Valeria

Valeria's Arc

7 Chapters

Valeria's dream is tracking down the merchant who sold her family into servitude..

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by @EnchantedNightmares
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Chapter 1

Valeria crouched low in the damp grass and pressed the folded manifest against her chest. Two years of hunting had led her here, to a quiet ridge above a trade road in Needlefall. The merchant who sold her family would pass this way. Her hands shook once, then stilled. She breathed slow and watched the road below. A glint in the dirt caught her eye. She pulled back a tuft of grass and found a rolled parchment pinned by a stone. She unrolled it. A city map, marked with a careful X over a distant district, and beside the X, a fresh ink note: "Goods received. Payment cleared." The paper was still warm from someone's pocket. Valeria's hands shook again, harder now. Another hunter had already reached the merchant. She was no longer first.

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Chapter 2

Valeria stayed crouched, the warm map heavy in her hand. The thought arrived slow and cold: someone had left this for her. The stone had been placed, not dropped. The note faced up, ready to be read. She lifted her eyes from the parchment and scanned the ridge. Grass bent in a line that was not the wind. She was not alone here. She had never been alone here. She drew her knife and followed the bent grass. It led to a flat stone behind a low shrub. On the stone sat a folded poster, weighted by a coin purse. She opened the poster. Bold letters offered a reward for the capture of merchants. A hand had scrawled across the bottom: "Your turn. Follow the map." The purse was heavy. Half the bounty, paid forward. Valeria's hands did not shake. Someone wanted her hunting again — and they knew her name without writing it. Under the purse lay one more thing. A small locket, warm from the same pocket as the map. She thumbed it open. Her mother's face looked up at her, golden eyes steady, dark skin painted with care she had not seen in years. Valeria's breath caught hard. No stranger could have known to leave this. Whoever watched her had watched a long time. She closed the locket, slid it into her shirt, and stood. The hunt was no longer hers alone. She picked up the map and started down the ridge.

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Chapter 3

The map led Valeria off the ridge and onto a packed dirt trade road. She kept low, knife loose in her hand, eyes tracking every bent reed and broken twig. The road narrowed between two stands of brush. Somewhere ahead, the trap was already set. She did not yet know it was not meant for her. Her boot caught a rope hidden under leaves. The ground gave way. Valeria threw herself sideways and slammed onto the dirt as a net snapped up where her chest had been. She rolled to her knees, breathing hard. The pit gaped open beside her, leaves still drifting down into the dark. The net hung slack and useless now, torn at one corner by her fall. Someone had built this for a man who walked taller, slower, heavier. Not her. She wiped dirt from her palms and stared at the sprung trap. Whoever set it was close. And they would come back to check. Valeria crept forward and found the bait. A chest sat open in the road, gold coins spilling over its lip, gemstones catching the low light. No merchant could pass this and not stop. Beside the chest, propped on a stone, an ornate hand mirror caught the sun and threw a slow, glowing circle across the dirt. A lure inside a lure. She crouched behind the brush and waited. Boots crunched gravel down the road. A lean figure stepped into view, scowling at the tripped net and the empty pit. Another hunter. Valeria's grip tightened on her knife. The benefactor had not sent her alone into Needlefall. He had sent her into a race, and the other runners did not know her face yet. She slid back into the brush and let the stranger pass. The hunt had new rules now, and she had just learned the first one. She waited until the other hunter knelt to reset the net. Then she slipped from the brush, lifted the glowing mirror from its stone, and tucked it under her coat. The chest she left as it lay. Let him keep his bait. She had taken his eyes. Valeria moved off the road into the trees, lighter and colder than before. She was not the hunted here. She was a rival now, and the trade roads of Needlefall had just grown crowded.

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Chapter 4

Valeria moved fast through the trees, the stolen mirror cold against her ribs. Branches whipped at her face. Behind her, boots cracked twigs. The lean hunter was closer than she had thought. She ducked between two trunks and turned to run, but he was already there, blocking her path. A knife glinted in his hand. "Give it back," he said. His voice was low and even. "Or I take it off your body." Valeria stepped back. Her boot slid on wet stone. Behind her, the trees opened onto a roaring waterfall that crashed into a still lake. There was no path down. The hunter grinned and stepped closer. The curved blade in his hand caught the light, its hilt wound with painted flowers that did not match the threat in his eyes. He angled it toward her throat. Valeria's hand shook for one breath, then steadied. She drew the mirror from her coat and held it out. He reached. She threw it past his ear instead. He flinched, turned, lunged for it. Valeria drove her shoulder into his ribs and shoved him off the ledge. He hit the water hard. The mirror struck a rock and cracked clean in half. Valeria stood at the edge, breathing in shudders. She had kept her life. She had lost her prize. Below, the hunter thrashed toward the shore, his flowered blade still bright in his fist. He looked up. He saw her face. Valeria turned from the falls and ran back into the trees, lighter by one mirror and heavier by one enemy who would not forget. She stopped at a fallen log to catch her breath. Something crinkled under her boot. A folded square of parchment, dropped in the chase. She picked it up and opened it. A city map. Streets inked in careful lines, an X marked over a single building near the center. Beside the X, three names. The top name had been crossed out. The second name had been crossed out. The third name waited, untouched. Her hands began to shake. She did not know the merchant's name yet. But she knew now the lean hunter did. And he had a head start.

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Chapter 5

Valeria followed the inked streets on the map for half a day, her boots quiet on the packed dirt of the road. The third name burned in her mind, still unread, still unknown. She kept to the tree line where she could. Then a shape stepped out from behind a leaning trunk and blocked her path. The lean hunter. Wet hair, a bruise along his jaw, one arm held tight against his ribs. His curved blade was already in his hand. "The third name," he said. "It's mine." His shirt was soaked dark red down one side, the cloth clinging where the fall had torn him open. He swayed a little on his feet. Valeria saw the parchment edge poking from his belt. She saw something else too — a second blade at his hip, slim and bright, the letters IM cut clean into the steel. He had not just learned the name. He had taken something from her already. Valeria did not draw. She watched his bad arm, the way it pinned the parchment against his side. She feinted left. He slashed wide, slow. She caught his wrist, twisted, and the blade fell. The parchment fell with it. She snatched the page before he could kneel. Two names crossed out. One name waiting. Illisa Mira. Her hands shook once, then stilled. She backed onto the road, page folded tight in her fist. The hunter spat blood and watched her go. "I'll be behind you," he said. She believed him. But now she had the name. And he had nothing but the road and his hate. She walked until the trees thinned. She unfolded the parchment again. Illisa Mira. A woman, then. A merchant with an etched blade the lean hunter had already touched. Valeria's hand closed tight on the page. She had a name now. She also had a question she did not want — whether this woman was the one who had sold her family, or only the next door she would have to open. She set her boots toward the city and walked faster.

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Chapter 6

The city swallowed Valeria by midday. She moved through the market crowd with the folded page pressed against her palm. She found the stall on the third row, a woman bent over a tray of small knives. Valeria stepped close, hand drifting to her hip. Then the woman looked up. Valeria stopped. The face was one she knew. The face stopped her cold before any blade could leave its sheath. The trading post sat low and warm behind the woman, a covered porch hung with lanterns, rustic counters stacked with bottles and small carved boxes. Out front, a heaped display rose taller than the merchant herself — silk coats, polished boots, gold chains spilling from open purses. The merchant straightened. Black curls fell past her shoulders. Her eyes were gold, sharp, steady. Valeria knew those eyes. They were her mother's eyes. They were the eyes from the locket pressed against her own chest. Valeria's hand fell away from her hip. The shaking she had stilled on the road came back, hard, into her fingers. The merchant set down the small knife she had been polishing. She looked at Valeria for a long moment, taking in the dark clothes, the dust, the folded page. "You found me," she said. Her voice was quiet. "Sooner than I hoped. Later than I feared." She did not reach for a weapon. She reached, instead, for the chain at her throat, and lifted a locket twin to the one Valeria carried. Valeria did not draw. She could not. The name on the page was not the merchant who had sold her family. The name on the page was kin. The hunt she had been paid to finish was a hunt aimed at her own blood. She stepped back into the crowd, page crushed in her fist, the merchant's gold eyes following her. Somewhere behind her on the road, a wounded man was still walking. And now Valeria knew — the hand that had hired her had known this all along.

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Chapter 7

Valeria circled back at dusk. The trading post was no longer settled. The heaped display had thinned. Silk coats were gone. The small carved boxes sat half-packed in a crate by the porch. Through the open door, Valeria saw the merchant moving fast, folding clothes, sweeping coins from a tray into a pouch. Her mother was running. Valeria stood at the edge of the lantern light, hand on the locket at her chest, and watched the woman she had been paid to kill prepare to disappear before dawn. A travel pack sat open on the counter. It was elegant, painted with pale flowers, stuffed with bottled water and wrapped food. Beside it lay a folded dark cloak and a small knife. The merchant worked without looking up. She took only what she could not leave. Valeria stepped onto the porch. The boards creaked. The merchant froze, one hand inside the pack. "Stop," Valeria said. The merchant turned. She lifted her locket again. Valeria lifted hers. The two halves caught the lantern light — twin frames of gold, twin portraits of a black-haired woman with gold eyes and a third eye set above her brow. Side by side, the lockets were one matched pair. Proof in metal. The merchant's hand shook now too. "Decide," she whispered. "Hide me, or finish it. But do it before the other one comes." Valeria did not finish it. She stepped forward and shut the pack. "Go," she said. "North road. I will slow whoever follows." The merchant grabbed the pack and ran into the dark. On the counter, forgotten in the rush, a green jade dragon coiled around itself — a bracelet the merchant had worn every day Valeria could remember from the locket portrait. Valeria picked it up. The stone was warm. Her choice was made. She had let her mother live, and now the hand that hired her would learn it.

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