Rylan Foil

Rylan Foil's Arc

4 Chapters

Rylan Foil's dream is tracking down the wandering luck merchant who sells actual good fortune.

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by @Xidan
Chapter 1 comic
Chapter 1

Rylan was adjusting his lute strap when the shelf collapsed. Not near him. Not because of him. The merchant's entire back wall gave way, sending clay pots crashing down on a woman who'd been reaching for honey. She hit the ground hard, pottery shards everywhere, and when she looked up with blood running down her temple, her eyes locked on him. "You," she said. Rylan raised both hands. "I didn't touch anything." "You walked in." She pushed herself up, wincing. "The second you walked in, I felt it. Like the air went sour." She pointed at the ruined shelf, then at her bleeding head. "Fix it." The merchant was already shouting about his pottery. Other customers backed toward the door. Rylan had seen this before—the moment people decided he was the problem. He usually left before it got this far. "I don't know how to fix a shelf," he said. She stepped closer, blocking his path to the door. "Then you're not leaving until you figure it out." Rylan studied her coat. The wool looked expensive once, but the hem was scorched black on one side and frosted white on the other, like it couldn't decide whether to burn or freeze. The kind of damage that didn't happen naturally. The kind that happened around him. He glanced past her at the fur-trimmed tent across the square. Military banners hung from the poles. A war council, maybe, or a noble's retinue. Someone important enough to afford that coat before he'd ruined it. "How much do I owe you?" he asked. She wiped blood from her eyes. "More than coin. That coat was my father's. The tent outside? That's where I'm supposed to meet a thane in an hour, and now I look like I crawled out of a ditch." Rylan felt the familiar weight settle in his chest. Another person caught in his wake. Another piece of someone's life broken because he'd walked through the wrong door. But this time she wasn't letting him walk away from it. "The luck merchant," he said. "Have you heard of one passing through?" She stared at him. "That's your answer? Chase a myth?" "He's not a myth." Rylan met her eyes. "And if I find him, I can fix this. All of it. The coat, the shelf, whatever else breaks around me." She touched the burnt seam of her sleeve, then the frozen hem. Her expression shifted from anger to something else. Calculation. "Where was he last seen?" Rylan blinked. "You believe me?" "I believe this coat was fine yesterday." She stepped aside, finally clearing his path to the door. "And I believe you're going to help me get to that meeting on time, because if a thane sees me like this, my contract's done. So talk while we walk."

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Chapter 2 comic
Chapter 2

The woman walked fast for someone who'd just taken a shelf to the head. Blood still traced a line down her temple, but she didn't slow. Rylan kept pace, scanning faces in the street. Someone had seen the merchant leave. Someone always did. They found the cart at the edge of the square—a wooden thing with sturdy wheels, empty except for dust and a single copper bowl left behind. An old man sat nearby on a crate, watching them approach. Before Rylan could speak, the woman grabbed his arm and pulled him back. "Don't," she said. Her hand shook. "That's him." Rylan looked again. The man wasn't old—just tired. The kind of tired that came from being hunted. A weathered sign leaned against the wall behind him, carved with numbers and amounts that kept climbing. The woman pulled a folded map from her coat, edges torn and marked with crossed-out routes. She'd been running longer than Rylan had been chasing. "He saw the merchant leave at dawn," she said quietly. "But he won't talk. Not while that sign's there." She looked at Rylan, and he understood. The debt collector had already been here. The sign was a promise. Rylan stepped forward anyway. The man's eyes tracked him, then widened when a coin slipped from Rylan's pocket and hit the ground—not rolling away, but sinking into the dirt like it weighed more than metal should. The curse, doing what it always did. The man stood, backing toward the wall. "I can't help you," the man said. "He'll know. He always knows." The woman moved past Rylan, holding out the map. "Then run with me. I know three routes he hasn't closed yet." She touched the sign, then looked back at Rylan. "You want your merchant? Help us disappear first." Rylan had spent months arriving too late, always one step behind. Now he had a witness who'd seen the merchant leave at dawn—and a choice. Stay and watch another person get caught in someone else's trap, or help them escape and lose the trail again. He picked up the coin that had sunk into the dirt. It came free easily, like the ground had changed its mind about keeping it. "Which route's fastest?" he asked. The woman's shoulders dropped, relief washing over her face. The man hesitated, then pointed east. "He left toward the old mill road. Two hours head start, maybe three." He grabbed the map from the woman's hands, studying it. "This mark here—that's where they won't follow. Swamp's too thick." The woman pulled the debt sign down and snapped it across her knee. The wood splintered, numbers cracking apart. She handed half to the man. "Go. Now." He ran. She turned to Rylan, blood dried on her temple, her father's ruined coat hanging loose on her shoulders. "Your merchant went east. You're welcome." She didn't wait for thanks. Just walked away, following the man toward whatever route the map promised. Rylan watched them disappear into the crowd, then looked east toward the mill road. He'd arrived too late again. But this time, he knew which direction to chase. And he knew the cost of getting there—one more person who'd needed help he almost didn't give. He adjusted his lute strap and started walking. The merchant had three hours on him. He'd closed worse gaps before.

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Chapter 3

The mill road stretched east through open country, and Rylan made good time until the wheel came off a passing wagon right in front of him. The driver swore, the axle cracked, and the whole thing tipped sideways, blocking the road completely. Rylan stepped back as pottery spilled across the dirt—plates, bowls, cups—all of it shattering in a wave of broken clay. A woman stood on the tower platform above the wreckage, arms crossed. She'd been watching. Rylan recognized the deliberate stillness—someone who'd planted themselves and wouldn't budge. The road curved around the tower, but fresh snow showed no tracks. She'd closed it. He could turn back, lose another day, or he could deal with whatever she wanted. She climbed down and walked straight to him, holding something out. A pocket watch, frozen solid, with ice patterns spreading across the face. His initials were engraved on the back. He'd lost that watch two months ago when a river froze under his feet. "You dropped this when you crossed the bridge," she said. "The bridge that collapsed an hour after you left. My brother was on it." Rylan looked at the watch, then at her face. No anger there—just the flat certainty of someone who'd found an answer and wouldn't let it go. "I'm sorry," he said, and meant it. She shook her head. "Sorry doesn't tell me why. Sorry doesn't explain what you are." She stepped closer. "You're hunting something. I watched you pass through town asking questions about a merchant. Tell me what's worth leaving destruction behind you, or you're not going anywhere." Rylan met her eyes. He could lie, walk away, let her think what she wanted. But she'd tracked him down, stood here waiting, and she deserved more than that. "I'm hunting luck," he said. "Real luck. The kind that bends the world instead of breaking under it. And I'm cursed to chase it until I catch it or it kills me." She studied him, then pocketed the watch. "Then you're going to need help. Because whatever you're carrying, it's getting worse."

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Chapter 4

The woman climbed into the passenger seat of her wagon without asking if he was coming. Rylan followed. She didn't offer her name, and he didn't give his. The road ahead stretched east, and somewhere at the end of it was the merchant who sold luck—if his curse didn't catch up first. They reached the village an hour before sunset. The chapel stood at the crossroads, or what was left of it. The roof had collapsed inward, the steeple lay broken across the snow, and the stained glass window was shattered into colored fragments scattered across the steps. People knelt in the ruins, heads bowed, dressed in wool cloaks and leather coats against the cold. They'd built a memorial from the rubble—stones stacked carefully, candles flickering in the wind. Someone had carved names into the largest piece of fallen timber. Rylan stopped walking. The woman beside him touched his arm. "You passed through here three days ago," she said quietly. "Asked about the merchant at the inn. The chapel fell that night." An older man rose from the kneeling crowd and walked toward them. He carried something wrapped in cloth. He didn't speak, just unfolded the fabric to reveal a child's wooden toy—a carved bird with painted wings, cracked down the middle. Behind him, the other villagers stood. Their faces weren't angry. They were empty, like they'd already spent everything they had and only grief remained. The man held out the toy. "My granddaughter was inside," he said. "She went in to practice her singing. The roof came down on her." He pressed the toy into Rylan's hands. "You did this. Everyone says you did this." Rylan looked at the broken bird, then at the ruined chapel, then at the faces watching him. He could deny it. He could say curses don't work that way, that correlation isn't cause, that he never touched the building. But the watch in the woman's pocket had frozen solid. The bridge had fallen. The shelf had collapsed. And now a child was dead because he'd walked past a chapel three days ago. He closed his fingers around the toy. "I'm trying to end this," he said. "I'm hunting the merchant who can break the curse. That's all I have." The man's expression didn't change. "Then you'd better catch him," he said, "before you kill anyone else." The woman tugged Rylan's sleeve, pulling him back toward the wagon. The villagers didn't follow. They just returned to their kneeling, their memorial, their names carved in fallen timber. Rylan climbed into the wagon still holding the broken bird. The woman took up the reins. "The merchant went through here too," she said. "Two days before you. He's close now." Rylan nodded. He couldn't fix what he'd broken. But he could finally catch what he was chasing—and he had to, because the next collapse might be worse.

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