Lovely CareFree

Lovely CareFree's Arc

4 Chapters

Lovely CareFree's dream is ascending to the divine throne her mother once held before mortals cast the goddesses out of memory, and having a large family and ruling by making love and happiness the norm.

RevDrMommaJennah's avatar
by @RevDrMommaJennah
Chapter 1 comic
Chapter 1

Lovely CareFree stood on the top glass floor of her palace and shouted her mother's name to an empty beach. No one answered. She wanted the throne her mother once held, before mortals forgot the goddesses and let their names fall silent. She wanted a family, and a world that made love ordinary. But she had spent all morning calling, and only the waves called back. She had written her message on a hundred glass leaves. Each one carried a promise: love freely, hurt no one, welcome everyone home. She had tied them to a willow near the water, a tall tree with a clear brown trunk and blossoms of pink and blue. When the wind moved through it, the leaves chimed. It was beautiful. It changed nothing. No mortal had come near the shore in years. A goddess needs a voice among the people. Lovely had none. "A cause no one hears is not a cause," she said. "It is a woman talking to a tree." She untied one leaf and held it up. Her pale blue hand shook. She could carve a thousand more and still stay silent, alone in a house of candles and empty rooms. The plan had failed. She needed a messenger, someone loyal enough to carry her words past the water where she could not follow. Something rustled below her, near the fireplace on the lower floor. Lovely went down the spiral stair. In the warm room, a small creature had climbed onto her couch. It looked like a fat bunny crossed with a chinchilla, its long fur streaked with pastel colors and thin gold sparkle. Its ears were huge and round. It held one of her fallen glass leaves in both paws and studied it like a jewel. When it saw her, it did not run. It chirped and lifted the leaf toward her, offering it back. "You can read it?" she whispered. The creature could not read. But it hopped to her feet, dropped the leaf, and pressed its face against her ankle. Its bright blue and green eyes fixed on her. Then it grabbed a second leaf, tucked it against its chest, and darted to the open doorway. There it stopped and looked back, waiting. Lovely understood. It wanted to carry the message out. It wanted to follow her. She knelt and held out her arms. The creature leapt into them and burrowed against her chest, warm and shaking with joy. She laughed for the first time in weeks. "Then you'll be my voice," she said. "You'll go where I can't." That evening she tied a small pouch of glass leaves to the creature's back. It waited by the water, ready to run. Her cause had a carrier now. But the moment it crossed the shore, her words would leave her hands. She could no longer control what the mortals did with them.

Read chapter →
Chapter 2 comic
Chapter 2

The little creature crossed the shore three days ago. Since then Lovely CareFree had watched the water for its return. She paced the glass floors of her palace and touched the empty willow branches. No leaf came back. No sign. She did not know if her messenger had reached a single mortal or drowned in the tide. Her cause was a whisper, and she had no ear to prove anyone heard it. "Come back to me," she said to the beach. "Just tell me they saw it." The waves did not answer. She knelt by the water and pressed her pale blue hands to the sand. If the creature had failed, she was alone again. If it had died, she had killed the only friend who ever came. Then a shape climbed from the surf. Not her creature. A man, green-skinned, thick with muscle, dreadlocks hanging past his back and dripping seawater. He wore only leaves at his waist. In his broad hands he cupped the small pastel creature, wet and shivering but alive. Behind him, tucked in his arm, sat a pouch and a shard of her glass. Lovely stood fast. She did not know him. "Who are you? Give me my friend." "Easy." He set the creature down gently, and it bolted to her ankles and chirped. "It found me on the far shore. Half the fishing village has one of your leaves now. Children wear them. Old women hung them over their doors." He held out the broken shard. "This one they passed hand to hand until it cracked. They wanted me to bring it to whoever made it. They said it made them feel loved." Lovely took the shard. Her hands shook. Mortals had touched her words. They had kept them. They had wanted more. The silence broke open in her chest, and she laughed, then wept. "You're a god," she said. She could feel it on him, the same weight she carried. "Verdis Thornheart." He knelt, easy and unashamed. "I tend the wild places near their homes. I've heard mortals speak your name for the first time in years. They're asking who the goddess is." The creature climbed her arm and pressed its face to her cheek. Lovely held the cracked leaf up to the light. Proof. Not hope anymore. Proof that her voice had reached across the water and landed in mortal hands. "They know I exist," she whispered. "They do." Verdis stood. His face was open and warm. "But a name spoken once is forgotten by morning. If you want a throne, you need them to keep saying it. And someone told them a forgotten goddess was easy to ignore." Lovely's smile faded. Her words had reached the village. Now another voice worked against her there. She had proof at last, and with it, a rival she had never met.

Read chapter →
Chapter 3 comic
Chapter 3

Verdis waded back into the surf at dawn. Lovely stood at the edge of the wet sand, watching him carry her leaves toward the mortal world again. He would fight the rival voice for her. But she could not go with him. She could not cross the water. She could not even shake his hand at the tide line without the shore pulling her back. "Wait," she called. He turned. "You do all this for me. I give you nothing back. I can't even walk out to meet you." He smiled. "You give the mortals hope. That's enough." But it was not enough for Lovely. She watched him swim off, and the loss stung. If she could not leave her shore, she needed a way to reach past it. A messenger that could find him wherever he stood. She walked to her willow tree and sat beneath the glass leaves. Her fluffy little creature climbed into her lap, ears twitching. She stroked its shaggy fur and thought. One creature had already crossed the water once. What if she made more? What if she gave them her voice? Lovely knelt by her patch of glass irises. The flowers glowed and hummed. She had grown them from her own light. She pressed her hands into the soil and poured her will into it. "Bring me carriers," she whispered. "Small ones. Fast ones. Ones who can speak." The irises flared. Petals broke loose and rose into the air. They folded and hardened and grew tiny faces. Six small batlike creatures hovered before her, wings thin as glass, glowing stones clutched in their paws. They chirped and spun in a bright, eager knot. Lovely laughed. She held up one glass leaf. "Carry this. Find the green god. Tell him my thanks in my own words." The nearest creature took the leaf in its mouth and squeaked a reply in a small, clear voice. It understood. She led them to her bright glass entry room, where the door opened toward the sea. "Go," she said. "You can cross where I cannot. And you can come back and tell me everything." The flock burst out over the water. They flew low and fast, six glowing dots shrinking toward the far shore. Lovely gripped the doorframe and watched until they vanished. For the first time she had eyes and a voice beyond her sand. Hours later they returned, wings damp, chattering all at once. "He read it," one said. "He smiled. He said to tell you thank you back." Then another cut in, nervous. "But we saw the village. Someone burned the leaves over the doors. A woman there tells them a new goddess is coming. A stronger one." Lovely's joy went cold. She had solved her silence. She could speak past her shore now. But her flock had carried back a worse truth. The rival was not just a whisper anymore. The rival had a name to give the mortals, and it was not hers.

Read chapter →
Chapter 4 comic
Chapter 4

The bats came back screaming. Lovely stood in her entry room and watched them streak over the water. Behind them, low on the waves, rolled a wall of orange fire. The rival's flames had followed her messengers home. They reached her sand. They climbed toward her willow, the one tree that held her power. Its glass leaves ticked and hissed in the heat. Lovely ran to the tree. She threw her arms around the trunk. The nearest leaves already glowed red at the edges. If they melted, her voice melted with them. She had no way to fight fire. Her hands made love and light, not war. The flames crawled up the sand and licked the lowest branches. Out of the surf rose a long, shining body. A sea guardian lifted its dragon face above the flames. Scales flashed blue and rose and gold. On its back clung small hatchlings, and it spread wide fins to shield them. It had carried a passenger across the water. A slight woman leapt down onto the burning sand. Flowers and leaves made her dress. Her ears came to points, and her golden eyes found Lovely at once. "You're the goddess whose leaves we hang over our doors," she said. Her feet pressed the smoking sand without fear. "My people carried your words village to village. I came to carry you." "I can't cross," Lovely said. "The shore pulls me back." "You can't cross alone." Lyra Petalwind reached into her dress and drew out two glass wands shaped like candles. One burned warm gold, one soft violet. "A mortal made these. She wanted you to have light that fights back. Take one. I'll hold the other." Lovely took the gold wand. Warmth ran up her arm, steady and kind. The rival's fire was hungry and cruel. This fire was not. It was the small flame people light for someone they love. Lovely understood then. The rival stole mortals with fear. Lovely could not beat fear with more fear. She could only offer the other thing. She faced the flames climbing her willow. She did not push them back. She raised the wand and let its light spread. The gold flame touched the rival's fire, and the red went soft. Beside her, Lyra lifted the violet wand. Two calm lights met one angry one. The rival's fire did not die. It changed. The orange cooled to a gentle glow that no longer burned. A voice rolled off the water, furious, a woman's voice Lovely had never heard. "They are mine. They forgot you." The flames surged one last time. "They remember now," Lovely said. She stepped forward. Her foot left her own sand and pressed the wet line where water met shore. The pull came. It always came. But Lyra's hand closed around hers, part mortal, and held her steady. For the first time Lovely crossed her own tide line. She did not fall back. A mortal's touch anchored her where her power alone never could. The rival's fire broke apart on the waves. The angry voice thinned and was gone. The sea guardian dipped its head. Its hatchlings chirped. Lovely looked back at her willow. The glass leaves hung whole, only warm now, ringing softly in the wind. They did not stop at the shore. Lyra led her across the water on the guardian's back, and Lovely let herself be carried. In the village the burned doorframes still stood bare. Lovely walked among the mortals and hung new leaves with her own hands. Villagers reached out and touched her blue skin, her braided hair, her tail, and did not turn away. A child asked her name. She gave it. The child said it back. Verdis found her there at dusk, green and grinning, and did not have to swim to reach her. "You crossed," he said. She only smiled and took his hand across the sand she could finally stand on. In the seasons after, Lovely never sat alone again. She built a wide hearth ring of glass stools and warm blankets, and it was always full. Mortals and gods came to sit by her fire. Lyra's people carried her leaves to every village that would hang them. Verdis stayed. Children ran between the palace and the mortal shore, some hers, some come to be hers. The rival's name faded from mortal mouths, and Lovely's rose in its place, spoken not from fear but from love. She had wanted the throne her mother lost, and a full house, and a world that made happiness ordinary. She sat on that throne now with a child on her knee and the sea guardian's hatchlings sleeping at her feet, and it was ordinary at last.

Read chapter →

Play your story to life

Storycraft is a mobile game where you create AI characters, craft items and locations to build their world, then discover what direction your story takes. Download the iOS game for free today!

Download for free