Dom Topper

Dom Topper's Arc

3 Chapters

Dom Topper's dream is being known as a great adventurer with profound skills and an even more profound spirit while striving for greatness and appreciating the little things.

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by @Havoc
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Chapter 1

Dom Topper had one gold coin left, and he meant to turn it into a legend. He wanted the whole city of Despairia to speak his name. Not as a con man. As a great adventurer, brave and deep and worth remembering. So far, the city only knew his face. Women blushed. Men bought him drinks. He smiled and took what they offered, and every night he went to bed no closer to greatness. Tonight he stood outside a refined men's bathhouse, its arched windows glowing with colored glass. A crowd of men in towels waited by the doors. They pressed forward, all wanting the same thing: a turn in the private rooms hidden beyond. Dom heard the rumor whispered down the line. Someone inside kept a pair of glowing salamanders, sleek and marked with strange light. Whoever tamed them, the story went, would earn a true adventurer's name. Dom did not wait in line. He never did. He caught the eye of the doorman, flashed the grin that always worked, and slipped past the crowd. Behind him, men groaned. "That's cheating," one shouted. Dom only winked. Inside, steam curled through quiet halls. A woman in a keeper's robe blocked the last door. She held a lantern and studied his face without softening. "You're the one they talk about," she said. "The pretty stranger with no past." "They talk. I deliver," Dom said. He leaned close and gave her the smile. She did not blush. "Charm opens my door once," she said. "It won't hold the salamanders. Nothing false can touch them. They only come to a true heart." She stepped aside anyway, curious to watch him fail. The private room glowed. Two salamanders rested on a warm stone, their bodies shimmering green and violet. Dom knelt and reached out with practiced ease, the same hand that had opened every door in Despairia. The salamanders hissed and scattered. Their light snapped off like a snuffed candle. Dom lunged again. He knocked the lantern. The room went dark, and he heard the two creatures vanish into a hidden passage in the wall. When the keeper relit the lantern, the stone sat empty. "You lost them," she said. "They'll tell that story now. The famous face who chased the salamanders into the dark." Dom stood in the empty room, his one coin gone to the door fee, his grin useless for the first time. The charm had carried him past the line. It had failed the moment something real was asked. He finally understood the cost. A pretty face got him in. It could never get him what he wanted. "Where do they go?" he asked. The keeper pointed at the black passage. "Into the grove where they were born. The trees glow like they do. No liar comes back out." Dom looked at the dark opening. For the first time, he chose the hard door. He stepped into the passage after them.

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Chapter 2

The passage sealed behind Dom with a grinding thud. He turned and pressed both hands to cold stone where the opening had been. No seam. No door. The keeper's warning came back to him: liars don't return. He was inside now, and the way out was gone. He drew his dagger. Its blade held a faint glow, enough to light three steps ahead. Around him the grove stood black and thick. Trees crowded close. Leaves shifted with sounds he couldn't place. This was the kind of place he hated most. Too much noise. Too much cover hiding what he couldn't see. He could map a room in a minute. Here his skill felt useless. He held the dagger high and walked. The salamanders had come this way. If he found them, maybe he found the way out. He stepped over roots. He watched the ground, reading its slope the way he always did. The land tilted down and to the left. Water somewhere. He followed it. The glow led him to a small clearing. A carved chest sat under a glowing tree. Its wood was dark, wrapped in runes and set with bright stones. A gold lock held it shut. And beside it, cross-legged in the dirt, sat Lyra Threadweaver. Dom's chest loosened at the sight of her. His oldest friend. The one who never fell for his grin, who told him the truth when no one else would. He had no idea how she'd gotten here. He didn't care. "You followed me," he said. "I got here first." Lyra didn't look up. Her fingers worked a length of thread, pulling and knotting. "There's another way in. For people who don't lie their way through doors." Dom knelt beside her. "The passage sealed. I can't get back." "I know." She tied off the thread and held it up. A thin woven cord, faintly shining. "The chest is locked to a true answer. Not a key. It asks what you came for. Lie, and it stays shut forever. So do you." Dom looked at the lock. He thought of every easy answer he'd ever given. The grin. The line that opened doors. "I came to be great," he said. Then he stopped. That wasn't the whole of it. "No. I came because I'm tired of being nothing but a face. I want to earn something. Just once." The lock clicked. The lid rose. Inside, curled on soft cloth, lay the two salamanders. Their light woke slow, green and violet, spilling over Dom's hands. They did not scatter. They climbed onto his open palm. "They came," Dom whispered. "They came," Lyra said. She stood and brushed the dirt from her knees. "That was the true heart part. But the salamanders live here. Taking them out is a different problem." She looked at the black trees. "And I still haven't found the way home."

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Chapter 3

The salamanders sat warm in Dom's cupped hands. Their light spread green and violet over his fingers. Beside him, Lyra stared at the black trees. "We have the salamanders," Dom said. "Now we find the door." But there was no door. There was only forest, and the forest went on. Dom made himself think. He couldn't map noise. He couldn't map leaves. But he could read ground. He knelt and pressed his palm to the dirt. The slope told him where water ran. He followed it, salamanders on his shoulder, Lyra close behind. The trees opened. Ahead stood a cluster of pale trunks, their leaves glowing blue and rose. A softer light than the dark grove. Under the biggest tree sat a stone, half swallowed by moss. Carved letters marked its face. Dom brushed the moss aside and read words he didn't know. "It's writing," Lyra said. She traced a letter with one finger. "Old. Older than the grove, maybe." She was cunning about such things. She had spent years reading what others walked past. Dom circled the stone. On its back, hidden under a curtain of moss, he found two holes cut into the rock. He leaned close. Each hole had a shape. A body. A tail. Four small legs. "Lyra," he said. "Come see this." She knelt beside him. "Salamanders," she breathed. "Those are salamander shapes." Dom's heart kicked. He lifted the two creatures from his shoulder. They didn't pull away. He held them near the stone. Their light brightened. They wanted this. He felt it in the way they stretched toward the holes. "If I put them in," Dom said, "I might lose them. That's what I came for." "And if you don't," Lyra said, "we die in here. There's no way back the way we came." Dom looked at the salamanders. He thought of the man he used to be, the one who kept every prize with a grin. Then he set the creatures against the holes. They slid in like keys into a lock. Their bodies fit the carved shapes exactly. The stone shook. Light poured from the letters. A grinding sound rose from below the moss, deep and slow. The ground trembled. Roots pulled back. Between the pale trees, a wooden cabin rose from the earth. Flowering vines wrapped its walls. Warm light glowed in its windows. A door stood open, waiting. "A way out," Dom said. His voice shook. But the salamanders stayed locked in the stone. Their light dimmed. Dom reached for them. His fingers met cold rock. They wouldn't come. Lyra put a hand on his arm. "They opened the door for us," she said. "That was the price." Dom stared at the empty shapes in the stone. He had earned his way out. He had lost the very thing he chased. And through the cabin's open door, something new waited in the glow.

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