Callum Greer

Callum Greer's Arc
Chapter 1 of 1

Callum Greer's dream is hosting a Sunday service in the chapel he builds at the heart of Jacksnipe Bog where no congregant may leave.

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Chapter 1

Callum Greer wanted a chapel in the middle of Jacksnipe Bog, and he wanted it before Sunday. He drove a stake into the mud to mark his altar. The stake sank. He pushed it again, harder. It slid down until only his white sleeve showed above the muck. The bog ate wood the way it ate everything. Callum smiled anyway, wide and full of teeth. A man who builds a church where no one can walk out needs ground that holds. He had no ground that held. He pulled the stake free with a wet sucking sound. Mud spattered his clean suit. He did not wipe it off. He laid the stake flat and watched it float, then sink, then vanish. Four days. His wife expected a service. His congregation, once gathered, would not be allowed to leave. But a chapel on soft bog would slide under the water with every soul inside before the first hymn ended. "You are building on breath," a voice said behind him. Callum turned. A thin shape stood ankle-deep in the pool, pale as pond fog. Water ran through the man and did not fill his footprints. A corroded compass hung at his chest, glowing faint blue. Callum had heard the bog folk whisper of him, the architect who drowned here raising someone else's house. Edmund Saltmarsh. The one dead man who knew how to make the mire carry stone. "I need solid ground," Callum said. He offered his hand across the water. "Help me, and I'll never let go of you." Edmund looked at the hand. He did not take it. "There is no solid ground. You build on piles. Long timbers, driven deep, until they grip the clay beneath the mud." He tapped his glowing compass. "I can find the clay. I drowned learning where it lies." They worked through the night. Edmund drifted over the water and named each spot. Callum hauled black timbers from his wagon and drove them down where the ghost pointed. The compass burned brighter over the deep clay. One by one the piles bit and held. By dawn a grid of posts stood above the pool, steady under his boots. Then the mud moved. A woman rose from the pool between the piles. Brown muck sheeted off her hair and clothes. Her green eyes fixed on Callum. She climbed onto his new foundation and stood dripping on the timbers, silent, sorrowful, as if she had always lived in the place he meant to claim. "The clay remembers the ones it kept," Edmund said. His blue light dimmed. "You drove your posts through her grave. Now she will not leave your church. And neither, I think, will you let her." Callum looked at the woman on his foundation. His foundation would hold. That was the trouble. It would hold her too.

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