Echo

Echo's Arc
Chapter 6 of 8

Echo's dream is scaring Earthlings.

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Chapter 6

The vial arrived three hours after sunrise. Echo found it outside the star sculpture, wrapped in protective mesh and still faintly warm from atmospheric entry. He unwrapped it carefully, and the moss inside pulsed with green light—the exact shade of the forests near his childhood home. A folded note slipped out as he lifted the vial. The paper was decorated with small flowers along the edges, and in the center, two words were written in his teacher's handwriting: CHOOSE WISELY. Below that, a single instruction: "Return home immediately and report your findings, or stay and complete the new mission alone. You cannot do both." Echo read it three times. His teacher was calling him back. The old mission was officially over, but she wanted to hear what he'd learned before the council made their judgment. If he stayed on Earth, he would be choosing a path no one from his planet had ever walked—with no guidance, no certainty that wonder and delight would be enough to prove he was real. He carried the vial and note to the moon building at the edge of Space Haven's grounds. The structure sat alone, its surface covered in sparkles that caught the morning light. Inside, the circular room was empty except for a window that looked out toward a tree with a split trunk—one branch twisted left, the other stretched right, both reaching away from each other. Echo sat on the floor and held the vial up to the light. The moss glowed brighter, responding to warmth. He could almost smell the forest it came from, almost hear the sounds he'd made as a child before anyone taught him that fear was sacred. His communicator sat beside him, ready to confirm his return flight. One choice meant going home with partial answers and facing judgment. The other meant staying in a place where people called him funny and asked for pictures, where his carefully learned techniques meant nothing. Echo set the vial down and picked up a small rock from outside the moon building. He placed it on the note's left side, then picked up a second rock and set it on the right. The rocks sat there, weighing down both halves of the paper, holding the choice in place. Then he picked up the left rock and put it in his pocket. He would return home—not because he was afraid to stay, but because he needed to tell his teacher something true: the humans had seen him, just not the way anyone expected. He would report his findings, face the council's decision, and then ask permission to come back. The new mission deserved more than running away from the old one. It deserved a real beginning. Echo folded the note, left the vial glowing on the floor of the moon building, and walked toward the star sculpture to send his message home.

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