Blake Ordle

Blake Ordle's Arc

6 Chapters

Blake Ordle's dream is unmasking the outlaw whose crimes every lawman before him failed to pin down..

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Chapter 1

Blake Ordle had worn the sheriff's star for one day when the bank got hit. He came for the outlaw no lawman before him had ever caught. Now a crowd blocked the bank steps, and their shouting drowned the town. "You're the new sheriff," a woman said. "So go get them!" A rancher grabbed Blake's sleeve. "They took the payroll. Ride now, before they reach the hills!" Blake studied the broken lock. The thieves had left an hour ago, maybe less. He didn't know these roads. He didn't know which way the hills bent. Chasing blind would only lose them for good. "Give me one minute," Blake said. The crowd pushed closer. A man spat in the dirt. "A minute's how they escape." Blake needed someone who knew the ground. He turned and found his brother already crouched at the bank door. Titus Ordle was blond and blue-eyed, nothing like Blake, but he read dirt the way other men read print. Their mother's Apache blood had made Titus the best tracker in the county. He pressed two fingers to a hoofprint and frowned. "Three horses," Titus said. "One's carrying double. That one drags. They're slow." "Which way?" Blake asked. Titus stood and pointed past the crowd, not toward the hills, but the low creek road. "Fresh mud on the boards. They went for water, not high ground. Everybody expects the hills. That's why they didn't take them." The rancher scoffed. "Nobody robs a bank and rides toward town." "They did," Titus said. He didn't look up. Blake made his choice. He raised the tin star so the crowd could see it. "Titus, I'm deputizing you. Right now." Titus grinned. "Took you long enough." They rode the creek road hard. The mud held every print. Titus called them out, one by one, until the trail bent behind a stand of trees. There the brothers found a lame horse tied loose and a saddlebag split open, empty. Blake dismounted. The thieves had switched mounts here. Fresh, fast horses. The slow trail was a trick to buy them time. He'd guessed right on the road and lost them anyway. But Titus knelt by the abandoned saddlebag. He held up a folded paper, half-buried in the mud. A hand-drawn map. On it, someone had marked the bank, the mill, and three other towns Blake didn't know. "This isn't one robbery," Titus said quietly. "They've been planning a string of them." Blake took the map. The lines were careful, drawn by a steady hand. Whoever led these men had done this before, town after town, and no lawman had ever caught him. The same ghost Blake had come to unmask. He folded the map into his coat. The thieves were gone. But now Blake knew where they'd strike next. "Ride back," Blake told his brother. "We warn the mill before dark."

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Chapter 2

Blake and Titus rode back to town at dusk. The fresh horses at the switch point gnawed at Blake. Someone had staged those mounts. Someone close had helped. Without that name, the trail died in the mud. Blake needed a place to think, so he went to his sister's restaurant. Ellie met him at the door in her long pink dress, wiping flour from her hands. She had grown up hearing every rancher and drifter in the county talk over her tables. She helped her brothers when she could, and Blake trusted her ears more than most deputies. "You look like you lost them," Ellie said. "They switched to fresh horses," Blake said. "Good ones. Somebody had them saddled and waiting." Ellie set down her rag. "Fresh horses aren't cheap. Whoever sold them wanted paying." She thought a moment. "A man came through two nights ago. Ate fast. Paid in coin, not bills. Ugly beard, mean eyes. He bragged about a stock deal he'd set up." Blake leaned forward. "You catch a name?" "Brick," she said. "Brick Malone. He asked which ranches sold spare mounts." Blake stood. He knew the name from a wanted flyer. Brick Malone ran with robbers. If Malone bought the horses, Malone knew who led the gang. "Where'd he sleep?" Blake asked. "The room above the feed store," Ellie said. "He's still here. I saw his horse this morning." Blake rode Ellie's white mustang to the feed store with Titus behind him. The blue saddle creaked as he swung down. He climbed the outside stairs slow, gun drawn. Titus took the back. Blake kicked the door. Brick Malone lurched up from a cot, thick beard matted, eyes hard as flint. His hand went for his belt. "Don't," Blake said. He held the gun level. "You bought fresh horses for the men who robbed the bank." Malone spat on the floor. "Prove it, boy." Titus stepped in the back window. He dropped a saddle blanket on the cot. "Your horse carries the same brand as the mount they left in the creek. You bought the pair." Malone's jaw tightened. Blake pressed him against the wall and took his pistol. "You supplied the escape. That makes you part of it." They walked Malone across town to the lockup. Blake shoved him through the barred door and turned the iron latch. Malone gripped the bars. "You think you got somebody," Malone said. "You got a horse trader. The man who drew that map won't ever let you see his face." Blake stopped. "So you know who drew it." Malone grinned through the bars. "I know he pays better than you. And I know he's already three towns ahead of you." Blake locked the outer door. He had his first witness. But Malone would not talk for free, and the outlaw was moving faster than Blake could ride. He needed to break Malone before the next bank fell.

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Chapter 3

Blake stayed at the lockup past midnight. Malone sat on his cot and said nothing. Blake had a witness but no lever to pry the name loose. A hardened outlaw does not talk for kindness. Blake needed something Malone wanted, or something Malone feared. He had neither. So he went to the one person who always heard more than she let on. Ellie's cafe glowed with a single lamp when Blake pushed through the door. She was scrubbing a table, sleeves pushed up, her pink dress dusted with flour. A young German shepherd lifted its head from beside the stove and thumped its tail. "You look worse than when you left," Ellie said. She set a bowl of beans and franks in front of him before he sat. "Eat. Then tell me what's stuck." Blake ate and talked. "Malone knows the name. He won't give it. I've got nothing to trade." Ellie kept scrubbing. "That mean-eyed man bragged at my table," she said. "Men like that fear one thing. Getting left behind. You said the boss is three towns ahead, moving without him?" Blake set down his spoon. Malone was not part of the plan anymore. He was a loose end. The door opened. A tall man ducked under the frame, clean-shaven, a star pinned to his vest. Blake stood and gripped his hand hard. "Uncle Drew." Drew had ridden in that week to serve as Blake's permanent deputy, a lawman who wanted the badge earned, not gifted. "Heard you got a man who won't talk," Drew said. No greeting. Blake nodded. "He's afraid of the wrong thing," Blake said slowly. "Let's use it." They walked to the lockup as the sky went gray. Blake unlocked the outer door and faced Malone through the bars. "Your boss switched horses and rode on," Blake said. "He didn't wait for you. He left you here for us to hang." Malone's jaw worked. Blake leaned close. "A man who plans that careful doesn't leave witnesses breathing. He's not coming back for you. He's coming back to make sure you can't ever name him." Drew stepped up beside him. "We can move you. Or we can leave the cell door easy to reach." His voice stayed flat. Malone's hands started to shake on the iron. He looked from Drew to Blake, and the flint in his eyes cracked. "Cole," Malone said. "Silas Cole. He drew the map. He's hitting the bank two towns west, three days out." Blake felt his chest tighten. He had the name at last. Blake locked the door and stepped into the dawn. He finally knew who he hunted. But the man was three days ahead, riding toward another bank Blake could not reach in time. The name had come too late to save the next town.

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Chapter 4

Blake had the name. He did not have the miles. Silas Cole rode two days west with a plan to rob a bank in three. No horse would carry Blake there in time. He stood in the dawn and stared down the road he could not win. Then he remembered the one thing faster than any horse. He found Drew at the lockup, checking the outer lock like he checked everything twice. Drew was Blake's uncle and his new deputy, a man who wanted the badge earned. "Wire won't stop a robbery," Drew said when Blake told him the plan. "Might warn a lawman who can." Blake nodded. "Cole beat me on distance. He can't beat me on wire." They walked fast to the telegraph office. The porch boards sagged under their boots. Inside, a clerk sat behind a key, sleeves pushed to his elbows. Blake laid it out plain. "I need a message sent to the sheriff two towns west. Bank robbery coming. Name is Silas Cole." The clerk reached for the key, then stopped. He tapped the wire slow. Nothing tapped back. "Line's dead west of here," the clerk said. "Storm took a pole three days back. Crews haven't reached it." Blake's chest went tight. His fast plan had a broken road too. Drew leaned on the counter. "How far to the break?" The clerk shrugged. "Half a day's ride. Maybe less." Blake did the sum in his head. Half a day out, wire the message, ride back. He could reach the dead pole, hand a note to the next live station beyond it, and still beat Cole's clock. Barely. "Can you write the message down?" Blake asked. The clerk scratched it on paper. Blake folded it into his shirt. "You ride to the break," Drew said. "I'll hold Malone and the town." It was not a question. Blake gripped his shoulder once and went. He rode hard through the morning. The sun climbed. Sweat soaked his collar. He found the fallen pole tangled in brush, wire snapped and coiled in the dirt. Beyond it stood a small station, smoke rising from its stack. A tired operator took the paper, read it twice, and set his hand on the key. This time the wire tapped back. The message ran west, ahead of Cole, into the town he meant to rob. Blake rode home in the dark, spent but sure. The warning had gone through. The next robbery would meet lawmen ready, not an empty street. Drew met him at the lockup with a paper of his own. "Rider came while you were gone," Drew said. "Word from the town you wired." Blake took it. The message was short. The sheriff there had read the warning. He had also read the name. And he wired back one line Blake did not expect: Silas Cole is my brother.

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Chapter 5

The telegraph had bought a warning, but the reply broke it. Silas Cole's own brother wore the star in the town Blake had wired. Blake stood in the lockup and read the line twice. A warning meant nothing if it landed in the wrong hands. Cole could still rob that bank, or another, and Blake had no idea where the man slept tonight. He needed Cole's hideout before the next strike, or he would keep chasing a shadow forever. Titus came through the door with dust on his boots and a dog at his heels. Blake's brother tracked for him, half-Apache and twice as patient as any man in the county. The mini shepherd trotted in, ears up, nose already working the floor. Titus dropped a hand to the dog's collar and read Blake's face. "You've got that look," he said. "The one before you ask me to do something hard." "Cole's holed up somewhere close," Blake said. "Between robberies he has to rest his horses. I need where." Titus knelt and let the shepherd sniff a scrap of rope pulled from the robbers' gear. "Malone bought those fresh horses," Titus said. "Where he bought them, Cole stabled the old ones. Horses leave a trail even when riders don't." They rode out at first light. Titus led on foot part of the way, reading bent grass and shod prints in the creek mud. The dog worked ahead, then circled back, then pulled north off the water. Blake trusted the animal's nose more than his own eyes now. The prints climbed toward a low draw hidden behind a wall of scrub. Smoke. Thin, gray, rising past the brush. Blake pulled up and dropped from the saddle. Titus signaled low. Through the branches Blake saw a line shack, two horses tied loose, and a big rough man cleaning a rifle on the step. Not Cole. An accomplice he'd heard named in Malone's fear, a hard case who ran with the gang. "That's the camp," Titus whispered. "Cole's men. Cole rests here between towns." Blake's chest loosened. He finally had it. The blind spot was gone. He knew where the outlaw denned. They backed out slow and rode for town to gather Drew and a plan. But when Blake reached the lockup, Drew met him at the door with the outer lock hanging open. "Rider came while you scouted," Drew said, blunt as always. "News from west." He handed Blake a paper. Cole's brother, the sheriff, had turned the warning around. He'd sent word to Cole himself. The outlaw knew Blake was hunting his camp. Blake had the hideout at last. But Cole had his name, his plan, and a full day's start on breaking camp. The hunt was no longer secret. Now it was a race, and Cole had heard the gun cock first.

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Chapter 6

Blake reached the line shack at dawn. The door hung open. The fire pit held only cold ash. Cole and his men had broken camp in the night, just as the warning promised. Blake stepped inside and pressed his palm to the stove. Dead cold. A full day gone, maybe more. He walked out and stared at the ground, but the wind had wiped the yard clean. He had the den at last, and the fox had already left it. Titus knelt by the corral rail with Rocky at his side. The mini shepherd worked the dirt, nose down, tail stiff. "Two horses went east," Titus said. He pointed. "Two more went south, toward the creek road." He frowned. "They split. Cole did it on purpose. He wants us guessing." Blake felt the old dread rise. Guess wrong and Cole robbed another bank while they chased empty tracks. "Which set is his?" Titus said nothing. He let Rocky pull him along the east trail, then the south. The dog lingered longer at the south prints, whining low. Titus crouched and touched a hoofmark. "Deeper here," he said. "This horse carries weight. Saddlebags full. A man running with money packs heavy." He looked up. "South. The creek road. That's Cole." "The east tracks?" "Decoys. Light riders sent to draw us off." Drew rode up hard, dust trailing behind him. Blake's uncle swung down before his horse fully stopped. He wore the deputy star and a grim jaw. He had ridden out from town the moment Blake sent word. "You find him?" Drew asked. "He ran south," Blake said. "Titus reads it in the tracks." Drew studied the split trail. "Could be a trap. Could be Titus is right." He spat in the dirt. "Which one you trust?" Blake looked at his brother. Titus had never once misread the ground. "Him," Blake said. "Always him." Drew nodded once. "Then we ride south. No sense in half a chase." They followed the creek road through the morning. Rocky held the scent, sure and steady. By midday the tracks turned off the water toward a cluster of low buildings. Titus pulled up sharp. "Fresh tracks." He grinned. "We're closing on him." Then Blake saw the smoke ahead. Not campfire smoke. Thick and black, rising from a rooftop in the distant town. His stomach dropped. He knew that sign. A bank left burning to cover a robbery. Blake spurred forward. He had chosen right. The trail was Cole's, the direction true. But Cole had used his head start well. He'd struck a new town before Blake could close the gap. The cold shack was solved. Now a fresh crime burned ahead, and the outlaw was still one strike in front of him.

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