Mel

Mel's Arc
Chapter 32 of 36

Mel's dream is winning the heart of the rival ranch's heir at the Cub River summer dance..

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Chapter 32

Mel had spoken three lines of her vow when Garrett's voice cut across the barn. "Riders!" he called from the loft. "Two men, coming off the Caldwell road. Fast." The benches stirred. A woman rose halfway. A man near the door reached for his hat. Mel felt the panic start to move through the room like water through a cracked dam. She knew that if the guests scattered now, the Caldwells won without lifting a hand. There would be no wedding to finish. Mel did not turn to the road. She kept her eyes on Ted and lifted her voice so the whole barn could hear. "Sit down," she said. "Every one of you sit down. Reverend, keep going." Cross understood. He raised his red Bible and spoke louder, steady as a plow horse. "Do you take this man?" The familiar words held the guests in their seats. Celeste Winters caught the frightened woman's hand and pulled her back down onto the bench. Then the first rider filled the open doorway. He sat a sturdy brown horse, and he did not look like a wedding guest. He wore a wide brown hat and a long coat, and a red scarf hung at his throat. His black beard was streaked with trail dust. He swung down slow, in no hurry, letting the whole room watch him do it. "Clayton Rawlins," Celeste whispered. "Rides for the Caldwells. Their meanest hand." Mel had never met him, but she knew the type. The Caldwells sent him to break things quietly. He stepped into the barn and looked over the crowded benches, the hung cloth, the greenery, the preacher with his book open. His hand rested near his belt. Mel walked toward him. She did not stop until she stood between Rawlins and Cross, in her borrowed gown, in front of forty seated witnesses. "You're welcome to sit," she said. "We're near the end. But you'll do it in front of every family in this valley." Rawlins looked past her at the faces. Mel watched him count them, the same way the last Caldwell hand had counted them in the church square. Farmers, wives, children, the old rancher near the front. All of them watching him. All of them witnesses. A second rider stopped his horse outside but did not dismount. Rawlins glanced back at him. Whatever the Caldwells had sent them to do, it was meant for an empty road, not a full barn. Rawlins touched his hat brim, a small mocking dip. "Nice barn," he said. Then he turned, climbed back onto the brown horse, and rode off with the second man. Cross did not miss a beat. "Do you take this man?" he asked again. "I do," Mel said, breathless, and the barn broke into a cheer that carried out the open door after the two departing riders. She was married. But she had seen Rawlins count the room and leave, and she knew he would report every name he'd memorized to the Caldwells.

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