Nessa Rootmark

Nessa Rootmark's Arc

9 Chapters

Nessa Rootmark's dream is becoming the greatest archer in the forest clan's history.

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by @IvoryStallion
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Chapter 1

Nessa was halfway through her first slow practice when the stranger walked into the clearing. She held her draw, fingers trembling against the string, and watched him scan the gathered archers. He wore leather armor marked with symbols she didn't recognize. His voice carried across the practice ground when he spoke. He pulled a golden bell from his pack and mounted it on a wooden frame near the far treeline. Birds were etched across its surface. The frame bore tally marks—hundreds of them. "I challenge any archer here to match me," he said. "Three shots at distance. The windsock hung beyond your practice grounds will serve." He rang the bell once, and the sound rolled through the forest. Nessa's rival stepped forward from the gathering near the clan's massive treehouse. The crowd parted for him. He moved with that familiar calm, like he'd already decided how this would end. Nessa knew she should let him take it. She'd just committed to slow practice, to fixing what was broken. But her hands were already lowering her bow, her feet already carrying her toward the stranger. She stepped into the space beside her rival before anyone else could speak. The stranger smiled. Her rival glanced at her—no surprise, no judgment, just recognition. The choice was made. Nessa had abandoned her first real practice in four losses to chase another contest she wasn't ready for.

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Chapter 2

The stranger turned to face them both. Up close, Nessa saw the frame more clearly. Tally marks covered every surface—hundreds of them, carved deep into the wood. Each one looked deliberate, like it had earned its place. Her rival's eyes locked on the marks before Nessa understood what they meant. Her rival took a step back. Not surrender—just distance. He looked at the stranger, then at Nessa, then walked toward the wooden platform wrapped in flowering vines where he'd been standing before. The crowd shifted, uncertain. Nessa felt the weight of what she'd stepped into settle on her shoulders. Each mark on that frame was a defeated archer. Each one had believed they could win. The stranger pulled three arrows from his quiver and planted them in the ground between them. "You stepped forward first," he said. "You shoot first." He gestured toward the windsock in the distance, barely visible through the trees. The wind caught it, spinning it east. Nessa's hands reached for her bow before her mind caught up. This was the pattern. This was the flaw. She was already thinking about the first shot landing, about the stranger's expression when it did, about proving she belonged here. She stopped. Her hands stayed at her sides. The stranger waited. The crowd murmured. Nessa looked at the bell frame, at all those marks, and understood what her rival had seen immediately—this wasn't a contest she could win by being fast. She turned to the stranger and said the hardest words she'd ever spoken: "I'm not ready." The crowd went silent. The stranger's smile faded into something that looked almost like respect. Nessa walked back to her practice target, the one she'd abandoned, and picked up the arrow still waiting there. Behind her, her rival stepped down from the platform and moved toward the stranger. The real competition would happen without her. But for the first time in four losses, Nessa had chosen the shot she needed over the one she wanted.

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Chapter 3

Nessa held the arrow steady at her practice target, watching the stranger and her rival from the corner of her eye. The first shot rang true—the bell sang out clear across the grounds. The second shot followed, just as clean. Then came the third. The bell frame shattered. Wood exploded across the clearing, sending splinters into the dirt. The golden bell tumbled through the air and landed silent in the grass. The crowd went still. Her rival lowered his bow and stepped back from the vine-wrapped platform, his expression unchanged. The stranger stared at the wreckage, then at the archer who'd destroyed his test, and walked away without a word. All those tally marks, all those defeated archers—none of it mattered now. The contest was over. The crowd turned toward Nessa. She felt their eyes before she heard the first voice. "Finish it," someone called. "Show us what you've got." More voices joined in. They wanted a show. They wanted her to step up to the platform and prove she belonged beside her rival. Her hands tightened on her bow. This was the moment she'd been chasing—the clan watching, waiting to see what she could do. All she had to do was take one shot. Nessa looked at the shattered frame, then at the small sanctuary building at the edge of the grounds where the crowd had gathered. She could see them clearly now—not as witnesses to her victory, but as pressure she didn't need. She turned back to her practice target and drew the arrow she'd been holding. The crowd's voices grew louder, confused. Someone laughed. Nessa ignored them and focused on the target ten paces away. She held the draw longer than felt natural, longer than her hands wanted, and released only when the shot was ready. The arrow struck center. She reached for another. The crowd noise faded behind her as she drew again, held, and let the second arrow fly true. By the third shot, most of them had left. Nessa kept shooting.

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Chapter 4

The practice ground emptied slowly. Nessa kept her focus on the target, arrow after arrow finding its mark. She didn't count the shots. She didn't track who stayed to watch. The crowd became background noise, then silence, then footsteps moving away through the grass. When she finally lowered her bow, only one person remained. Her rival stood at the edge of the clearing, near the golden-leafed tree that served as his personal sanctuary. The book resting on the bench beside him—the tome the clan kept there to honor his name among the legends—caught the last light through the canopy. He picked it up and walked toward her target. Nessa's chest tightened. He'd never approached her practice before. He stopped three paces from her target and studied the cluster of arrows in the center. "You're shooting differently," he said. Not a question. An observation. She waited. He turned the book over in his hands. "The clan wants me to choose an apprentice. I'm choosing you." The words didn't make sense. She'd lost to him four times. The clan revered him. She was the archer who couldn't fix her own flaw. "Why?" The question came out sharper than she meant. He looked at her target again, then met her eyes. "Because you finally stopped running from what you needed to do. That's harder than any shot." He set the tome on the bench circling the tree's base and walked away. Nessa stared at the book, at her target, at the choice now sitting between them. She'd wanted to beat him. Now he was offering to teach her. The path to becoming the greatest had just changed completely.

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Chapter 5

Nessa walked back to her tree house that evening with her bow still in hand. She hadn't given him an answer. The choice sat in her chest like a stone—heavy, solid, impossible to ignore. She climbed the rope ladder and set her bow against the wall. The banner appeared the next morning. Someone had hung it from the pavilion's central arch where the whole clan gathered for meals and announcements. The wood frame held pale fabric with dark letters: *The time has come to choose*. Nessa stopped at the tree line when she saw it. Her rival never made declarations. Someone else had done this—made his offer public before she'd even decided. Voices drifted from the pavilion. Her name. His name. The word *apprentice* repeated like a chant. She turned toward the practice grounds instead, but a group of younger archers blocked her path. One held a small carved figurine—an archer mid-stride, bow lowered, walking away from a target. "Is it true you're leaving?" the girl asked. Nessa stared at the figure. "I haven't decided anything." But the girl's face had already closed off. "My sister said you'd take the easy path. Learn from him instead of beat him." The group walked past without waiting for an answer. Nessa looked back at the pavilion, at the banner swaying in the morning wind. The clan had already decided what her choice meant. She walked to the pavilion and tore the banner down. The fabric ripped as she pulled it free from the arch. A dozen faces turned toward her—elders, competitors, children who'd watched her lose four times. "I haven't made a choice," she said. "When I do, it'll be mine. Not yours." She dropped the torn banner on the ground and walked to her practice target. The whispers followed her, but quieter now. She nocked an arrow and held it—longer than felt natural, longer than her instinct screamed to release. The shot landed true. She'd lost their easy assumptions about her. But she'd kept the choice itself.

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Chapter 6

Nessa left the practice grounds before dawn. She needed distance from the pavilion, from the torn banner still lying where she'd dropped it, from the eyes that had already decided what kind of archer she was. The Everlasting Forest stretched beyond the clan's borders, and somewhere in its depths lay the old sites—places her instructors mentioned but never showed them. The greatest archers had trained there once, before the clan built pavilions and hung banners. She wanted to see what they'd left behind. She walked for three hours before the trees changed. The trunks grew wider here, their bark rough with age. Light filtered through the canopy in soft columns that touched the forest floor like fingers. Then she saw it—a clearing where the undergrowth had been kept back by something other than time. At its center stood a target, its wood posts gray and cracked, arrows still lodged in the outer rings. Not new arrows. Some had shafts so weathered they'd split along the grain. She counted seventeen of them, all grouped in a tight band around the edge. None in the center. Beyond the target sat a small building, half-swallowed by vines but still standing. The door hung crooked on its frame. Inside, she found a stone floor worn smooth in paths between the door and a single window that faced the target. Sleeping platforms lined one wall. A shelf held three bows, their strings long rotted away. She lifted one and felt how light it was—made for speed, not power. This had been a place where archers came to wait, to practice, to face something that required more than skill. The arrows outside told the story. Seventeen archers had taken their shot and missed the center. Then they'd left their arrows behind and walked away. Nessa stood at the threshold and looked out at the target. She understood now what the sacrifice had been—not blood or treasure, but the willingness to miss in front of no one but themselves. To take a shot with enough time to feel every moment of its flight, to watch it land wide, and to leave the evidence standing. Her chest tightened. She'd been afraid of slow misses because the clan would see them. But these archers had faced something harder—they'd had to see themselves clearly, with no crowd to blame or impress. She walked to the target and pulled her bow from her shoulder. One arrow. She nocked it, drew, and held the string longer than her instinct screamed to release. The shot landed in the outer ring, four fingers from center. She didn't retrieve it. She left it standing with the others and walked back toward the clan grounds, carrying the weight of what she'd finally let herself see.

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Chapter 7

The clearing looked different on the second day. The target stood where she'd left it, her arrow still lodged in the outer ring with the seventeen others. But the ground near the dwelling showed fresh tracks—boot prints in the soft earth, a broken twig that hadn't been there before. Nessa walked toward the building and stopped. A wooden post now stood at the clearing's edge, wound tight with fresh vines that hadn't grown there naturally. Someone had placed it. Behind it, closer to the dwelling, sat a small table with a single chair, a plate and cup arranged as though waiting for their owner to return. The message was clear: this place belonged to someone, and they'd been here recently. She turned toward the target and saw the sign—a rough plank nailed to a stake, the word NO carved deep into the wood. Flowers had been woven through the vines that wrapped its base, bright against the dark letters. She pulled an arrow from her quiver anyway. The clearing had been abandoned when she found it. These marks were new, placed after she'd left her shot standing with the others. Whoever claimed this space now had done so because she'd made it matter again. She drew her bow, held longer than her hands wanted to allow, and released. The arrow struck two fingers closer to center than yesterday's shot. She left it standing. Footsteps came from the trees behind her. Nessa turned, hand already reaching for another arrow, but stopped when she saw who emerged from the shadows. Her rival walked into the clearing, his gaze moving from the new arrow to her face. He didn't speak. He simply nodded once, then walked past her to the dwelling and sat at the table, as though he'd been coming here all along. The clearing wasn't abandoned—it was his. And now he'd let her see it.

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Chapter 8

Her rival sat at the table as though he'd always been there. He didn't look at her bow or the target. He looked at her face, then at the empty space across from him where no second chair stood. The silence stretched until Nessa understood it wasn't waiting—it was speaking. He gestured toward a lamp post she hadn't noticed before, tall and wrapped in emerald vines, its light unlit in the morning sun. Then he pointed at a storage shed behind the dwelling, its door locked, vines growing thick across the wood. Finally, his hand moved to a post near the target—covered in tally marks, hundreds of them, carved deep and weathered by years. He'd been practicing here longer than she'd been alive. His hand settled back on the table. He spoke one word: "Silence." Nessa's hands tightened on her bow. She could stay if she agreed to practice without speaking, without asking questions, without breaking the stillness he'd built here. It would mean proximity to his method, watching how he moved, learning by observation alone. But it would also mean surrendering her voice, accepting his terms without negotiation. She thought of the banner he'd posted without her consent, the choice he'd forced into the open before she was ready. She lowered her bow and nodded once. Not because she trusted him, but because watching him practice in silence would teach her more than any conversation could. He stood, walked to the shed, and unlocked it. Inside hung his bow and a quiver of arrows identical to the ones that had shattered the stranger's frame. He didn't invite her closer. He simply left the door open as he returned to the table, the condition set and accepted. The clearing was his, but she could stay—as long as she learned the way he did, without words.

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Chapter 9

Nessa stood in the clearing as her rival walked back to the table, leaving the shed door open behind him. Inside, his bow hung on the wall, dark wood polished smooth from years of use. But the space felt wrong—too empty for someone who had lived here so long. She waited until he sat, then stepped closer to the doorway. The walls stopped her breath. Every surface bore tally marks—not just hundreds, but thousands, carved in groups of five that climbed from floor to ceiling. Some marks were fresh, pale cuts in dark wood. Others had weathered gray with age. They weren't practice counts. They were losses. Each one a shot that missed, a day he failed, a moment he didn't speak about to anyone. A journal rested on a small shelf near the bow, its cover worn at the edges. She reached for it without thinking, then froze. Her rival's voice came from behind her, quiet and certain: "Read it or don't. But if you stay, you carry your losses the way I carry mine." Nessa opened the journal. The first page held one line in careful script: "A loss I hide becomes a weight. A loss I mark becomes a step." She turned through pages of dates, descriptions of failed shots, reasons analyzed in detail. He had written every loss down, studied it, kept it visible. She closed the journal and looked back at the walls. He hadn't hidden his failures—he had built a map of them, and lived inside it every day. She understood now why he demanded silence. Words could lie about losing. The marks could not.

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