Bogart the Boat Salesman

Bogart the Boat Salesman's Arc
Chapter 1 of 5

Bogart the Boat Salesman's dream is keeping everyone safe while boating on the waters.

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Chapter 1

Bogart sold boats, and he had never lost a buyer to the water. He kept that record by climbing the wooden lookout at the edge of his lot three times a day. He wore his life jacket buckled tight, the same one he clipped on in front of every customer before he handed over keys. He climbed the ladder now because the air had changed. The wind had a wet edge to it, the kind that meant something was building past the far shore. From the platform he saw the cloud. It rose over the north water in dark stacked layers, and lightning forked inside it. The lake under it had already turned slate gray. Two boats were still out. One sat near the reeds, close enough to wave in. The other was a white speck pointed the wrong way, north, straight at the storm. He slid down the ladder so fast his palms burned. At the rock that broke the surface a hundred yards off his dock, he had bolted a red warning lamp to a steel pole. He hit the switch on the wall of his shed. The lamp began to flash across the water in hard red pulses. The boat near the reeds turned at once and started back. The white speck kept going. They were not looking behind them. Bogart ran to the far end of his lot, where the boat he hated to sell sat covered under a tarp. He had sold that boat once, and he thought about that buyer every morning. Today he needed the speed. He ripped the tarp off, threw his canvas bag of spare jackets and flares onto the seat, and turned the key. The engine caught on the first try. He shoved the throttle forward and the bow lifted clear of the dock chop. Fifteen minutes later he was close enough to read the name on the stern of the white boat. A woman and a boy sat in the cockpit, hunched against spray, still pointed at the wall of cloud. He cut across their bow and forced them to stop. He threw two life jackets over the rail and shouted at them to buckle. The boy fumbled the straps; Bogart leaned over and snapped the clip himself. The first heavy wave hit while he was still aboard their boat. Water came over the side and soaked his shoes. He got them turned, tied a short tow line to their cleat, and ran both boats south toward his lot at half throttle. The red lamp on the rock guided them in. By the time they bumped against his dock, the rain had started, and the woman was crying. Everyone was breathing. Bogart tied off the lines and looked north. The cloud was still coming, and there was one boat he had not seen yet.

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