NOTIM

NOTIM's Arc
Chapter 1 of 12

NOTIM's dream is mastering the art of weaving portals to reach every realm..

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by @Dalient
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Chapter 1

Notim pulled reality apart like taffy, searching for the sweet spot where physics forgot its own rules. The portal shimmered, then tore wide. Wrong. The edges screamed colors that didn't exist. Paradoxes spilled out like marbles, rolling in directions that made eyes water. A creature tumbled through, all purple tentacles and spider legs, dripping from eyes that shouldn't fit on one body. It skittered sideways through time, leaving wet trails that evaporated upward. Notim laughed and clapped their hands. The creature was beautiful, impossible, and very much noticing it shouldn't exist. Its eyes began to pop like bubbles. Notim grabbed it quick, whispered the riddle about things that are real only when nobody's looking. The creature stopped dripping. Stopped panicking. Started breathing in a rhythm that bent minutes into loops. The portal still shrieked behind them, but something was happening to the tear itself. Stone grew from nothing around the portal's edges, white and gold, building upward in curves that shouldn't hold. A dome appeared, then pillars, then stairs leading nowhere and everywhere at once. The structure wrapped itself around the screaming portal like a shell around a pearl. Notim watched the temple finish itself, walls settling into place as the paradoxes found somewhere to live. The portal quieted to a hum. Notim grinned. They'd need better lies for the next attempt, sweeter stories to calm reality down. But now they knew portals could be tamed, could be housed, could be kept. The spider-octopus creature settled at the temple's base, its dripping eyes reflecting doorways to a thousand dying worlds. Notim dragged the carved chest from their collection, tentacles wound tight around dark wood. They set it near the temple steps and opened the lid. Inside, pieces of broken physics rattled like dice. Notim began feeding the loose paradoxes into the chest, one by one. Each contradiction that went in made the chest hum a note that reality couldn't quite hear. The last marble rolled across the ground, spinning in two directions at once. Notim plucked it up and dropped it in. The chest snapped shut. The air cleared. Reality yawned and looked away, forgetting to ask questions. Notim had done it. Their first portal stood open, stable, ready. A doorway to everywhere, and they'd only broken the world a little bit.

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