Keeper of Darkness and The Mysteries

Keeper of Darkness and The Mysteries's Arc

3 Chapters

Keeper of Darkness and The Mysteries's dream is fulfilling the task of watching the actions of those who enter this and deciding where they will go next.

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by @Dodger-McGee
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Chapter 1

The Keeper of Darkness had one job, and he was failing it. He crouched behind a broken brick wall and watched the ruins. Souls passed through here. He was supposed to see each one and decide where it went next. But from the ground, he saw nothing useful. Shapes slipped between the rubble and vanished before his red glasses could read them. He did not ask for this job. Two Keepers before him quit the same week. Now he understood why. He pulled his bathrobe tight. It kept him warm and nothing more. Through the glasses, the ruins glowed with faint trails. The trails crossed and tangled. He could not tell one soul from another at this height. He needed to look down on the whole field, not up at it. Across the broken ground stood a tall building. Boarded windows. A radio tower crowned its battered roof. The sign still read St Alphonse's Pancake House. A smaller sign named it a raider place now. The roof was the highest point for miles. From there, he would see every soul that crossed. He moved fast and low. A skeletal scout lay against the front steps, dressed in a torn safari jacket and a camouflaged pack. The bones did not stir. He stepped over them and slipped inside. The stairs groaned under his boots. On the second floor, a cracked photo frame hung crooked on the wall. A woman's face stared through the broken glass. The Keeper looked once, then away. He had misread faces before. He did not trust his own eyes without the glasses, and he did not fully trust them with the glasses either. He climbed to the roof. Wind hit him. Below, the whole ruin opened up. The glowing trails spread out clear and separate now. For the first time, he could follow each one from start to end. He could see them. He could judge them. He raised the glasses and started to count the souls below. Then a wet sound came from the stairs behind him. He turned. A shape climbed through the roof hatch. It had the frame of a deer, but wrong. Its ribs glowed orange from inside. Its jaw hung open with teeth no deer should have. The mutant stag stepped onto the roof and fixed one burning eye on him. The Keeper did not move. He had his vantage point at last. He could finally do his job. But he could not do it from the ground, and now something stood between him and the only roof that worked. The stag lowered its glowing head and scraped one hoof across the tar.

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Chapter 2

The stag scraped its hoof and swung its head. The Keeper backed against the roof's edge. He had no weapon. He had only the glasses, the count he could not finish, and the wind pulling at his bathrobe. Then the stag stopped. Its burning eye slid past him, down to something below. The Keeper followed its gaze. In a clear patch among the rubble stood a small tree. Its branches held glowing lotus fruit, warm and bright. The stag's nose twitched. It forgot him. It turned, dropped through the roof hatch, and thumped down the stairs. The Keeper's chest unlocked. He gripped the ledge and breathed. He watched the stag cross the ground below. It reached the tree and tore at the fruit. The glowing lotus vanished into its jaws one by one. Then it lifted its head, chewed, and wandered off between the ruins. Its orange ribs faded into the gray. The Keeper did not waste the gap. He raised the glasses and found the trails again. They spread across the ruin, clear and separate. He counted. He followed each one from start to end and spoke the number under his breath. His finger moved as if ticking off a list. When he finished, he pulled a small logbook from his robe and wrote the count down. Ink on paper. Proof the job was done. His stomach growled. He had been crouched and climbing since before dawn. Below the pancake house, near the front steps, a weathered picnic table waited in the open. He climbed down. At the table sat a figure he had not seen from the roof. Pale skin. Green military fatigues, torn through. A heavy pack still strapped to its back. A ghoul. Its eyes glowed faint green, but it did not lunge. It sat upright, hands flat on the scratched wood, calm as a man waiting for a meal. The Keeper stopped. The ghoul tilted its head toward the empty bench across from it. "You count them too," the ghoul said. Its voice was dry but steady. "I watched you up there. Finger going like a clerk." The Keeper said nothing. His hand found the logbook through his robe. "That deer eats the light tree every few days," the ghoul went on. "Then the trails change. The souls find new paths." It tapped the table. "Your count's already wrong." The Keeper's throat tightened. He looked back toward the ruins. The trails he had just written down had shifted. New lines crossed where none had been. The stag had not just blocked him. By eating the tree, it had bent the whole field. He sat down across from the ghoul. He had his number, and it was already useless. The job was not to count once. It was to count a thing that would not hold still.

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Chapter 3

The Keeper sat across from the ghoul and stared at the shifting trails. His count was dead ink. Then the ghoul slid something across the scratched table. It was a book, leather-bound, marked with gold symbols and a strange eye stamped on the cover. "You want to count right," the ghoul said, "you read that first." The Keeper opened the book. Columns of names filled the pages. Dates. Marks beside each one. A record older than him. He turned his glasses toward the words. The red lenses pulled new lines out of the ink, faint green threads that lifted off the page. The ghoul leaned on a black cane topped with a grinning skull in a jester's hat. "Every Keeper before you wrote in it," he said. "Two of them quit mid-page." The Keeper's hand stopped. He knew those two. He did not want to read their last marks. He closed the book and looked up. "This doesn't tell me how to count a moving thing." The ghoul tapped his cane toward the far ruins. "There's a tower out past the wrecks. Steel beams. Lookout perch on top. Higher than your pancake roof. From there you see the whole field at once." He pulled his pack onto his shoulder. "Count from the ground, you chase paths forever. Count from the tower, you catch them before they shift." The Keeper looked where the cane pointed. A thin steel frame stood above the rubble, rusted but upright. A wooden platform crowned it. He had not seen it from the roof. He tucked the gold-marked book into his robe beside his logbook and stood. He crossed the ruins and reached the tower. The ladder bit cold into his hands. He climbed past welded joints and old bolts until the platform took his weight. From the perch the whole field opened below him. Every trail, every crossing, clear and still. He could watch them all at once. On the platform boards sat a paper sack, grease-dark at the bottom. Cold burgers inside, left by someone. His stomach growled. He ate while the light faded. Beside the sack lay another book, worn, its cover reading "Inferno." He opened it. The Latin pages were cracked and hard. But between the printed lines, someone had written in the margins. Fresh ink. A hand he half knew. The notes were not about the poem. They named the stag. They named the hours it fed. They marked which trails bent when the light tree died, and where the souls fled next. Whoever wrote this had watched the deer for weeks. The margins held a pattern. The Keeper lowered the book. His chest went tight. The count was never the job. The stag's feeding was a clock, and the trails answered to it. He could predict the shift before it came. He had the tower. He had the pattern. But the last note broke off mid-sentence, the ink dragged sideways, as if the writer had stood up fast and never sat back down.

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