Cshooter

Cshooter's Arc

3 Chapters

Cshooter's dream is rising to command the elite guard of Amberfall and reshaping it into a force that protects the innocent..

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by @Suromi
Chapter 1 comic
Chapter 1

Cshooter wanted to lead the elite guard of Amberfall, but the guard captains would not even shake his hand. He stood tall and tan in the training yard, and the other soldiers stepped away from him. They always did. His face scared people before he said a word. He had joined the guard to protect the weak, not to frighten them. Still, every time he passed, the whispers started. "The cold one," they called him. Captain Harwick ran the yard that morning. He watched Cshooter land every strike clean and fast. Harwick frowned anyway. "You fight like a killer," he said. "I want men my people trust. Not men they hide from." He turned his back and walked off. The other captains agreed with him. Cshooter's skill meant nothing. His reputation blocked every door. That night Cshooter climbed the stairs of his narrow tower home. Candles glowed in the stacked windows. His dog met him at the top, a gray pit bull with bright, watchful eyes. The dog pressed against his leg and leaned there. Cshooter knelt and rubbed the broad head. His hard face softened completely. "They think I'm cruel," he said. The dog licked his wrist and did not pull away. Then Cshooter heard shouts from the street below. He looked out the window. Flames crawled up the wall of a house across the way. A child screamed from an upper floor. The captains who feared him were nowhere near. Cshooter ran. He reached the burning house first. His dog stayed at his heels. Smoke poured from the doorway. Cshooter tore his cloak off, soaked it in a rain barrel, and wrapped it over his mouth. He went inside. The dog barked at a stairway, then bolted up it. Cshooter followed the sound. He found the child trapped behind a fallen beam. He lifted the beam with both arms and his muscles shook. The child crawled free. Cshooter carried her out as the roof caved behind them. A crowd had gathered. Captain Harwick stood among them, pale. He had arrived too late to help. He watched Cshooter set the child gently into her mother's arms. The dog nosed the girl's cheek until she laughed through her tears. The people who feared Cshooter now stared in a new way. Harwick came forward slowly. "I was wrong about you," he said. He gripped Cshooter's hand at last. "Report to me in the morning. I'll recommend you for the elite guard myself." Cshooter went home with soot on his skin. On his shelf sat a small heart-shaped keepsake, gold and red, made for the person he loved most. He touched it and thought of them. He had won the captain's trust tonight. But Harwick's recommendation would put him before the commander of the elite guard, and that man answered to no one.

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Chapter 2 comic
Chapter 2

Cshooter carried Harwick's letter to the elite guard's training ground at dawn. The commander of that unit answered to no one. Soldiers crossed worn practice lanes and threw spears at sturdy targets. Cshooter held the paper out. The guards looked at it, then at his face, and stepped back the way they always did. Colonel Harrison Blackwood watched from the center of the yard. He was the commander, old and silver-haired, with thick glasses and a chest full of medals. He read Harwick's letter and let it drop in the dirt. "A captain's words," he said. "I decide who serves here. Not Harwick. Where is your record? What battles? What proof?" "I have none that would please you," Cshooter said. "I never fought a war. I trained." Blackwood laughed. "Then you are nothing." He waved at the lanes. "My best men clear this yard in under two minutes. Targets, dummies, the climbing wall. No one beats my time. If words are all you have, go home." Cshooter did not leave. He unrolled his own cloth and pulled out a pair of worn combat gloves. The knuckles were reinforced and scarred from years of drills. He slid them on and tightened the straps. "Run your course against me," he said. "If I beat your men, you watch me. That is all I ask." Blackwood smirked. He knew Cshooter had no record the old man would respect. A race on his own ground seemed a safe way to break him. "Fine," he said. "Fail, and never return." Two of Blackwood's best took the lanes beside Cshooter. A guard dropped his arm. They ran. Cshooter hit the first target dead center. He vaulted the barriers the other two climbed. His gloved fists cracked the wooden dummies apart in single blows. The soldiers fell behind at the wall. Cshooter reached the top, dropped, and struck the last target before his breath caught. The yard went silent. Blackwood checked the time and checked it again. Cshooter had beaten the course record. The guards who feared his face now watched his hands. Blackwood picked up Harwick's letter from the dirt. He did not smile. "Skill," he said. "You have that. I was wrong to need a record." He folded the paper slowly. "But skill alone does not make my guard. My men must trust the man beside them. They still flinch when you pass." He pointed at the soldiers, who stood apart from Cshooter even now. "You proved your arms today. You have not proved they will follow you. Earn their trust, or your speed means nothing." Blackwood turned away. Cshooter pulled off the gloves. He had won the trial. But the commander had set a harder test, one no course could measure. The men he hoped to lead still would not stand near him.

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Chapter 3

The morning after the trial, Cshooter came to the training ground on foot. Blackwood's words still weighed on him. Skill meant nothing if the soldiers would not stand beside him. He needed the men to see past his face. He had no idea how to show them. So he brought the one friend who never flinched. His gray pit bull trotted at his heel, ears up, eyes fixed on him. The soldiers filed into the cafeteria at midday. The wide counter steamed with food. Long tables filled with noise and clatter. Cshooter stepped inside and the noise dropped. Men lowered their trays. Two guards near the door shifted their chairs away. The old pattern again. They saw his hard jaw and tall frame, and they feared him. Cshooter sat alone at the end of a table. The dog lay across his boots. He unwrapped a small frame from his coat and set it upright. It held a picture of his wife and his daughter, cheek to cheek. He ate in silence and looked at them. A tray crashed to the floor. A soldier had tripped near the counter and spilled hot soup on his own arm. He yelped and clutched his wrist. No one moved fast enough. Cshooter was already up. He crossed the hall in long strides. The nearby men braced, unsure what he would do. Cshooter knelt by the burned soldier. He pressed a cold water pitcher against the man's wrist. His voice came out low and gentle. "Hold still. The cold pulls the heat out." The dog padded over and licked the soldier's free hand. The man froze, then let out a shaky laugh. Cshooter steadied his arm and did not let go. The soldiers watched. They had expected the fearsome man to shove past or sneer. Instead he soothed a stranger like a brother. One guard brought a clean cloth. Another crouched beside them. The circle that always opened around Cshooter now closed toward him. When the soldier could stand, Cshooter helped him to a bench. The man glanced at the little frame on the far table. "Yours?" he asked. Cshooter nodded. "My wife. My girl." The soldier studied his face, the hard lines softer now. "You don't look so scary up close," he said. A few men laughed. This time Cshooter was inside the sound, not outside it. By the end of the meal, three soldiers sat at his table. They asked about the dog. They asked where he trained. No one pulled their chair away. The fear had not vanished. But it had cracked. Blackwood watched from the doorway. He had seen the whole thing. He said nothing and left. That evening a guard brought Cshooter a message. The commander wanted to test his new standing. Tomorrow, Cshooter would lead a squad on a live patrol. If the men followed his orders, he was in. If they refused, he was done.

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