Bessie Holstein

Bessie Holstein's Arc

3 Chapters

Bessie Holstein's dream is becoming an award-winning milk producer.

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by @SpiritedVal
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Chapter 1

Bessie Holstein wanted the blue ribbon, and she had lost it to a stranger. The county fair judges hung it around another girl's neck that afternoon. Bessie stood at the back of the crowd, her cow horns catching the light, her cow-pattern top straining as she folded her arms. She had trained all year to be the top milk producer. Now a line of buyers snaked past her, waiting to sample someone else. The winner had curves that made men forget their own names. She out-produced every girl at the fair. Bessie watched the pails fill under her, one after another, and felt her stomach turn. Her own ribbon, third place, sat crumpled in her pocket. "You're the Holstein girl," a buyer said. He wiped his mouth and looked her over. "You've got the body for it. But numbers win ribbons, not looks." Bessie set her jaw. "Then I'll get the numbers." She drove home to Barnview House with the sun sinking behind it. The rustic wood glowed, the broad porch empty, the wide windows dark. She had inherited the place and the herd. She had also inherited a promise to herself: to be the best producer in Oleander. Third place was not best. Inside the barn she stopped at the milking stocks. The wooden frame stood ready, holes for her head and wrists, the machine bolted to the side. She had built it for control, for measuring every drop. Tonight she looked at it with new eyes. She knew why the winner beat her. The girl milked longer. She pushed past comfort. Bessie always quit when the ache set in. That soft habit had cost her the ribbon. Bessie stepped into the stocks. She lowered her head through the top hole and slid her wrists into the lower two. The wood pressed cool against her throat. She reached the release, then stopped her hand short of it. She flipped the machine on. The cups sealed over her and pulled. The rough steel hummed and dragged. Her breath caught. The gauge on the box climbed. She had never let it run this long before. The ache came, sharp and early. Her old self would have quit. Instead she stared at the gauge and held. One minute. Two. The pails below her filled faster than they ever had at the fair. She counted them without moving her head. When the machine finally slowed, she had beaten her own record by half again. Sweat ran down her face. Her wrists were red where the wood held them. She smiled through the pain. But the stocks would not release. She pulled her wrists and they held fast. The wood had swollen tight around them from the strain and the heat. The machine kept its steady pull against her, and no one else lived at Barnview House to hear her call. Bessie had found the way to win. Now she could not get free.

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Chapter 2

The machine kept pulling. Bessie hung in the wooden stocks, wrists swollen tight, head bent through the top hole. She had shouted until her throat went dry. No one lived at the house to hear. Her arms shook. The gauge on the box still climbed. She counted the minutes and lost count. Then the barn door creaked open behind her. "Well, look at this," a voice said, warm and slow. Bessie knew it at once. Nyx. Her lover strolled in, tail swaying, kitten ears twitching. She circled the stocks like a cat around a bowl. She did not reach for the release. She looked, and she smiled. "Poor thing. All locked up and no one to help." "Nyx, please," Bessie said. "The wood swelled. I can't get my hands out. Turn the machine off." Nyx crouched to the box. She tapped the red button with one finger, then pulled her hand back. "I could. But you look so busy in there." She trailed a finger along Bessie's bare shoulder. "Ask me nice." "I did ask." Bessie yanked her wrists. The wood held. Pain shot up her arms. "Nyx, come on." "That's not nice. That's bossy." Nyx leaned close to Bessie's face, so close their noses nearly touched. Her green eyes glinted. "You built this thing to win a ribbon. Now it's got you. Say please. Say it like you mean it." Bessie's face burned. The machine dragged at her again. Her pride pushed back, then broke. "Please," she said. "Please, Nyx. I'm begging you. Let me out." Nyx grinned wide. "There she is." She pressed the red button. The machine coughed and went still. The sudden quiet made Bessie's ears ring. But the wood still held. Nyx tugged one swollen wrist and clicked her tongue. "Stuck good." She fetched a bucket of cold water from the trough and poured it over the joints. The wood hissed. She worked Bessie's wrists back and forth, slow, patient, until the grain loosened. One hand slid free, then the other. Bessie lifted her head from the hole and stood upright for the first time in hours. Her arms ached. Red rings marked both wrists. She rubbed them and looked at the full pails below the stocks. Even trapped, the machine had kept working. The count sat higher than any night before. Higher than the fair. "You broke your record," Nyx said, peering into a pail. "All that, hands tied." Bessie flexed her sore fingers. The pain was real. So were the numbers. "The device works," she said. "I just can't run it alone." She looked at Nyx. "Next time you hold the release." Nyx laughed and licked her lips. "Next time you beg first." Bessie had her freedom and her record. She also had a new truth. To chase the top yield, she needed someone she could trust at the switch. And the only hands offered belonged to a girl who loved to make her wait.

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Chapter 3

Word of Bessie's record spread fast through Oleander. By morning, it curdled into gossip. The girl who beat her for the blue ribbon told anyone who would listen that the numbers were fake. No one milked that much in one night, she said. Not without lying. Bessie heard it at the feed store, at the trough, from a neighbor over the fence. Her record meant nothing if people thought she cheated. Bessie found Nyx lounging in the barn, tail flicking, licking cream from one finger. "They're calling me a liar," Bessie said. "That ribbon girl. She says I faked the count." Nyx grinned, slow and pleased. "So show them the truth." "How?" Bessie paced. "They won't take my word." "Then don't give them words." Nyx slid off the hay bale. She nodded at the wooden stocks against the wall. "Do it again. In front of them. Let them watch the pails fill." Bessie's stomach dropped. Doing it alone had nearly trapped her for good. But a public run meant witnesses. Numbers no one could deny. She sent word out. Come to Barnview House. Watch and count. By afternoon a small crowd gathered by the barn, the ribbon girl at the front, arms crossed, smirking. Bessie changed into her red bikini. She stepped into the stocks and bent her head through the top hole. "Nyx holds the release," she told the crowd. "Anyone can check the machine after." Nyx locked the wrist rings snug. She leaned close to Bessie's ear. "Beg me sweet if it hurts," she whispered, then hit the switch. The machine hummed to life. The steel cups pulled. Bessie gritted her teeth and held still. The crowd went quiet. Minutes passed. The pails below began to fill, one after another. The gauge on the box climbed higher and higher. The ribbon girl stepped forward and peered at the pails. Her smirk faded. "That's real milk," someone murmured. Heads nodded. The count climbed past the fair number, then past Bessie's own record. Nyx watched Bessie's face tighten. "Say it," she said softly. Bessie's pride cracked. "Please," she breathed. "Now." Nyx pressed the red button. The machine died. She poured water on the swollen wood and worked Bessie's wrists free. Bessie stood and lifted a full pail high. "Count them yourselves," she said. The crowd crowded in. They counted. The number held. It was true, and now they had all seen it. The ribbon girl's face went red. She spun and pushed through the crowd without a word. Bessie's record stood, proven. But a woman in a fine coat lingered by the fence, watching the pails, then Bessie, with sharp eyes. She stepped forward and offered her hand. "I judge the Oleander dairy prize," she said. "I want to see you compete for it. Officially. Under my rules." Bessie shook the hand. She had beaten the doubt. Now the real contest had found her.

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