Alma Jorie

Alma Jorie's Arc

2 Chapters

Alma Jorie's dream is exposing the respected pillar of Mangrove Maw whose confession she dares not write down.

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Chapter 1

Alma Jorie had written down every secret in Mangrove Maw except the one that mattered. It lived in her head, where she dared not put it on paper. A respected man had knelt in her clinic and confessed something that could hang him, and she had let her pen stay still. Now a dying woman's words from last week pointed at the same man, and the only proof was a body in the ground by morning. Alma pressed the red book flat against her uniform and ran. The clinic stood at the water's edge, its flower boxes bright under a gray sky. She had left the door open. She did not care. The gravediggers worked in a far corner of the churchyard. Two men leaned on their shovels. A plain box sat beside a fresh hole. Alma reached them with her breath gone ragged. "Wait," she said. "I need to see her. The nurse must check the body." The older man frowned. "She's been seen. Doctor signed it. Drowning." "Then one more look costs you nothing." Alma opened the lid before he could answer. The dead woman lay still and swollen. Alma made herself look past that. She turned the cold hand over. Along the wrist ran a line of small, dark pricks, the same marks the confessor had hinted at when he spoke of a poison that mimicked the sea. No drowned woman carried those. Alma took out her book and wrote fast. Puncture marks, left wrist, four of them. Skin blue at the lips. She wrote what the confessor had said, the part she had refused to write for weeks. Her hand shook, but the words went down. "That's enough," the older man said. He pushed the lid shut. "Burial's paid for. Orders." "Whose orders?" He would not say. He named no one. But his eyes moved toward the road, toward the fine house where the respected man lived, and Alma understood. The men lowered the box and began to fill the hole. She did not stop them. She had what she came for. Alma walked back to the clinic with the book held against her chest. The evidence was gone into the earth now, but the record was hers. She had broken her own rule. The secret she dared not write was written. She climbed the porch steps and stopped. The door she had left open now stood only half so. Someone had been inside. Her drawers hung open. Papers lay scattered across the floor. The man knew she had heard his confession. And now he knew she was writing it down. Alma shut the door and slid the bolt. The book in her pocket was no longer a shield. It was the one thing that could get her killed, and the one thing that could end him. She had until he came back to decide what to do with it.

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Chapter 2

Alma sat by her bolted door until the lamp burned low. The red book held the dead woman's murder, but a book proved nothing. People trusted the respected man. They would call her a nervous nurse. She needed one person to believe her first. One person whose word carried weight beside her own. She thought of the hospital in the next parish. She thought of the woman who scrubbed its floors each night and knew more than any doctor there. Alma had met her twice. Both times the woman had corrected a doctor's dosing without being asked, then said nothing when he took the credit. That woman noticed everything. That woman might listen. Alma walked through the dark to find her. She found Elara Whitmore in a bright hallway, grey uniform damp, mop swinging in slow strokes. Elara did not look up. "Clinic's closed," Elara said. "Whatever you need, it waits till morning." "I need you to hear something," Alma said. "Then tell me if I'm mad." Elara stopped the mop. Her tired eyes moved over Alma's face, the shaking hands, the book pressed to the uniform. She set the mop against the wall. "Sit," Elara said. "You look like the ones they wheel in too late." Alma sat on a bench. She opened the red book and read the puncture marks, the blue lips, the man's own words. Her voice broke twice. Elara listened without moving. When Alma finished, Elara was quiet a long moment. Then she spoke, slow and certain. "That poison," Elara said. "The one that looks like drowning. I've seen it. Years ago, in another country. A man used it on his wife. The doctors wrote it as fever." She wiped her hands on her uniform. "Your marks are real. Four pricks mean four doses. He was careful." Alma's breath caught. "You believe me." "I believe the marks," Elara said. "That's not the same as proof a court wants." She picked up the mop again, then paused. "But you're not alone now. That's the first thing." Alma wrote Elara's words in the book. A second voice. A trained one. The accusation was no longer hers alone to carry. "Keep it hidden," Elara said. "A man who buries a body fast will not stop at a book. If he learns you spoke to me, he'll come for us both." The word us settled in Alma's chest. She had wanted a believer. She had found one. But she had also tied another person to the danger. She walked home before dawn. The book felt heavier now, not lighter. Someone believed her. That changed everything and nothing. The respected man still stood untouched, and now a second woman stood in his path.

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