Blake Pitch

Blake Pitch's Arc
Chapter 3 of 8

Blake Pitch's dream is envisioning transforming Marshwood into a dreamlike utopia despite its current state of chaos and crime.

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Chapter 3

The morning after the ribbon, Blake sat at his kitchen table with a legal pad and no words on it. The news had run his admission on a loop. His staff called it a win. He knew better. He had told the city what he did. He had not told the city what he would build in its place. Without that, the on-camera moment was just a mayor cleaning up his own mess. He called Lovelie down. She poured coffee and read the blank page. "You need a picture," she said. "Not a speech." "Then I need to stand where the picture is." They drove to the Haitian diner her mother used to bring her to. The booths were red vinyl patched with tape. The owner waved them to the back without asking. Lovelie pulled a napkin from the dispenser and set a pen on it. "Start with what you owe," she said. "Then what you want. Don't flip the order." Blake wrote housing families could afford. He wrote storefronts that stayed open past six. He wrote a clinic. He wrote a name under each one. Lovelie crossed out two lines and made him write them plainer. "This is still your list," she said. "You need someone whose list it already is." Blake knew the name before she said it. He made the call from the parking lot. Keith Andrews met him an hour later on the East Side, in front of a block of brick storefronts with hand-painted signs. Keith wore a dark suit and a gold watch that caught the sun. He did not shake Blake's hand. He nodded once and started walking. "My grandfather bought bread here every Saturday," Keith said. He pointed at a boarded window. "That was a barbershop. Rent went up in oh-nine. Nobody replaced him." He pointed at a shuttered market. "My cousin ran that. You signed the paper that closed it." Blake did not look away. "I did." "Then you owe the block, not me." They walked four more storefronts. Keith named each family. Blake wrote every name on the napkin from the diner. At the corner stood a concrete mural, faded but still bright in patches — a market, a bus, kids on a sidewalk, an older woman at a table. "That's what it looked like," Keith said. "Build back to that and I'll stand next to you. Build anything else and I won't." "I want a photograph of this," Blake said. "On my desk. Every day." Keith looked at him a long moment. "Take it." Blake photographed the mural on his phone. That night he printed it and set it against his office lamp. The napkin lay under it, twelve names in his handwriting. He had his blueprint. At eleven his phone buzzed. A blocked number. One line. Ask Andrews who paid his father's killer.

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