Orla Oakes

Orla Oakes's Arc

3 Chapters

Orla Oakes's dream is uncovering the buried confession that names the true founder of Forgotten Hollow..

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by @EternalLynx
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Chapter 1

Orla Oakes charged three coins to open a drawer, but this morning someone had opened one for free. She stood in the records hall and stared at her founding drawer. It hung open. Papers spilled across the floor like fallen leaves. For forty years she had guarded every deed and confession in this town. Only one file mattered now: the buried confession that named the true founder of Forgotten Hollow. She had hidden it here, deep in this drawer, and someone had come for it in the night. She knelt with a groan and sorted the mess. Her ink-stained fingers shook. Deeds, marriage records, a debtor's plea. She counted them twice. The confession was still there, folded tight where she left it. But something else was gone. The old land map that showed the town's first plot lines. She had used it to prove where the confession pointed. Without the map, the confession named a founder no one could place. A wet cough came from the doorway. Fenwick Bale stood there in his long damp coat, the traveling apothecary who kept the old shop across the square. He rarely spoke first. He watched people until they gave themselves away. Orla trusted him about as far as she could throw a bottle. "You're up early," she said. "Or you never left." Fenwick stepped inside. He crouched beside the spilled papers, said nothing, and pressed one finger to the floorboards near the drawer. He lifted it. A single pale berry sat crushed on his fingertip, silver-skinned, the kind that grew only on the fog-berry bushes outside town. "Whoever came through here walked past the bushes first," he said. "Their boots carried this in." He looked up at her. "You didn't. You never leave this hall." Orla's chest tightened. "They took a map. Not the confession. Why leave the confession?" "Because the confession means nothing without the map," Fenwick said. "And a map is easier to burn." She understood then. The thief knew exactly what she had. They had not blundered in. They had chosen. They wanted the founder's name to stay buried, and now they held the one thing that made her proof read true. Orla gripped the drawer's edge and pulled herself up. "They'll come back for the confession once they're sure the map is ash." "Or once they know you noticed," Fenwick said. He wiped the berry on his coat. "You've noticed." She crossed to her desk and locked the confession in the iron box beneath it. Her hands steadied. The thief had a head start and a fresh trail. Silver berries meant they had come from the bushes past the square, and Fenwick's shop sat closer to those bushes than any door in town. "You found that berry fast," she said, watching him now. Fenwick only smiled and turned toward the door.

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Chapter 2

Fenwick reached the door, but Orla was already moving past him. Silver berries had dried in a smear across her threshold. She followed the smear with her eyes. It ran out the door and along the packed dirt toward the bushes at the town's edge. The thief had walked this line twice. She could trace it back to the door they came from. But the confession sat in the iron box under her desk, and the moment she left the hall, the thief could slip in behind her. She stopped in the doorway and gripped the frame. Follow the trail, lose the confession. Guard the confession, lose the trail. The berries would not last the day. One good rain and her only lead washed away. "You can't do both," Fenwick said behind her. He had watched her think it through. He always did. "The trail dries. The box does not walk off on its own." Orla turned on him. "You'd like me to leave it. Then you'd have the whole hall to yourself." Fenwick did not flinch. He pulled the box from under the desk and set it on the floor between them. "Then take it with you. Carry your proof where your eyes can watch it." She had not thought of that. The box was heavy iron, but she was not walking. She whistled once, low. Outside, her riding elk lifted its antlered head from the grass and came to the rail. Forty years she had kept the beast for the days her knees failed her. Today her knees would not fail her lead. Fenwick helped her lash the iron box behind the saddle. His hands were quick and sure, too sure for a man with nothing to hide. Orla watched every knot. When the box sat tight, she climbed up with a groan and took the reins. "Walk beside me," she told him. "Where I can see your boots." The elk stepped along the berry trail. The smear led them past the square and toward the bushes. Orla kept her eyes down, reading the crushed silver in the dirt. It bent left where she expected it to run straight. Not toward Fenwick's shop. Away from it. The trail ended at a broad print in the mud. Not a boot. A cloven hoof, wide as her two hands, ringed by a second set of berries. Another rider had come from the bushes on a mount larger than her own. The thief had never walked at all. Orla reined up and stared at the hoofprint. Fenwick crouched beside it and said nothing for a long moment. "You've been chasing the wrong door," he said. "So have I." She had her point of origin now. The thief rode in and rode out, and left a track no rain could hide fast. But the confession was strapped to her back, in the open, on a slow beast, and whoever owned that hoofprint knew the way to the bushes better than she did.

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Chapter 4

Orla rode the open road toward the ridge. The iron box weighed on the elk's flank. Fenwick walked beside her stirrup, his damp coat heavy with morning fog. She had a name now, or near enough. A house. A limping mount. A reason to steal her map. But Nadia's warning still rang in her ears. Accuse the wrong rider, and she lost her only lead. Halfway up, Fenwick stopped. He crouched by a fresh set of tracks in the mud. "These aren't your limp," he said. He pointed. "Left front lands clean. No favor. Two riders came down this road." Orla dismounted. Her knees cracked. She read the prints the way she read old deeds, line by line. He was right. The clean tracks led down from the ridge. The limping tracks came up from town, then turned back. "The founding family's elk went down the hill," she said. "But it carried no thief. Someone rode it out and brought it home." A hound broke from the brush. Lean, gray, pale eyes glowing in the fog. It froze, hackles up, then bolted toward the pond. Orla knew that dog. It slept at the schoolteacher's door. They found Nadia at the water's edge again, basket on her arm, cutting glowing lily stems. Her chalk-white hands did not stop when Orla approached. "You climbed the hill," Nadia said. "I told you to climb it alone." "I never reached the top," Orla said. "The limping elk carried no rider down. Someone borrowed it. Someone who knew whose print I would find. Someone who could send me up that hill to accuse the wrong house." Nadia's shears paused. Fenwick said nothing. He watched her hands. In a room of suspects, he stayed silent until one face broke. Nadia's broke now. Her fingers tightened on the shears. "You keep their children," Fenwick said quietly. "You keep their stables. You could take that elk any night and no one would ask." Nadia set the basket down. "They pay me to teach," she said. "They do not know their own history. But I read the old records, Orla. Years ago. Before you locked them away." Her voice stayed soft. "The confession names no founder they'd want spoken. I took the map to keep it buried. The elk was only a mask." Orla's chest went cold. Not the family. The teacher. "You sent me up the ridge to die accusing the wrong people." "I sent you somewhere safe." Nadia pushed her glasses up. "The map is gone, Orla. Burned. You have a confession that proves nothing now." Orla stared at her. The thief had a face at last. But the proof she needed was ash. She had won the truth and lost the map in the same breath. The confession alone could name no one. And Nadia knew exactly what the buried words said.

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