Farox bloodsnow

Farox bloodsnow's Arc

4 Chapters

Farox bloodsnow's dream is mapping a safe trade road from his village to the distant coast so his people are never isolated again..

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by @Farox
Chapter 1 comic
Chapter 1

Farox bloodsnow had drawn the trade road for three winters, and today the first step of it was blocked by teeth. He crouched behind a boulder at the mouth of the pass, the only gap out of the valley. Beyond it lay the long route to the coast, the road he dreamed would keep his village from starving alone each winter. But six monsters had claimed the pass. They were lean and gray, with long jaws and eyes that caught the morning light. One gnawed a bone that was too large for a deer. He counted them twice. Six. He had a rusty short sword and a heavy stone shield, both older than he was. His face bore the scar from the last pack he'd turned away from the homestead. He touched it out of habit. High above, his black owl circled. Her pale talons shone like ice. She dropped and landed on the boulder beside him. She stared at the pass, then at him, and gave a low click. "I know," Farox whispered. "Too many to charge." He studied the ground. A tall stoak tree leaned over the narrow throat of the pass. Its trunk was banded with bark hard as iron. Even an axe would only chip it. But the monsters stood packed beneath it, crowded by the stone walls. If the tree came down on them, the stone would do the killing. He could not cut it. He did not need to. The roots on the uphill side had already lifted the soil, loosened by old rain. One good shove, at the right place, might finish what the storms began. Farox set his shield on his back and climbed. He moved slow, keeping the trunk between himself and the pack. A squat little creature with a pig's snout scrambled out of the brush and squealed at his boots. The nearest monster lifted its head. No time now. Farox threw his weight against the leaning trunk and drove his legs. The stoak groaned. Roots tore from the wet earth. The monsters below looked up as the shadow swung over them. The tree fell. Its iron-banded crown crashed into the throat of the pass. Two monsters vanished under the trunk. The others scattered, pinned between stone and timber, and Farox came down the slope with the rusty sword already swinging. The stone shield caught a lunge and broke a jaw. He killed three in the narrow gap where they could not circle him. The last one fled into the valley. Farox stood among the wreck, breathing hard. The pass was open. But the fallen tree now choked it, a wall of iron bark no man could move alone. And the sixth monster had run back toward the homestead and the village behind it. The owl landed on the dead trunk and clicked once. Farox wiped his blade. He had cleared the pass and blocked it in the same stroke, and he had loosed a wounded hunter among his own people.

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Chapter 2

Farox tracked the wounded monster from the pass. Blood dotted the frost in a thin line. The trail did not run toward the village. It ran sideways, up a ridge of broken stone. One monster was not the threat. The den was. If more waited there, no trader would ever use his road. He followed the blood to find the nest and end it. The trail led to a ruined watchtower. Its stone walls had split with age. Weeds grew from the cracks, and the top was broken open to the sky. Farox crouched behind a fallen block. His owl dropped to his shoulder, pale talons gripping tight. She stared at the dark doorway and clicked low. He drew the rusty sword. Inside, the smell hit him first. Rot and old blood. In the center of the floor sat a heap of frozen bones, streaked dark, scraps of meat still clinging. Deer bones. And longer bones that were not deer. Against the far wall slumped a dead man in torn gear, a cloak rotted to rags, a knife still at his belt. An explorer. Someone who had tried this pass before Farox and never left it. The owl screamed. Farox spun. A tall gaunt shape unfolded from the shadow of the stairs. Grey skin stretched over ribs. White eyes, no color in them. Its mouth opened on rows of needle teeth. This was no pack hunter. This was what the pack had served. It lunged, claws out, faster than its thin body should allow. Farox took the first swipe on his shield. The blow rang up his arm and numbed it. He stabbed low. The sword skidded off hard grey flesh. The creature raked his shoulder, and warm blood ran down his chest. He stumbled back against the bone pile and nearly fell. The owl dove at its face. The creature flinched and swatted at the bird. That was the moment. Farox drove forward with his whole weight behind the shield. He pinned the thing against the broken wall. Loose stones gave way behind it. He pushed harder, shoulder to iron-banded wood, legs driving like he had driven the leaning tree. The creature shrieked. Its own clawed foot slipped on bone. Farox raised the sword and brought it down on the exposed throat. Grey blood sprayed. The thing shuddered and went still. Farox dropped to his knees, breathing hard. The den was clear. No pack remained, only this one dead master and the bones of those it had hunted. His road was safe from the monsters of the pass. But he looked at the frozen bones again. The owl landed and pulled a strip of cloth from the pile. A scrap of a map, inked by hand, marked with a route he did not recognize. Someone had charted a different path to the coast. Farox folded the scrap into his belt. He was not the first to try this road. He needed to learn why the last one had failed. After Farox regained his composure it was time to head back home to make sure all was set in place before setting off.

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Chapter 3

Farox spread the map scrap on a flat rock. The owl perched beside it, watching. He traced the inked line with one finger. It curved past a mark he did not know, a drawing of a tall stone spire ringed with boards. No elder in his village had named such a place. He had no route. He had only a dead man's guess and a scrap of cloth. The owl pushed her beak into the scrap. She clicked, sharp and loud. Her pale talons scraped the rock. Then she dropped off, flew low over the frost, and circled back. She landed, screamed, and flew the same way again. Farox frowned. He lifted the scrap to his own nose. Under the rot and ink he caught it. Salt. Faint, but there. The sea had touched this cloth. "You smell the water," he said. The owl screamed once more and set off downhill. Farox shouldered his pack and followed. He walked for two days. The owl held her line, always pulling toward lower ground. The pines thinned. The wind changed. It grew wet and heavy and carried that same salt smell, stronger now. On the third morning the trees broke open, and Farox stopped. Below him lay the coast. Rolling surf struck a long curve of pale sand. Dark rocks jutted from the water. Green waves folded white against the shore. He had reached the sea. His road had an end at last. Then he saw the fight. Two shapes thrashed in the shallows. They were not men. Scaled hides, fins ridging their spines, clawed hands locked together. Fish-people, snarling, teeth bared, rolling in the foam. One drove the other under. Water churned red. A shout came from the sand. A boy ran toward the water, thin, barefoot, black hair wild in the wind. He gripped a fishing spear in both hands. He could not have been more than fifteen. He leveled the spear at the nearest scaled brawler and froze, too close and too small. Farox did not think. He drew his sword and ran down the slope. "Boy! Away from them!" The boy turned, eyes wide. "They took my catch! They'll take the whole beach!" He jabbed the spear anyway. One fish-creature wheeled toward him, jaws open. Farox reached him first. He shoved the boy behind his shield and met the lunge. Claws screeched off the iron bands. He braced his boots in the wet sand and held. The creatures saw the blade. They hissed, broke apart, and slipped back into the surf. The water swallowed them. Then the beach went quiet, only the waves and the boy's hard breathing. Farox lowered his sword. The boy stared at him, spear still raised. "I'm Kai," the boy said. "Kai TundraTide. Who are you, and where did you come from?" "From the mountains," Farox said. "I came to find the coast." He looked at the water where the creatures had vanished. He had reached the sea. But the sea was not empty. Under crashing waves Farox saw a glint and went toward it to find a new trident and spear he could use.

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Chapter 4

Farox pulled the trident from the surf and turned to Kai. The boy still gripped his spear, breath ragged. "Those things," Farox said. "Where do they come from?" "The water. They wreck my fishing grounds." Kai pointed down the shore. "They nest near the old tower. I've seen them crawl out there." Farox followed his arm. Far down the beach stood a lighthouse, boards nailed across its windows, its stone streaked brown with old rot. His problem sharpened. He had reached the coast, but he had no landmarks to fix his map. No town, no road he could trust. If these creatures bred near the tower, no trade road would ever hold. He had to clear the source. "I'm going there," Farox said. "Stay back." "No." Kai's voice went flat. "They ruined my waters. I came to kill them before you showed up." He fell into step beside Farox, spear ready. Farox saw the set of his jaw and let him come. They reached the tower. Two fish-creatures circled in the shallows below it, locked together, clawing and snapping. One drove the other under. Then both heads turned toward the men. They broke apart and charged up the sand. Farox met the first with the trident. He took the lunge on the three prongs and shoved hard, pinning it to the ground. Its tail lashed sand into his eyes. Kai darted past and drove his spear through its throat. It went still. The second creature leapt at Kai's back. Farox swung and caught it mid-air. The trident punched through its ribs. It thrashed, clawed at the shaft, then sagged. Farox pulled the prongs free. The beach went quiet again. Kai stood over the first body, chest heaving. "That's two less," he said. "There'll be more." But his shoulders eased. The waste stopped here, at least for now. Farox climbed to the tower door. The wood hung loose on rusted hinges. Inside, past fallen stone, a chest sat against the wall. Salt had eaten its iron bands to flakes. He pried the lid with the trident. It cracked open. Inside lay a folded map. Farox lifted it to the light from the door. Ink lines covered it, land and water, towns marked with small roofs, roads threading between rivers. Names he did not know ringed the coast. At last he could place himself. The lighthouse, the shore, the way back to the mountains, all drawn and true. Under the map sat a dark brown cloak. He shook it out. A faint shimmer ran through the cloth, like mist over water. He draped it over his arm. Kai leaned in the doorway. "Someone lived here once." "Someone who knew these roads," Farox said. He pressed the map flat on the chest lid and traced the inked line from the coast inland. For the first time, the path home was not a guess. Now he had to learn which roads still held, and which the fish-creatures had already drowned. Maybe along the way he will find who made this map and why it never saw the light of day and kept his village in the dark this whole time. Every answer leaves more questions.

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