Blake Pitch

Blake Pitch's Arc

8 Chapters

Blake Pitch's dream is envisioning transforming Marshwood into a dreamlike utopia despite its current state of chaos and crime.

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Chapter 1 comic
Chapter 1

Blake Pitch watched the morning news with his coffee going cold. A stabbing in the worst district of Marshwood. Two hospitalized. A reporter stood on a cracked sidewalk and asked what the mayor planned to do. Blake set the mug down. He had spent three years selling this city as a place worth saving, a place he still believed could shine. One clip like this could burn a month of work by lunch. His phone buzzed on the counter. Advisors. Chief of staff. A donor. He ignored them and drove to city hall himself. The building sat quiet in the early light, its stone front pale, the little painted dinosaur statue in the courtyard grinning under its party hat. A child had left a flower at its feet. Blake stopped, looked at it, and kept walking. He wanted a Marshwood where that flower stayed there all week. Inside, his press aide met him with a tablet. "They're already running a second segment. Leakton Hills picked it up." "Of course they did." Blake took the tablet. On screen, Christian Howard stood at a podium in a pressed navy suit, emerald eyes bright, that half-smile he never quite hid. The mayor of the next city over. The man who had beaten Blake for a seat years ago and never stopped collecting on it. "Marshwood is not safe," Christian said into the microphone. "Ask its residents. Not its mayor." He stepped back. No follow-up. No softening. Blake's jaw tightened. He handed the tablet back. "We need a statement in twenty minutes," the aide said. "No statement. Get me the hospital. And the family." The aide blinked. "Sir, the optics—" "I said the family." He called Lovelie from his office. She picked up on the second ring. He told her what he was thinking. She listened, then said, "Don't spin it. Go stand there. Say their names." "It'll cost us the news cycle." "It'll cost you more to lie today." He drove to the hospital himself. Cameras found him on the curb. He did not read from a card. He named the two people who had been hurt. He said the district had been failed for a long time, and he had been part of that failure. He announced a funding shift into that neighborhood, effective that week, and gave a number he would have to answer for later. By afternoon, the story had turned. Not vanished. Turned. Local outlets ran the hospital footage. The stabbing was still the lead, but Blake's face was on it now, not Christian's. His phone buzzed again. A text from a blocked number. One line. Cute. Try the next one. Blake read it twice. He set the phone face down on the desk and looked out at the courtyard, at the small green statue, at the flower still there. The cycle had bought him a day. Christian was already loading the next.

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Chapter 2 comic
Chapter 2

The morning of the dog park opening, Blake reread the blocked number's text one more time. A new line had arrived overnight. Nice ribbon. Cut it and I drop the file at noon. He did not know what file. He knew the voice behind it. Christian Howard did not sign his threats, but he left fingerprints. Blake called Lovelie into the kitchen. King IV padded in behind her, tail high, coat brushed for the cameras. Blake showed her the phone. She read it twice, the way she always did. "He wants you to cancel," she said. "So the story is you hiding." "Or I cut the ribbon and he burns the day." "Then don't give him the ribbon." She set the phone down. "Move the crowd first. Somewhere he can't touch." Blake understood before she finished. He picked up the phone and called his staff. Move the pre-opening to the country club his father had built. Free breakfast. Families welcome. Dogs on the lawn. Buses from the affected district, no charge. Two hours before the park ribbon. By nine, the club's front porch was full of strollers and leashes. Kids chased King IV across the grass. Blake shook hands he had not shaken in a long time, some of them belonging to people who had every right to refuse. One woman held her grip a second longer than the others. He met her eyes and did not look away. Lovelie stood beside him at the low steps. She did not use a microphone. She said the twins were home with her sister and that she wanted every child here to feel as safe as her own. She named the neighborhood the buses had come from. She said its name like it was hers. At ten-forty, Blake's phone buzzed. A local reporter, not the blocked number. A packet had landed in her inbox. Old permit records. His name on a signature line from the displacement deal. She wanted a comment before noon. Blake stepped away from the crowd and sat on a concrete bench near the drive, its top layered in old campaign stickers, some his, most not. He called the reporter back. He did not deny the signature. He said yes, he signed it. He said families were pushed out. He named the deal. He said he would answer questions on camera at the park at noon, after the ribbon. At noon he cut the ribbon with King IV at his heel. Then he stood at the podium and answered every question the reporter asked. The story that ran that night was not the smear Christian had built. It was Blake admitting it first, on his own ground, with children and dogs behind him. The blocked number went quiet. Bradley called before dinner. He had seen the news. He asked if it was true. Blake said yes. The line held for a long moment. Then his son asked why he had to hear it from a screen.

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Chapter 3

The morning after the ribbon, Blake sat at his kitchen table with a legal pad and no words on it. The news had run his admission on a loop. His staff called it a win. He knew better. He had told the city what he did. He had not told the city what he would build in its place. Without that, the on-camera moment was just a mayor cleaning up his own mess. He called Lovelie down. She poured coffee and read the blank page. "You need a picture," she said. "Not a speech." "Then I need to stand where the picture is." They drove to the Haitian diner her mother used to bring her to. The booths were red vinyl patched with tape. The owner waved them to the back without asking. Lovelie pulled a napkin from the dispenser and set a pen on it. "Start with what you owe," she said. "Then what you want. Don't flip the order." Blake wrote housing families could afford. He wrote storefronts that stayed open past six. He wrote a clinic. He wrote a name under each one. Lovelie crossed out two lines and made him write them plainer. "This is still your list," she said. "You need someone whose list it already is." Blake knew the name before she said it. He made the call from the parking lot. Keith Andrews met him an hour later on the East Side, in front of a block of brick storefronts with hand-painted signs. Keith wore a dark suit and a gold watch that caught the sun. He did not shake Blake's hand. He nodded once and started walking. "My grandfather bought bread here every Saturday," Keith said. He pointed at a boarded window. "That was a barbershop. Rent went up in oh-nine. Nobody replaced him." He pointed at a shuttered market. "My cousin ran that. You signed the paper that closed it." Blake did not look away. "I did." "Then you owe the block, not me." They walked four more storefronts. Keith named each family. Blake wrote every name on the napkin from the diner. At the corner stood a concrete mural, faded but still bright in patches — a market, a bus, kids on a sidewalk, an older woman at a table. "That's what it looked like," Keith said. "Build back to that and I'll stand next to you. Build anything else and I won't." "I want a photograph of this," Blake said. "On my desk. Every day." Keith looked at him a long moment. "Take it." Blake photographed the mural on his phone. That night he printed it and set it against his office lamp. The napkin lay under it, twelve names in his handwriting. He had his blueprint. At eleven his phone buzzed. A blocked number. One line. Ask Andrews who paid his father's killer.

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Chapter 4 comic
Chapter 4

Blake stared at the message until the screen went dark. Ask Andrews who paid his father's killer. He set the phone face down on the mural photo. If the tip was real and he ignored it, he was building a block with a man who had reasons Blake didn't know. If the tip was a lie and he chased it, Keith would walk and take the twelve families with him. He could not ask Keith. He could not send staff. Anything on a city phone would leak by morning. He needed a question that didn't look like his question. The school news kid had left him a voicemail last week asking for a sit-down about the East Side. Blake had ignored it. Now he called back. Lucas Andreas answered on the first ring, his voice high and quick. "Mayor Pitch." "You still want that interview?" "Yes." "Not with me. With Keith Andrews. I'll set it up. You ask what I tell you to ask." A pause. "Okay." "One question in the middle. About his father. Ask if the case was ever closed. Nothing else about it. Then move on." "Why?" "Because I need to know how he answers, not what he answers." "Okay." Blake called Keith and framed it as a favor to a kid reporter. Keith agreed in four words and hung up. They met at the storefront block the next afternoon. Lucas wore his school badge and held a spiral notebook with both hands. Blake stood across the street by his car and watched through the window of the shuttered market. He could not hear them. He watched Keith's hands. Lucas asked his questions in order. Blake counted them on his fingers. On the fourth, Keith's shoulders dropped a half inch. He answered short. He did not look away. He did not touch his watch. He did not shift his weight. He said something else and then put his hand flat on the table, palm down, and left it there. Lucas closed the notebook. Keith walked him to the door and shook his hand. Blake drove Lucas two blocks and pulled over. "What did he say?" "He said the case is still open. He said he stopped asking the police about it six years ago." Lucas looked at his lap. "He said he doesn't know who did it. I believed him." "Why?" "He didn't try to make me believe him." Blake let him out at the corner. He sat in the car another minute. The tip was bait. Someone wanted him to break with Keith before the block broke ground. He knew who. He pulled up the blocked number and did not reply. Then he called Keith back. "I want to announce the twelve families by name next week," Blake said. "On the block. With you next to me." "Then be there Tuesday," Keith said, and hung up. Blake set the phone down. The photo of the mural was still on his desk. He moved it to the center.

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Chapter 5

Tuesday was five days away. Blake had a partner and twelve names. He did not have a builder. Every contractor on the city's approved list had donated to someone, owed someone, or worked a job that later got flagged. If he picked one of them, the East Side block would look like another handshake deal. The families would nod and wait for the lie. Lovelie set coffee in front of him at the kitchen table. She read the list over his shoulder and put a line through four names without asking. "Where do people go when they don't trust City Hall?" she said. "Church." "Then go to church." He went Sunday morning. The stone church sat quiet under a gray sky, the steeple wet from rain. Blake stood in the back through the service and watched who spoke to whom on the way out. A priest he'd met once at a funeral pointed him toward a man in a canvas jacket collecting hymnals. "He built the parish hall for materials cost," the priest said. "He won't take your call at the office. Try him here." Blake waited until the pews emptied. Before he could cross the aisle, a familiar voice stopped him. "You're at the wrong end of the room." Jordin Yu stood by the side door in a hoodie, hands in his pockets. Blake's surrogate son. Nineteen, and lately thinner than Blake liked. Jordin had been showing up in places Blake didn't tell him about. "You following me?" "I was already here." Jordin looked at the man with the hymnals. "He's the one. I checked his last three jobs this week. No liens. No cut corners. He fires his own crew if they skim." "Why were you checking?" "Because you were going to need him." Jordin's voice dropped. "I haven't been sleeping. I've been walking the block at night. It's not holding, Blake. Whoever you pick has to be clean or the whole thing comes apart." Blake looked at him a long moment. He did not ask what Jordin meant by not holding. He had heard it before and did not want it now. "Come with me," Blake said. They crossed the aisle together. Blake introduced himself. He did not offer a card. He offered a photograph of Keith's mural and a small wooden model he'd carried in under his coat — three little houses with painted shutters and porches the size of his thumb. He set it on the pew. "Twelve of these," Blake said. "On the block I broke. Keith Andrews is standing with me Tuesday. I need a builder who won't need managing." The man in the canvas jacket picked up the model and turned it in his hands. He looked at the porches. He looked at Jordin, who nodded once. "I'll be there Tuesday," the man said. "Bring the families. I want to hear them say what they want before I draw a line." Blake had his builder. Now he had to face the twelve.

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Chapter 6

Blake had a builder and a Tuesday. He did not have a way to gather the twelve families without Christian Howard hearing about it first. A public notice would leak by lunch. A City Hall meeting would show up in Leakton Hills before the coffee cooled. Howard had people in every clerk's office and every reporter's inbox. Blake needed a room no one would think to watch. He drove out past the last stoplight to a farm he had visited only once, during his first campaign. Samuel Peterson met him at the porch in a red plaid shirt, boots caked from the pen. Samuel had walked Blake's flyers door to door back when nobody knew Blake's name. He had never asked for anything after. "Mayor." "Sam. I need a favor that stays off paper." Samuel nodded once and opened the door. In the kitchen, Blake laid it out. Twelve families. One builder. A rival mayor who would burn the meeting down if he found the time and place. Blake needed the farm for a Tuesday evening, and he needed the invitations carried by hand. Samuel poured coffee. "Why me." "Because your name isn't on any list of mine. Christian's people aren't watching your driveway." "And the families?" "They won't come for a card from City Hall. They might come for something that looks like nothing." Samuel went to the mudroom and came back with a paper sack. Inside was a bundle of raw wool, soft and uneven, tied with twine. Katherine sold them at the November festival. Every family in the county had seen one on a neighbor's porch. "Twelve of these," Samuel said. "With a card. My handwriting, not yours. Festival preview. Tuesday, six. No mayor's seal." "They'll know it's me when they walk in." "Then they walked in on their own." Blake called Jordin from the truck. "I need you to drive with him. He doesn't know the block. You do." "I'm not sleeping anyway." Jordin's voice was flat. "Give me the list." They ran the deliveries Monday, before dawn. Samuel drove. Jordin walked each bundle to each porch and set it down without knocking. Twelve stops. No phone calls. No texts. No trace on any city server. By noon Jordin sent Blake one word. Done. Tuesday at six, Blake stood in the Peterson barn between hay bales and a stack of folding chairs. The builder waited by the door in his canvas jacket. Eleven families filed in. Then the twelfth. Keith Andrews came in last and shut the barn door behind them. No cameras. No leak. Howard had learned nothing. The oldest woman in the front row set her wool bundle on her lap and looked at Blake. "Talk," she said. Blake stepped forward. The builder opened a notebook. The families had come, and now they wanted to hear what he owed them, out loud, in a room Christian Howard could not reach.

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Chapter 7 comic
Chapter 7

The oldest woman waited. Blake set two things on the hay bale between them. First, a soft clip of magenta-pink fur. Second, a folder holding a signed contract on heavy paper. "That fur came off my dog," Blake said. "King IV. A man dyed him bright pink to force my hand on a deal I didn't want to sign. I signed anyway, because he had my dog. I keep this clip so I remember what it costs when I hand someone leverage over me." A man near the back snorted. "A dog story. We came for houses." "I'm getting there." Blake opened the folder. "This is a pact. My name is on it. So is the name of a young man I trust more than anyone in my office. It binds the twelve lots on your block to the twelve families in this room. Not to the city. Not to a bank. To you, and to whoever you leave them to. It can't be rezoned. It can't be sold out from under you. If a future mayor tries, this document goes public and he loses the seat." The oldest woman took the folder. She read slowly. She passed it to the man beside her. "Paper," the man said. "We've seen paper." Blake had expected that. He turned to the barn door. "I asked one more person to come. Somebody who owes me nothing." Maurice Greene stepped inside, still in his apron from the truck. Half the room straightened. The oldest woman's face softened at the sight of him. Maurice fed these people on Fridays. He knew which kids had allergies and which grandmothers had stopped coming to the window. "Maurice," Blake said. "I want you to read it. Tell them if it holds." Maurice took the folder. He read every page. The barn stayed quiet enough to hear the builder's pen tap once against his notebook. Maurice closed the folder. He looked at the oldest woman, not at Blake. "It holds," he said. "He put his own name under yours. If he breaks it, he breaks himself first." He handed the folder back to her. Then he looked at Blake. "I'll keep a copy at the truck," Maurice said. "Anybody wants to check it, they check it with me." The oldest woman set the folder on her lap next to her wool bundle. She looked at the builder. "Start with the corner house," she said. "That was Ruth's. She's tired of waiting." Eleven other voices followed, naming lots, naming rooms, naming a porch rail that had to face east. The builder wrote fast. Keith Andrews watched from the wall and did not speak, but he nodded once at Blake before looking away. Blake had the families. He had the pact. He had a witness the block would believe. What he did not have, he realized as Keith turned to leave, was any idea what Keith had just decided to do next.

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Chapter 8 comic
Chapter 8

The barn emptied in twos and threes. Blake stood in the doorway and watched Keith Andrews walk to a black sedan without looking back. Keith had witnessed the whole pact and said nothing. Blake needed to know what that silence meant before it hardened into a decision he couldn't undo. He drove home and told Lovelie he had one more stop. She read his face and did not argue. She handed him his coat and said, "Ask him straight. He'll respect straight." Blake went to the safe in his study first. He took out a small handgun and slid it into the holster under his jacket. He did not plan to use it. He wanted to walk in knowing he could walk out. He stopped at the liquor store on the way and bought a bottle of ten-year whiskey. Not the most expensive. Expensive would look like an apology. This one said thank you for sitting down. Keith's bar sat on a corner where the streetlight had been out for a month. The sign was peeling. Blake pushed through the double doors. Two men at the rail looked at him, then at Keith in the back booth, then back at their drinks. Keith was alone. A short glass in front of him, no ice. Blake set the bottle on the table and slid into the seat across from him. "I didn't tell you about the barn," Blake said. "I want to know how you took that." Keith looked at the bottle. He didn't touch it. "You brought a peace offering and a gun." Blake didn't ask how he knew. "Yes." "Smart." Keith turned the glass a quarter turn. "I watched you sign your name under theirs. You didn't put mine on it." "You didn't want it on paper." "No." "So did I read that wrong?" Keith was quiet a long moment. Then he poured two fingers from the new bottle into a second glass and pushed it across. "My grandfather told me once. A man who owes you and admits it is worth more than a man who swears to you." Keith lifted his own glass. "You didn't ask me to bless it. You did it in front of me. That's different." Blake let out the breath he'd been holding since the barn. "Then we're clear." "We're clear on the block." Keith set the glass down. "There's another thing. The tip you got about my father. I know who sent it. I want your help proving it." Blake felt the gun's weight against his ribs and understood he wouldn't need it tonight. He would need something harder. "Name him," Blake said. "Howard." Blake picked up the glass Keith had poured and drank. The whiskey burned clean. "Then we work together on that too," he said. Keith nodded once. The alliance held. The next fight had just named itself.

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