Jarek the Vexed

Jarek the Vexed's Arc

5 Chapters

Jarek the Vexed's dream is binding the fen's vengeful bog-spirits into servitude beneath his bat-wing banner..

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by @Xyphos
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Chapter 1

Jarek the Vexed wanted an army of bog-spirits, and he had no way to make them obey. He knelt in the black mud of Muckrake Fen, horned helmet dripping, and watched pale shapes drift between the reeds. They were dead men the fen had swallowed. They ignored him. His bat-wing banner hung limp on its pole, meaning nothing to the dead. To bind them, he needed the binding rite. Every scholar who once knew it had rotted here centuries ago. His skeletal mount stamped behind him. The Redeye Bonehorse tossed its ragged mane, red eyes burning through the gloom. Its ribs showed white through torn hide. Jarek stood and studied the one dry landmark in the swamp. On a low rise sat a gothic manor, its spires clawing the sky. Red light bled from every tall window. If any ritual had survived the fen, it waited behind those stained glass panes. He rode the bonehorse up the rise and shouldered through the great doors. Inside, dust and violet light. A ruined study stretched before him, shelves collapsed, books turned to pulp. He tore through them with spiked gauntlets. Nothing. No rite. No words. His visor glowed hotter as his patience burned away. The manor had kept its secret and let it rot with everything else. Then the floor shook. A shape unfolded from the dark at the room's far end. It stood taller than Jarek, gray muscle exposed, a fleshless horse skull for a head. White light poured from its hollow eyes. Two rusted cleavers dragged sparks across the stone. Malgrim Bonecleaver. The fen's old butcher, the thing that had killed the last scholars and eaten their knowledge. "You dig for the binding rite," Malgrim said. His voice was wet gravel. "I ate the men who wrote it. The words live in my skull now." He tapped the bone with one cleaver. "Kneel, little horned thing, and serve me. I will teach you." Jarek did not kneel. He drew his blade. "I came to Muckrake Fen to command it, not to bow in it." They met in the center of the study. Cleavers rang off plate. Malgrim was stronger, but slow. Jarek ducked a swing that split a marble column, then drove his sword up through the exposed muscle of Malgrim's chest. The butcher roared and dropped. White light guttered in the skull. Jarek pressed his gauntlet to the cracked bone. The rite spilled into him at once, a flood of stolen words in a dead tongue. He had the binding rite. But the knowledge came with its former owner's rage. Malgrim's spirit did not fade. It coiled inside Jarek's skull, whispering, clawing to take his body from within. Jarek staggered from the manor into the violet dusk. He knew the rite now. He also carried a hungry dead warlord behind his eyes, and it wanted out.

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Chapter 2

Jarek made it halfway down the rise before the butcher's spirit struck. His legs locked. His own hand rose against his will and clawed at his visor. Malgrim's voice filled his skull, wet and hungry. *Give me the body. You are meat.* Jarek dropped to one knee in the black mud. He knew the binding rite now. He could bind a bog-spirit. But the thing inside him had no grave, no true name he had dug from stone. He could not bind what he could not name. He forced himself toward a cluster of red pools glinting near the reeds. He needed salt, iron, focus. His gauntlet shook. His arm swung and smashed his own helm. "Stop hitting yourself," a flat voice said. "You're losing." A dark elf stood among the reeds. Two crossbows, one in each fist, both pointed at him. A mask covered most of her face. Purple hair showed under her hood. She did not lower the weapons. "I've tracked a stolen relic across this fen for a year," she said. "You're the loudest thing in it. What's eating you?" "A dead warlord," Jarek said. His jaw fought him for the words. "He wants my body. I have no name to bind him." Syrae studied him. She did not flinch when his hand jerked again. "Then don't bind him," she said. "Starve him. A spirit needs a mouth to speak through. Shut yours." Jarek understood. Malgrim ruled by voice, by the words pouring into his skull. Give the voice nothing to grip. Jarek pressed his lips shut behind the visor. He held the binding rite's dead syllables in his mouth, the way he held a spirit's true name. Not to bind Malgrim. To fill the space Malgrim wanted. The butcher screamed inside him. Jarek's spine bowed. He clamped his teeth on the stolen words and refused to let them out. He crawled to the nearest red pool and drove his spiked gauntlet down into the muck, iron into ground, an anchor. He held the name-shaped words behind his teeth and did not speak. Malgrim's voice thinned. Clawed. Faded to a whisper, then a scratch, then a cold weight low in Jarek's chest. Not gone. Caged. Jarek breathed. His hand was his own again. He stood, mud sheeting off his plate. Syrae still held her crossbows level. "He's not dead," Jarek said. "He's buried in me. I feel him." "Then keep moving," she said. "The last one I knew who went quiet, died quiet." She lowered one crossbow, not the other. "The relic. It came out of that manor on the rise. You've been inside." Jarek looked back at the red-lit spires. He had torn that study apart and taken only the rite. "I've been inside," he said. "I saw no relic." "You weren't looking," Syrae said. "Now you will." The warlord slept in his chest, and Jarek had a hunter at his back who would not leave the fen until she got what she came for.

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Chapter 3

Jarek had the rite. He had iron, salt, and a will to bind the fen's furious spirits. But every name he needed lay buried in the muck, and the warlord in his chest waited for him to slip. He could not bind a spirit without its true name. Speak the wrong one, and its fury would break loose on him. So he searched the ruins for graves, for stones, for anything that held a name he could dig out and trust. He found the tower first. A tall shaft of dark stone stood over the reeds, its windows leaking a sick purple glow. Torches guttered along its heights though no one lived there. Jarek circled its base and found nothing carved. No graves. Only a cluster of broken cottages nearby, their timbers snapped, their roofs caved in. He searched the wreckage. Under the collapsed stones of one ruined cottage, he found a slab. Someone had laid a marker flat and let the mud swallow it. Jarek knelt and dug with his gauntlets. The purple light from the tower spilled across the stone. He wiped the grime and read a single name cut deep. "That name will get you killed," a voice said. A hooded figure stood among the broken timbers. They leaned on a rough staff. A green gem glowed at its top and lit their empty hood from below. Jarek had heard of grave-witches who worked this fen. This was one, and they had watched him dig. "The spirit under that stone hates that name," the figure said. "The living gave it. The dead never took it. Bind with it and you'll feed yourself to it." Jarek did not answer. He held the binding rite's words behind his teeth and starved the warlord low in his chest. Then he looked at the stone again. The name was carved by a mason's hand, clean and proud. Too clean. A name for the family, not the dead. "What name did the dead take?" Jarek asked. The figure tapped the staff on the slab. "Turn it over." Jarek gripped the edge and heaved. The slab rolled. On its hidden underside, scratched by a shaking hand, was a second name. Older. Rougher. The name the dead had claimed in the dark. He set his iron in the ground around a red pool. He poured his ring of salt. He held the true name in his mouth and spoke the rite. The reeds went still. Something rose from the muck, howling, then bent low. It could not break the ring. The name held it. Jarek pressed the last words home, and the spirit sank into the salt, bound. One corner of the fen fell silent. The hooded figure was gone. But their staff had left a mark in the mud, pointing away from the tower, toward deeper water. Jarek had his first bound spirit, and a stranger who knew far too much about his work.

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Chapter 4

The trail from the tower led Jarek to a wider stretch of muck. He drove his iron into the ground and poured his ring of salt around a cluster of deep red pools. Their thick surface caught the torchlight from the tower behind him. He held the spirit's true name in his mouth and spoke the rite. Something tore free of the pools and rose, howling. But this one did not bend. It thrashed against the salt and the iron shook in the mud. Jarek felt the leash slipping. The spirit wanted a body. It clawed at the ring, hunting a weak point. And in his chest, the caged warlord Malgrim stirred at the noise, pressing up his throat, trying to speak. Two furies now, one loose and one buried. If the bound spirit broke the ring, it would find the crack Malgrim had already opened. Jarek needed to ground it fast. A bolt hissed past his shoulder and split a red pool. He turned. The dark elf hunter stood on higher ground, a crossbow in each hand. Syrae had trailed him since the manor, the woman who wanted her stolen relic and held that debt over him. Her mask hid her mouth. Her black eyes did not. "It wants a mouth," she said. "You gave it one. You're talking." Jarek clamped his teeth shut. She was right. Every word of the rite fed the spirit a voice. It heard him and grew. "Bind it to iron," Syrae said. "Not to you. Anchor the name in dead metal." Jarek looked at the iron rods sunk in the mud. He had used them as a fence. Never as a home. He pressed his gauntlet flat against the nearest rod. Then he stopped speaking the rite aloud. He shaped the true name in silence and drove it down through his hand into the iron. The spirit lunged for his chest. It struck the iron instead, pulled by its own name. The rod glowed red, then went cold. The howling stopped. Malgrim sank back down, starved of the noise. The red pools stilled. A horse rose from the muck beside the iron. Its hide hung in strips over bare rib bone. Its eyes burned red. The spirit had a shape now, bound to the metal and through it to the fen. It stood and waited for his command. Two corners of the fen were his. Syrae lowered one crossbow. "You bind them wrong. That one nearly wore your skin." She stepped closer. "I kept it off you. Now you owe me the manor. We go back for the relic. Tonight." Jarek said nothing. He held the silence like a stone in his mouth. He had a second spirit and a bone horse to ride the deep water. He also had a debt with a bolt behind it, and no more room to refuse it.

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Chapter 5

Jarek stood by the bone horse and watched the sky. The light was already going gray. Syrae wanted the manor by nightfall. But the trail the grave-witch left pointed the other way, toward the deep water, where the oldest spirits waited. Those were the ones he needed. He could not reach the deep water and the manor both before dark. The fen was too wide to cross twice. "You're thinking," Syrae said. She had followed him from the last binding, two crossbows loose in her hands. She was the dark elf who held his debt, the one whose bolt had kept the wild spirit off his skin. "Thinking wastes light. We go to the manor." "The relic isn't why I came here," Jarek said. He kept his voice flat, so the caged warlord in his chest would not catch it. "The spirits are that way." He pointed at the deep water. Syrae did not turn her head. "I don't care why you came. You owe me a manor. Tonight." She named the debt plain, then stopped. Jarek looked at the horse. It had risen from the muck, bound to iron, and it did not tire. It could cross deep water. It could carry weight through the manor's flooded halls. He had thought of it as a mount for the hunt. Now he saw another use. "Ride it," he said. Syrae's black eyes moved to him. "To the manor," Jarek said. "You know what the relic looks like. I don't. I searched that place once and found nothing. You'll find it faster than I would. The horse carries you there and back before dark." He held the reins out. "I go the other way, on foot, for the spirits." She studied the horse. Its red eyes burned. Strips of hide hung off bare rib. Most people would not touch it. Syrae stepped close and took the reins from his gauntlet. "You send me alone," she said. "With your dead horse. To do your errand." "You want the relic. I want the spirits. This gets us both by dark." She swung up onto the bone horse. It held her weight without a sound. "If the manor takes me and you run," she said, "I find you. I don't stop moving." She turned the horse toward the far spires and rode. Jarek watched the red eyes shrink into the dusk. Then he turned to the deep water and walked. His iron rods hung at his belt. His salt pouch swung against his hip. He had traded his mount to buy this crossing, and now he had no fast way back. The ground grew softer under his boots. The reeds thickened. Somewhere ahead, in the black water, the old spirits waited, and their names were not on any grave marker he had found yet. He would need them before Syrae returned.

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