Mellie Rose

Mellie Rose's Arc

5 Chapters

Mellie Rose's dream is turning the mortal bandmate she loves into her eternal companion without destroying the music that binds them..

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Chapter 1

Mellie Rose tuned the low E flat and told herself she would say it tonight. Sixty years of hiding what she was, and now a mortal girl in a black lace dress waited three blocks away, expecting dinner and a kiss and a truthful girlfriend. Mellie had never told Raven. One wrong sentence would end them before the plates hit the table. She set the guitar down. The small black cottage she rented smelled like rosin and old smoke. On the windowsill, her pet rabbit watched her with red eyes that matched her own. She had bought the animal because it was the only living thing she could feed without fear. She scratched under its chin and felt its small fangs press her knuckle. "I'm going to tell her," Mellie said. The rabbit blinked. A knock hit the door in three flat taps. Mellie opened it. Wednesday stood on the step in her school blazer, holding a paper bag. "You forgot this at practice," Wednesday said. She held out the bag. Inside was Mellie's spare capo and a folded napkin stained brown at one corner. Mellie took it. Wednesday did not leave. "You're bleeding through the napkin," Wednesday said. "It's not mine." "I know." Wednesday looked past her, at the rabbit. "Raven doesn't know what you are." Mellie's hand tightened on the doorframe. The wood cracked under her thumb. "How long have you known," Mellie said. It was not a question. "Since the second show. You don't sweat under the lights. You tune by ear in a room that loud." Wednesday said it the way other people read a grocery list. "I'm not going to tell her. You should." "She'll leave." "She might." Wednesday shrugged. "She'll definitely leave if she finds out from someone else." Mellie stared at her. Wednesday waited the exact amount of time a person waits, then turned and walked down the path. Mellie closed the door. She looked at the rabbit. She looked at the guitar. The plan she had built for tonight — candles, wine Raven would drink alone, a slow confession over dessert — collapsed into one clean fact. If Wednesday could see it in two shows, Raven had already seen it in six months. She took her jacket off the hook. She left the wine on the counter. She walked to Raven's door and knocked before she could talk herself out of it. Raven opened it in the lace dress, lipstick half on. She smiled. Mellie did not smile back. "I need to tell you something," Mellie said. "Before dinner. Before anything." Raven's smile thinned. She stepped aside. Mellie walked in and told her, in the front hall, with the door still open behind them. She said the word vampire out loud to a mortal for the first time in sixty years. Raven did not scream. Raven did not laugh. Raven said, "Sit down. We're going to talk about this."

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Chapter 2

Raven made tea neither of them would drink. Mellie sat at the kitchen table and watched her girlfriend measure loose leaves with steady hands. Sixty years of hiding, and Raven had answered with a kettle. Mellie's throat felt tight in a way it hadn't since she was mortal. She had one question left to ask, and it was the one that could undo everything the last hour had built. "Ask what you're sitting on," Raven said. She set a cup down. Her lipstick was still smudged from before. "You've been chewing your tongue since I poured the water." "I can't ask it yet." "Then drink the tea while you decide." Mellie didn't drink. She stood up instead and said she needed air. Raven nodded once and let her go. Mellie walked until the street ended at a friend's place, a narrow rocker's house with guitar-shaped windows cut into the gables. Avril opened the door in socks, a bass string wrapped around one wrist like a bracelet. She looked at Mellie's face and stepped aside without a word. Avril was the bandmate who had lost her best friend inside a condemned building two years ago. She did not talk about it. She also did not flinch at hard things. "Raven knows," Mellie said. "Good." "I want to ask her to let me turn her." Avril sat down on the arm of a chair. She looked at the floor for a long moment. Then she looked up. "Don't." "She said she wants to talk. She didn't run." "Not talk. Ask. You're asking her to die for you before she's finished her tea." Avril's voice stayed flat. "I watched someone I loved get taken by a building. He didn't choose it. Don't be the building." Mellie's hands went cold. She had been about to walk back and ask tonight. She had almost done it in the kitchen. "What do I do instead." "Let her ask first. If she never asks, you have your answer." Mellie left without agreeing. She walked back through a yard where black roses grew in a raw patch of dirt, their red centers wet under the porch light. She stopped at the gate. She thought of a man who had known what she wanted and had taken her life anyway. She thought of the word he had never asked her. She went back inside. Raven was still at the table. The tea had gone cold. "I'm not going to ask you the thing I came back to ask," Mellie said. "Not tonight. Not for a long time. If you ever want to know what it costs to be what I am, you tell me. I'll answer anything. But I won't offer." Raven watched her a long moment. Then she pushed the second cup across the table. "Sit," Raven said. "Start with the small questions." Mellie sat.

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Chapter 3

Mellie sat at Raven's table until the cold tea grew a skin. She had promised to answer any question. She had not promised herself she knew all the answers. Somewhere between the second cup and the third, a thought landed hard: she had never seen a turning done right. She had only survived her own, done wrong. If Raven ever asked, Mellie would say yes with a mouth full of ignorance. That was a way to kill her. She kissed Raven's temple, said she needed a book from home, and left before Raven could ask which one. Her cottage sat dark at the end of the lane, purple boards under a black shingled roof, the porch lamps burning low. Inside, she went straight to the tall red cabinet where she kept the things she did not look at. The iron latches were cold. She had to force the left door. She pulled out a leather journal she had taken off a dead vampire in 1974. He had kept records the way a doctor keeps records. Names. Dates. What went wrong. She had read the first page once and shut the book for fifty years. She opened it at the kitchen counter and made herself read. A girl in Marseille, 1902. Turned too fast. Her heart stopped before the blood took. Buried her. A boy in Prague, 1930. Fed too little. Woke starving and tore out his own throat trying to reach the vein. A woman in Chicago, 1958. Turned during fever. The sickness went with her into the change and never left. She could not hold a note of music in her head after. Forgot her own son's name inside a week. Mellie set the book down. Her hands were shaking. She thought of Raven's voice, low and exact, saying the same thing twice for emphasis. She thought of that voice going flat. Forgetting the shape of a stitch. Forgetting her cat. Forgetting the song Mellie had written for her last spring. She read for two hours. She learned the timing. She learned the fast, the slow, the fed, the starved. She learned that the maker had to stay through the first three nights or the new one broke. She learned six ways it went wrong and one way it went right. On the porch after, a dark butterfly landed on the rail, wings marked in red like something bled through lace. She watched it breathe. Alive. Whole. Made once, correctly. She closed the book and locked it in the red cabinet. She had what she needed now. If Raven ever asked, Mellie could answer without lying, and she could do the thing without breaking her. But she knew something new, and worse. The maker had to stay three nights. The vampire who had made her had stayed none. He had known, and left anyway. She would have to find him before Raven ever asked.

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Chapter 4

Mellie locked the red cabinet and stepped out onto the porch. The night smelled wrong. Under the pine and damp leaves, she caught something sharp and human. Sweat. Gun oil. Salt from a hand that had gripped a stake too long. She went still. Someone had followed her scent home from the club last week, when she had fed too close to the lane and left the body warm. She could not die yet. Not with Raven still mortal and the maker still breathing somewhere. She went inside, killed the porch lamps, and called the only person who would know a hunter's pattern. Mia Harper answered on the second ring. Mia was the other guitarist in town who had fangs, a small pink-haired girl who tracked her own maker the way Mellie tracked hers. They were not friends. They traded information the way rival shopkeepers trade weather reports. "There's a hunter on me," Mellie said. "Tonight." "How close." "My porch." A pause. "Don't run north. He'll have the road." "How do you know it's a he." "They're always a he. Go to the old quarry. The black rock with the purple center. He won't cross open stone. No cover." "Then what." "Then you wait him out till dawn is close and you double back. He has to sleep. You don't." Mellie went out the back. She kept low through the trees and moved upwind. Twice she heard boots. Once she heard a safety click. She did not run. Running left a trail a child could read. She reached the quarry an hour before moonset. The monolith rose out of the pit, black stone split by a vein of amethyst that caught what little light there was. She climbed the flat shelf beside it and crouched. Open ground on three sides. He would have to show himself. He did, near two. A thin man in a canvas coat, stake in one hand, small crossbow in the other. He stopped at the edge of the trees and studied the shelf. He did not step onto the stone. Mia had been right. He waited. Mellie waited longer. When the sky at her back went from black to gray, he swore, low, and turned into the trees to find his truck before the sun caught him. She followed him just long enough to see the plate. Then she ran home under the last of the dark. Inside, she called Mia back. "He left." "He'll come back tomorrow. They always do." Mia's voice dropped. "Move. Tonight. Don't tell your girl where." Mellie looked at the red cabinet. At the journal locked inside. At the photograph of Raven on the shelf, laughing at something off-camera. She would have to leave the cottage. She would have to leave Raven in the dark about where, and why, for as long as it took to bury the hunter's trail. She started packing a bag.

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Chapter 5

Mellie drove until the cottage was two ridges behind her and pulled off onto a fire road. She killed the engine and rolled the window down. Her own scent came back at her on the wind, sharp as a signal flare. Every step she had taken from porch to car had laid a fresh line. The hunter would follow it straight to the only person she had visited this week. Raven. She called Avril first. "I need to kill a scent trail," Mellie said. "Mine. Tonight. Before it points at my girlfriend." Avril did not ask why. Avril was her bandmate, the one she called when the answer had to be honest and fast. "Burnt ground kills scent. So does running water. So does another vampire's blood over your tracks." "I'm not near a river." "Then call the pink-haired one." Mellie hung up and called Mia. Mia was the other vampire guitarist in town, the one who traded her tips for a hunter the way strangers trade cigarettes. "He's tracking me toward Raven," Mellie said. A pause. Mia's voice came quieter. "Cross your own trail with a stronger one. Feed. Not a kill. Enough to bleed on the ground where your line bends. His nose will lock onto the fresh blood and follow that instead." "Follow it where." "Anywhere that isn't her door. Lead it into stone. Something old. Something that eats sound." Mellie knew the place. Two towns over, off the highway, a black-stone ruin the locals called the vampire castle. Tourists took photos of its spires in daylight and stayed away after dark. Empty halls. Cold floors. No neighbors to hear a hunter fall down a stairwell. She drove to a truck stop on the way and found a man alone behind the diner, drunk, arguing with no one. She took him by the sleeve, bit the soft place under his jaw, and drank until his knees loosened. She let him sit down against the wall. He would wake with a headache and a story no one believed. She pressed her bleeding wrist to the gravel where her tire tracks turned. Then she drove east, dragging the wet cuff out the window for the first mile. She reached the black castle before three. She walked in through the broken gate, up the main stair, and out a servant's door on the far side. Her blood marked every threshold. The trail ended in a stone room with three exits and a drop to the cellars. She went home the long way, on foot, through a creek bed. At dawn she called Raven from a payphone. "Don't open your door tonight," she said. "For anyone. Not even me." "Where are you?" "Safer than you if you listen." Raven was quiet. Then she said, "Okay." Mellie hung up. The trail pointed east now, into black stone. But Raven was locked in alone, and the hunter had a full night to decide he had been lied to.

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