would be private. Gedda set the pot back on the table and looked at it in the lamplight. The cracks caught the glow, turning the broken glaze into a map of branching lines. His mother had kept it there for sixteen years, even after he'd stopped making things, even after he'd learned to hide. She'd never moved it. Never put something better in its place. He'd thought she kept it out of kindness, but standing here now, he understood different. She'd kept it there because it was his—clumsy and cracked and honest. The same reason his new pot would go on her shelf tomorrow, once it was fired. Not because it was perfect, but because he'd made it, and that was enough.

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