Jonathan Hemsworth

Jonathan Hemsworth's Arc

7 Chapters

Jonathan Hemsworth's dream is driving their electric car until it runs out of juice in the middle of nowhere and feeling eerie as the car dies in front of a gas station.

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Chapter 1

The Tesla died with twelve miles of charge promised and nine feet of road delivered. Jonathan Hemsworth coasted the last stretch in silence, the dashboard blinking red, his hands tight on the wheel. He worked in software licensing. He owned a car that cost more than most houses. He did not own the kind of sense that checks a charging map before driving into nowhere. The car rolled the final inches and stopped in front of an old gas station. Its windows glowed warm and yellow. Two pumps stood out front, the kind that took cash and had rust in every seam. "We made it," Jonathan said. Eva did not answer. She sat with her arms crossed, her black glasses catching the pump lights. She had told him, an hour back, to turn around. She had said it once, then stopped saying it. That was worse. Jonathan got out. The air smelled like wet leaves and cold metal. "See? There's a station. Someone's here. We're fine." Eva climbed out and shut her door hard. "These pumps are gas. We drive electric." She looked at him over the glasses. "You understand that." He opened his mouth. Nothing came. A door creaked. An old man stepped out from the station, bald, with a grey beard down his chest. His uniform was blue and stained dark with oil. He stopped on the step and looked at the white car, then at the two of them. "You Ole Jeb?" Jonathan asked. He'd seen a name on the window. "Our car ran out. We need a tow. Or a charger. Or a phone." Jeb did not move toward them. "You folks need to keep going," he said. "This place is cursed." Eva laughed once, short and dry. "We have no charge. We can't go anywhere." "Then you shouldn't have come," Jeb said. He came down one step. His boots were heavy on the wood. "Nobody stops in Shady Brook. I tell every one of them. The ones that don't listen, I don't see again." Jonathan looked past him at the dark treeline. Shapes moved where the light ended. He made himself look back at Jeb. "We just need help. My wife is cold. It's getting late." "Late's right," Jeb said. He glanced at the sky, then at the road behind them, empty in both directions. "You got maybe an hour of quiet. Get in there." He jerked his head at the station door. "Lock it. Don't open for anything that knocks." Eva stepped closer to Jonathan. Her shoulder touched his arm. It was the first time she'd touched him all day. "Knocks," Jonathan repeated. "You'll hear it," Jeb said, and went inside. Eva pulled her coat tight. "Go," she told Jonathan. "Whatever that was. Go." The dead Tesla ticked behind them as the metal cooled. Jonathan walked toward the warm yellow door. There was nowhere else to walk.

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Chapter 2

Inside, the station smelled like dust and old coffee. Jonathan pushed the door shut. Jeb stood behind a counter, the same oil-stained man who had told them the town was cursed. Jonathan's hands shook. He did not want to think about the treeline or the hour Jeb had promised. "We need somewhere to sleep," he said. "A hotel. A room. Anything." Jeb laughed. It was a dry, cracked sound. "Hotel." He pointed a thumb at the window. Across the lot stood a long, broken building. Its sign read SUNSET MOTEL. Every window was smashed. Grass grew through the doorways. "That's your hotel. Nobody's slept there in forty years. You don't want to." Eva pulled her coat tight. "Then where do we go?" "Right here," Jeb said. "Doors locked. You wait it out." He reached under the counter and brought up a bottle of brown liquor. He filled two dirty glasses and slid one toward Jonathan. "Drink. Calms the nerves. You'll need them calm." Jonathan took the glass. He should have said no. He should have stayed by the door. Instead he drank, and the warmth spread, and Jeb poured again. The old man talked about the road and the cars that never came back. Jonathan nodded. His fear turned soft and far away. He forgot Eva was cold. He forgot to watch the clock. Eva watched him laugh at something Jeb said. Her mouth went flat. "Bathroom," she said. Neither man answered. Jeb tipped his head toward the back. "Out and around. Careful of the floor." She went out the side door alone. The bathroom sat apart, a squat concrete box with cracked walls and stains running down the stone. No lights. She used her phone's dim glow. On the floor by the sink lay a book. It was large and bound in dark leather, worn soft at the edges. Strange symbols covered the front, pressed deep into the hide. She did not know the word stamped on the cover, but the sight of it made her skin cold. Necronomicon. She crouched. The leather felt warm, like something living. She pulled her hand back. Eva walked back fast. She shoved the station door open. Jonathan sat slumped over the counter, cheeks red, glass half empty. Jeb grinned beside him. "Get up," Eva said. Her voice was flat and hard. "You're drunk. There's a book out there. It's wrong. All of this is wrong." Jonathan blinked at her. "Eva, sit. Jeb says we're fine." "We are not fine." She grabbed his arm and pulled. He barely moved. That was the moment she understood. He could not help her. He was gone, soft and useless, exactly when she needed him sharp. Then a sound came from the dark outside. Slow and heavy. A knock against the door. Jeb stopped grinning. His face went grey. "That's it," he whispered. "It's here. Don't open it."

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Chapter 3

The knock came again, harder. Jeb backed against the wall. Jonathan slid off his stool and hit the floor. He laughed at nothing. Eva stared at her husband, red-faced and useless, the man who once cried over a hotel room while she fixed it. She would not wait for whatever stood outside. She grabbed the liquor bottle by the neck and yanked the side door open. Rain slammed her face. The cold woke her fully. She stepped into the lot and turned toward the front of the station. A figure stood there in the downpour. Black coat, soaked through, hood dripping. One hand hung at its side. In that hand was a curved blade, a hook knife, catching the moonlight. "Stop," Eva said. Her voice did not shake. "Who are you." The figure turned. Under the hood was a man's face, thin and withered, skin pulled tight over bone. He did not answer. He raised the hook knife and stepped toward her. His mouth moved, but no sound came, only the same low words over and over, like the pages of the book she had found. Eva did not run. Running was what Jonathan would do. She threw the bottle. It struck the man's shoulder and burst. Brown liquor and glass sprayed across his coat. He flinched. The knife dropped an inch. That inch was enough. She darted past him, back through the side door, and slammed it shut. "Help me," she said. Jonathan was on his knees now, blinking up at her. Behind them a maple stood black against the sky, its red leaves shaking in the wind. The hook scraped down the door, slow, testing the wood. Jeb pointed a shaking finger at the counter. "The bar," he whispered. "Wedge it." Eva looked at Jonathan. He would not move fast enough. She grabbed a fallen shelf plank herself and jammed it under the door handle. The scraping stopped. For a moment there was only rain. Then the man in the coat spoke, clear this time, close against the wood. "You read from it. You called me. Only the book sends me back." Eva went still. She understood. The thing outside came because of the leather book in the concrete bathroom. She had touched it. She had read the word on its cover aloud without knowing. "Jonathan." She crouched and took his face in both hands. "Listen to me. I need you sober. I need you now." He nodded, slow, scared into something like focus. The scraping began again at the window this time. Eva stood. She knew what she had to do next, and it terrified her. She had to go back to that bathroom, in the dark, and bring the book here. It was the only thing that could end this. And she could not send Jonathan. She would have to go alone.

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Chapter 4

The hook scraped at the window. Eva crouched over her husband. He blinked up at her, mouth slack, the liquor still thick in him. She could not send him to the bathroom in this state. She could not go herself and leave him drunk on the floor. She had to fix him first. The man who summoned the thing waited outside in the rain, and every minute Jonathan stayed this way, the closer the blade came to the glass. "On your feet," Eva said. She hauled at his arm. He slid halfway up, then sagged. His weight pulled her down with him. "Jonathan. Stand." Jeb pressed against the far wall, hands shaking. He would not help. He only stared at the window where the hook worked at the frame. Eva knew she was alone with a drunk husband and a frozen old man. She grabbed the water jug from the counter and dumped it over Jonathan's head. He gasped and shoved his glasses up his nose. "Cold," he said. "That's cold." "Good. Wake up." She slapped his cheek, once, hard. His eyes came into focus. "Look at me. The thing outside wants us dead. I need the book from the bathroom. You are going to help me walk there, or you are going to hold this door. Choose now." He swallowed. He looked at the window, at the curved blade scraping the glass, and something in him hardened. For once he did not look away from the shapes. "Door," he said. "I'll hold the door. You get the book. I can't walk straight, but I can push against wood." It was not brave. It was honest. Eva took it. She pulled him to the door and pressed his shoulder against the wedged plank. His feet skidded, then caught. He braced both arms and locked his elbows. "Go," he said. "I've got it. Go." The window cracked. A thin line split the glass from the hook's point. Jonathan flinched but held. Eva ran for the dark bathroom, her only path to the book that could end this. Behind her, Jonathan shouted through the door at the man in the coat. His voice broke, but the words kept coming. He was keeping the thing's attention on him. For the first time since the car died, he was doing something. Eva reached the black doorway of the ruined concrete bathroom. Cold air breathed out of it. Somewhere in that dark lay the leather book. She stepped inside. Behind her, Jonathan's boots squeaked against the floor as the door shuddered under a heavy blow. He did not fall. He was sober enough to fight now, and that was the one thing she had needed.

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Chapter 5

The door held under the blow. Jonathan pressed his shoulder against the plank and shouted at the shape in the coat. Behind him, deep in the black bathroom, Eva searched the floor with her hands. Her fingers found cracked concrete and cold water. Then leather. The book. She dragged it into the gray light of the doorway. The cover felt warm. That was wrong. The metal symbols on it seemed to pull at her eyes. She meant to carry it straight to Jonathan. Instead she stopped. The strange marks held her still, like a face she almost knew. "Eva," Jonathan called. "I've got it. Bring the book." His voice cracked. The hook scraped the frame again. "Eva!" She did not answer. The buckle came loose under her thumb without effort. The book fell open on its own. Rows of twisted letters filled the page. She should not have understood them. She did. The words rose in her throat and she read them aloud in a flat, steady voice. Jonathan turned his head. "Stop. Stop reading. That's how it started." Eva kept reading. Her eyes did not blink. The blade at the door went quiet. Outside, the man in the coat lowered his hook and stood still, as if listening to her too. Jonathan let go of the door. He crossed the room and gripped her shoulders. "Look at me." She did not. Her face was calm and empty, worse than any scream. She was the one who fixed things. Now she stood like a stranger, the book open in her small hands. He did the only thing he could think of. He reached for the pages to close them. She twisted away, fast and strong for her size, and kept reading. The old man had pressed himself into the corner. On the counter behind him sat the bottle of brown liquor he had poured earlier. Jonathan grabbed the bottle. He did not drink. He swung it flat against the book, knocking it from her hands. It struck the wet floor and slid into the dark bathroom. The reading stopped. Eva blinked. Her legs gave. Jonathan caught her before she hit the concrete. "I've got you," he said. "I've got you." Her eyes found his, confused, then afraid. "What did I say?" she whispered. He did not know. But the door had gone silent, and that scared him more. He looked at the window. The man in the coat was gone from the glass. Not sent back. Moved. The book still lay in the dark room where anyone could reach it. Eva clutched his sleeve. "It's in my head now," she said. "The words. I still hear them." She pressed both hands to her ears. "Get it away from me. Get it out of here." Jonathan looked at the black doorway. The book waited on the floor, and now it wanted her.

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Chapter 6

They could not stay inside. The book lay in the dark bathroom, and Eva would not sleep in the same room as it. So Jonathan led her out the back door into the cold. The old attendant did not stop them. He stayed in his corner, watching the black doorway like it might open on its own. Outside, the ground was wet grass and broken concrete. A maple stood near an old stone well, its leaves red and gold under the moon. Jonathan gathered dry wood from under it. He stacked it, struck a match, and after three tries a small fire caught. He sat Eva down beside it. She stared into the flames and said nothing. The words were still in her head. He could tell by the way her lips moved when she thought he wasn't looking. "We'll wait for morning," Jonathan said. "Someone comes down that road eventually." He did not believe it. He said it anyway. He pulled the bottle of brown liquor from his coat and set it in the grass. He had carried it out but would not drink. Not tonight. Tonight he needed to stay sharp. Eva lifted her head. She was not looking at the fire. She was looking past it, at the treeline. "Jonathan," she said. Flat. Quiet. "There's a man." He followed her eyes. A shape stood at the edge of the trees, just beyond the firelight. Bald. A grey jumpsuit. A white hockey mask with two black holes for eyes. One hand hung at his side, and in it was a machete, long and dull in the moonlight. The man did not move. He had been standing there, listening. Jonathan stood and put himself between the fire and the stranger. His legs shook. "We don't want trouble," he called. "Our car broke down. That's all." The man in the mask tilted his head. "The fire was loud," he said. His voice was calm and even. "I heard it. I like the ones who run." He took one step into the light. Eva rose beside Jonathan. She did not run. Her voice came out of her in that same flat, steady tone from the bathroom. She was reading again, though there was no book. The twisted words poured from her memory into the night air. The man in the mask stopped. He turned his masked face toward her, as if the sound pulled at him. The air behind him changed. The grass bent the wrong way. Something was coming through the dark, drawn by her voice again, the way it had come before. Jonathan grabbed Eva's arm. "Stop. Please. You'll call it back." She did not stop. The man with the machete looked from Eva to the moving dark, and for the first time he took a step backward. Jonathan understood then. The book had not left them. It lived in his wife now, and it had just summoned something worse than the man in the mask.

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Chapter 7

The thing came through the trees fast. The masked man ran from it. Jonathan grabbed Eva's wrist and pulled her away from the fire, toward the dark hills. She kept reciting even as she stumbled. Behind them the grass flattened in a wide circle, and the cold reached them before the shape did. Jonathan saw boulders ahead, a cluster of grey rock with dry grass hanging off the sides. A black mouth opened between them. A cave. He dragged Eva inside. The dark swallowed the firelight. Jonathan pressed Eva against the cold wall and clamped his hand over her mouth. "Stop," he whispered. "Please. Stop saying it." Her lips still moved under his palm. Then she went still. The silence was worse than her voice. Something filled the cave mouth. It was short and hooded, draped in torn grey cloth. Grey claws hung from its sleeves. Where its face should have been there was only black, a hole under the hood deeper than the cave itself. The thing did not walk. It slid toward them over the stone. Jonathan looked away. He grabbed Eva's chin and turned her face into his chest. "Don't look at it," he said. But he had already made his mistake. He had glanced too long into that black hood. The dark under the hood pulled at him. His arms went loose. His knees softened. Eva turned her head. He felt her body go slack against him the same moment his own did. The black spread out from the hood and filled the whole cave. He heard Eva's voice, far away now, still shaping those twisted words. Then nothing. His world went out like a match. Jonathan woke on hard gravel. Sunlight hurt his eyes. He was lying on his side, and his cheek was pressed against warm concrete. Birds. He heard birds. He sat up too fast and his head spun. He was outside the gas station. The old pumps stood quiet in the morning light. The windows glowed yellow, but it was only the sun. His hand was full of something cold and damp. He looked down. Mushrooms. Brown-capped mushrooms, crushed in his fist. More lay scattered around him in the dry grass, growing up through a pile of weathered rocks. Eva lay beside him. She stirred and opened her eyes. Her glasses were crooked. Her hand, too, was full of mushrooms. She looked at them, then at the rocks, then at her own fingers. "Jonathan," she said. Her voice was her own again. Flat. Tired. "We ate these." He remembered now, in pieces. The car dying. The long wait. The hunger. They had found the mushrooms near the station and shared them. Everything after was a fever. The book. The man with the hook. The masked stranger. The hooded thing in the cave. None of it had happened. There was no book in her hands. There never had been. Eva opened her fist and let the mushrooms fall. "Don't tell anyone," she said. She wiped her hand on her skirt and stood. She did not look scared. She looked like a woman who had wasted a night and wanted it back. Jonathan got to his feet. His legs held. His head was clear. He checked his pocket out of habit. The bottle of liquor was there, unopened. He took it out and set it on the gravel by the pump. He did not want it. The station door was locked and dark. No old man watched from the corner. Maybe there had never been one. Jonathan did not knock. He turned toward the road instead. "We walk," he said. "Someone will come." This time he believed it. They left the Tesla where it sat. They walked down the center of the empty road in the morning sun. Eva kept pace beside him, saying nothing, and for once he did not fill the silence with checking his phone or mistaking light for headlights. After a mile the signal bars climbed back onto his screen. He called a tow company, then a cab. By noon a truck came down the road, a real one, dust rising behind it. Jonathan waved it down with both arms. The driver leaned out and asked if they were the folks with the dead electric car. Jonathan said yes. He helped Eva up into the cab first, then climbed in after her, and did not once look back at the pumps, the rocks, or the dark place beyond the trees.

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