Vinny McCabe

Vinny McCabe's Arc
Chapter 4 of 9

Vinny McCabe's dream is uncovering the buried truth behind his wife's murder through each case he takes.

Scarlette's avatar
by @Scarlette
Chapter 4 comic
Click to expand

Chapter 4

The next morning, Vinny walked into the central telephone exchange building downtown and asked for the supervisor. A middle-aged woman in a pressed blouse met him at the counter, hands folded, expression neutral. He showed her the phone number from his wife's note and asked if she could tell him when the line had been installed. She looked at the number, then at him, then back at the number. After a long pause, she said records from that exchange had been transferred to a different facility two years ago. Vinny asked which facility. She said she wasn't authorized to provide that information. He thanked her and left. He tried three more exchanges that afternoon. At each one, he got the same answer—records transferred, authorization required, no access. By the fourth stop, he knew what he was looking at. The number his wife had written down was still active. Someone had answered it last night. But the paper trail that should have shown who owned it, who installed it, who paid for it, had been moved or erased. Just like the witness statements. Just like the files that went missing from his wife's case. The network wasn't just patient. It had reach. That night, Vinny sat at his desk with the torn piece of paper in front of him. He'd spent two years reading the official report, tracing leads that went nowhere, chasing patterns that dissolved when he got close. But this—this scrap of paper with her chaotic handwriting and the red line slashed across the bottom—this was something they hadn't controlled. She'd seen them. She'd written it down. And even though he'd failed to listen that morning, even though he'd walked out the door and never came back in time, her words had survived. He folded the paper carefully and locked it in the drawer with the file. He couldn't undo what he'd missed. But he could follow what she'd left behind. The number was a dead end for now, but it confirmed the network had been active before her death, that they'd been watching her the same way they watched him now. The question wasn't whether he'd been right to keep digging. It was whether he'd started digging soon enough. The next evening, Vinny drove to the park where they used to meet on Sunday afternoons. The bench was still there, weathered wood and metal frame, a pot of violet flowers someone kept replacing by the armrest. He sat down and pulled out the note again. She'd tried to tell him about the phone number. She'd been worried, urgent, and he'd waved it off as stress. Now the operators wouldn't give him the records, and the townhouse sat quiet with a sedan watching the entrance. He traced the red line with his thumb. She'd crossed something out—he could see the pressure marks beneath the ink. She'd known the danger before he did. He folded the note and stood up. The network had erased her warning from every official record, but they'd missed this. One piece of paper she'd hidden in a kitchen drawer, one fragment they didn't know existed. It wasn't proof that would hold up in court. But it was proof she'd been right. And that changed everything.

Play your story to life

Storycraft is a mobile game where you create AI characters, craft items and locations to build their world, then discover what direction your story takes. Download the iOS game for free today!

Download for free