City Kid

City Kid's Arc

1 Chapter

City Kid's dream is being the only child who stayed close to home, enjoying the city life and embracing the choices his siblings made.

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by @DebW
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Chapter 1

The letter from his sister sat on the kitchen table, and City Kid read it twice before his mother came downstairs. His siblings had all left the city years ago. He stayed. He liked the crowded streets, the tall buildings, the subway that carried him downtown each morning. He had a good job and made good money. But the letter asked one question: when was he going to leave too? He folded it and slid it under a plate. His mother shuffled into the kitchen, one hand on the wall. She had needed that hand more lately. "Was that from your sister?" she asked. "Just a card," he said. He made her tea and left for work. Outside, the little house sat behind its white fence, the yard trimmed, the sidewalk swept. He kept it that way himself. His siblings mailed birthday cards. He mowed the grass and paid the bills. On the train, he watched the skyline slide past the window. Clustered towers, winding streets, cafes and shops packed tight below. He loved this view. It felt like proof that he had chosen right. At his desk, his phone buzzed. His brother. City Kid stepped into the hall to answer. "The doctor called me," his brother said. "Mom missed two appointments. She's not telling you everything." City Kid gripped the phone. "She's fine. I check on her every night." "You're at work all day. She fell last week. She didn't want you to worry." The hallway felt too bright. He thought of her hand against the wall that morning. He thought of the tea he had left cooling on the counter. "I can't just quit," he said. "This job pays for everything. Her medicine. The house." "None of us are asking you to quit," his brother said. "We're asking you to see what's really happening." City Kid hung up. He walked back to his desk but could not read the screen. The numbers blurred. He kept picturing his mother alone in the quiet house while he sat forty floors up, downtown, proud of his view. He left early. On the train home, the skyline looked different. Same towers, same streets. But now it looked far away from her, not close to it. When he reached the house, the front door stood open. His mother sat on the porch step, holding the letter he had hidden. She had found it. "Your sister's right," she said. "You gave up too much for me." He sat beside her on the step. "I didn't give up anything. I stayed because I wanted to." But he knew now that wanting to stay was not the same as being enough. One person could not be a job, a nurse, and a son all at once. That night he opened his laptop and typed a search he had never let himself type: home care for aging parents. The city he loved had not changed. What he needed from it had.

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