Bo Grizzleback

Bo Grizzleback's Arc

8 Chapters

Bo Grizzleback's dream is brewing a signature moonshine that earns him a legendary reputation among off-world traders..

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Chapter 1 comic
Chapter 1

Bo Grizzleback poured the fresh batch into a shot glass and slid it across the bar to Aiden 'Spice' Garcia. The chef sniffed it, sipped it, and set the glass down with a slow shake of his dreadlocks. "Bro. It's clean. It burns. But it tastes like every jug of rotgut off every dust freighter that lands out here." Bo laughed his big laugh, but the sound was thinner than usual. Off-world traders would dock at the port again in three weeks. He wanted them leaving with jugs of Grizzleback moonshine tucked under their arms, telling stories about it two systems over. Right now he had a still full of liquor no one would remember by morning. The bar around him was built to be remembered. Orange glass panels ran floor to ceiling along the front wall, catching the desert sun and throwing hot amber light across the bottles. Southern charm, off-world money — that had been the plan when Bo opened the place. The plan was working, except for the part that mattered most. Aiden leaned on the counter and tapped the empty glass. "You want a signature, you need something nobody else has. Something local. Something weird." Bo already knew it. He'd tried mesquite. He'd tried three kinds of cactus fruit. Every batch came out tasting like the last man's mistake. The door chimed and Esther Greyshell walked in from the heat, straw hat pulled low, a burlap sack in her fist. She dropped the sack on the bar without a greeting. "You asked me to keep an eye out. My cousin's boyfriend found these growing on the north ridge, in the shade under the old rockfall. Nowhere else." Bo opened the sack. Inside were a dozen fat green pods, ribbed like small melons, weeping a pale blue sap where the stems had been cut. The smell hit him — sharp, sweet, a little like anise, a little like something he couldn't name. "Never seen these," he said. Esther sighed as if seeing them was a burden. "Nobody has. The boy says the ridge only fruits after the twin-moon rains. Won't fruit again for two years." She looked at him flat. "So don't waste them, Grizzleback." Bo took one pod to the back and split it with a paring knife. The blue sap ran onto the cutting board and stained the wood. He tasted the tip of his knife and felt the kick land at the back of his throat — cold first, then a slow heat that climbed into his ears. Aiden, watching from the doorway, whistled low. "That's your signature, bro." Bo counted the pods again. Twelve. Enough for one small batch. Enough to make the traders talk, if he got it right. Not enough to make a second bottle for two years. He wiped the knife clean and reached for a mason jar.

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Chapter 2

Bo ran the first batch that night. He crushed two pods, mashed the pulp with sugar and yeast, and sealed it in his smallest fermenter. By morning the airlock had blown off the lid. Blue foam ran down the side of the tank and pooled on the floor. The mash smelled sharp and wrong, like burnt anise. Bo dipped a spoon in and tasted. The kick was gone. The heat was gone. Two pods, wasted. Ten left. One shot at a batch that would carry his name off-world, and his rig couldn't hold the pressure. Aiden showed up at the back door with two coffees and took one look at the mess. "Bro. Your tank's too small. Those pods are throwing off gas like a rocket." Bo wiped blue sludge off his boots. Three weeks until the traders docked. No time to order a proper pressure tank from off-world, and no local shop stocked one. Aiden sipped his coffee. "You know who keeps a cold-pressure rig in his back room? For the film reels he says he don't have?" Bo did know. He didn't love it. "Fat Tony." They found Fat Tony behind his shop, feet up, watching an old western on a cracked screen. He waved without looking. "Grizzleback. Spice. What a man owe a man today?" Bo laid it out plain. He needed the pressure rig for one week. Fat Tony's tail flicked. "That rig is my baby, mon. I use it for delicate things." Bo leaned on the doorframe. "Tony. The port run last spring. The customs officer. Who talked him down?" Fat Tony's ears twitched flat. He sighed a long sigh and rubbed his face with one paw. "You a cruel man, Bo. Bringing up old debts on a fine morning." He led them into the back. The rig sat under a tarp, squat and heavy, with brass valves and a thick glass window. Aiden whistled. Fat Tony patted it like a dog. "One week. You bring it back clean, or I tell your mama what really happen to her truck." Bo laughed his big laugh, real this time, and shook the mouse's paw. They loaded the rig into Bo's cart and hauled it back to the bar under the orange glass front. By sundown the rig was hooked up in the back room. Bo crushed two more pods, mixed the mash, and sealed the tank. The pressure gauge climbed and held. Through the glass window the mash churned slow and blue. Bo let out a breath he'd been holding since morning. Eight pods left. One rig that could take the kick. One batch to get right, and no room to botch another. He pulled up a stool and watched the gauge, and started thinking about what he'd flavor it with.

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Chapter 3

By the third day the mash had settled to a clean blue under the glass. Bo drew off a small taste and set the spoon down slow. It was good. Better than good. But when he looked around the back room for something to pour it into on trader day, all he had were tin jiggers and mason jars scratched from years of use. A legend couldn't ride in a scratched jar. Aiden leaned in the doorway with his arms crossed. "Bro. You're staring at that shelf like it owes you money." Bo said he needed a bottle. Something that would stop a trader mid-step. Aiden pushed off the frame. "Come by the Cantina. I got something been sitting on my shelf longer than it should." They walked over under the noon sun. The Cantina's orange glass caught the light and threw shards of color on the sidewalk. Inside smelled like cumin and fry oil. Aiden waved off a cook and led Bo through the kitchen to a small office in the back. He climbed on a chair and pulled a wrapped shape down from the top shelf. Dust came with it. He set the bundle on the desk and unwound the cloth. Under the wrapping sat a crystal decanter shaped like a human skull. The facets caught the office light and threw sharp color across the wall. Bo let out a low whistle. Aiden shrugged like it was nothing. "My uncle left it to me. I don't drink brown liquor and it just sits up there collecting dust. Put your blue stuff in it, bro. Traders see this, they'll pay before they taste." Bo turned the skull in his hands. It held maybe a liter. Heavy at the base. The stopper was faceted glass and fit tight. He could see the whole thing on the bar under the pendant light, the moonshine glowing blue through the eye sockets. Bo tried to pay for it. Aiden waved him off and told him to bring the first pour back on trader night. They shook on it. Bo carried the decanter home wrapped in the same cloth and set it on the back counter next to the pressure rig. He rinsed it three times in clean water and held it up to the window. No spots. No scratches. He would rack the moonshine off the mash in four days and pour it straight into the skull. One decanter. One liter. That was the problem now. He had eight pods and a rig that could run more, but only one bottle worth showing. If a trader wanted to buy a case, Bo had nothing to sell him past the first pour.

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Chapter 4

Word travels fast in a small town. By the next morning Bo had three strangers loitering near his back door, and a kid on a bike who kept pedaling past the alley like he was casing the place. Aiden showed up with two coffees and set one on the counter next to the skull decanter. "Bro. Somebody's been running their mouth. Half the Cantina was asking about your blue stuff last night." Bo looked at the decanter under the pendant light. One liter of blue glow, eight pods locked in a drawer, and trader night three days out. He couldn't guard the bar and set up his stall at the market at the same time. Aiden snapped his fingers. "Fiora. She runs that gym like a barracks, bro. She'll know what to do." Bo grabbed his hat. They walked over together and found her wiping down a rack of weights. Bo laid it out plain. Somebody wanted his batch. He needed eyes on the decanter until the traders paid for it. Fiora didn't blink. She squared up, arms crossed, and grinned like he'd offered her a fight. "Grizzleback, listen up. You don't defend a position by sitting on it. You control the ground." She jabbed a finger at him. "Trader night, I'm on you. Two of my regulars on the perimeter. Anybody reaches for that bottle, they pull back a stump. Copy?" Bo nodded. Aiden gave her a slow clap. She told them to move the setup early. Get to the bazaar before the crowd, pick a stall with sightlines, and make the decanter visible from every angle. Hide nothing. A thief hits what he can grab in the dark, not what's lit up under a hundred eyes. They loaded the decanter into a padded case and walked it to the Moon Bazaar an hour before opening. The purple glass threw color across the white floor. Bo set the skull on a small riser under a lamp. The blue caught the light and pulled every passing vendor's head around. Aiden set out cards with the price. Bo kept one hand near the case. He felt exposed and stupid until a shadow filled the aisle behind him. Fiora, in a black shirt and cargo pants, sunglasses pushed up on her head. Two lean regulars flanked the stall six feet out, pretending to browse rugs. "Eyes up, Grizzleback. You brew. I'll handle the rest." She planted herself at the corner of the table and didn't move for the next four hours. Two men circled twice and drifted off. A third reached and pulled his hand back when Fiora leaned in. By closing, the decanter still sat under the lamp, untouched. Bo carried it home in the case with Fiora walking point. The batch was safe. But now he had one bottle, a guard detail, and traders arriving in three days who would want more than a single pour.

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Chapter 5

Two days out from trader night, Bo sat at his bar counting pods when Aiden banged through the front door. "Bro. Some dude in a gray coat was at the Cantina asking what's in your blue stuff. Offered a bartender fifty credits for a swab of the mash bucket." Bo set down the pods. One recipe was all he had. If the formula walked before the traders landed, the skull on his shelf was just glass. They moved fast. Bo locked the pod drawer and hauled the pressure rig into the back room. Aiden taped paper over the fermenter window. Bo scrubbed the mash bucket in the alley and dumped the rinse water two blocks away. He wiped the copper coil with vinegar and stored it inside a crate marked as cleaning supplies. Aiden posted himself at the front, phone up, snapping pictures of anyone who lingered by the window. By noon they had three faces logged and a gray coat that passed twice. Bo called Fiora. She showed up in ten minutes with two regulars and a clipboard. "Grizzleback. You don't wait for the punch. You pick the ground." She set one regular on the alley door and one on the roof. She told Bo to keep brewing like normal and let the gray coat come to him. "If he wants a taste, we serve him a taste. Our taste." Bo poured a decoy jar: cactus fruit, food coloring, a splash of the real batch on top for the smell. He set it behind the bar where any snoop could see. An hour later the front door opened. Not the gray coat. Fiora, back already, dragging a woman in a dust jacket by the elbow. "Caught her behind the gym paying my newest member to run her mouth about your recipe." The woman shook loose and held up both hands. Fiora kept talking. "She's not a buyer. She's a plant. Whole thing's a setup. Somebody hired her and the coat to spook you into moving the real recipe somewhere they could grab it. The questions were bait, Grizzleback. They wanted you running." Bo looked at the decoy jar, then at the taped fermenter, then at Aiden, who was already laughing. Bo let the woman go with a warning and a photo for Fiora's file. He pulled the tape off the fermenter and set the copper coil back on its hook. The recipe was safe. It had never been in reach. But the hoax told him something worse: someone with money knew his batch was worth stealing, and they were patient enough to try again. He had one filled decanter, eight pods, and two days. Whoever hired the coat would come at trader night, and this time not for the recipe.

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Chapter 6

Trader night came fast. Bo set the crystal skull decanter under a single lamp at the end of the bar and lined the room with Fiora's regulars along the walls. Aiden stood beside him in a clean shirt, sunglasses pushed up on his forehead, ready to pour the first taste he'd been promised. The blue liquid caught the light like a lit fuse. Traders filed in from the landing pad in coats still dusted with grit. The trouble started before the second round. A tall trader in a green coat laughed too loud and called the batch a paint job. He waved a small vial of blue liquid over his head and told the room he'd bought the same stuff two docks over for half the price. Behind him, a woman in a dust jacket, the same one Fiora had dragged in two days back, poured her vial into a shot glass and offered it around. Bo saw the play. They were seeding fakes into the room so no trader could tell his batch from theirs. He had no stamp, no label, nothing on the decanter that said the pour was his. "Bro, that's our girl," Aiden said, low. "They're gonna walk out selling ghost bottles with your name on them." Bo reached for the decanter. He had eight pods left and one filled skull, and any trader who bought a fake tonight would tell every dock the blue batch was a scam. The door opened. Fat Tony strolled in wearing a flowered shirt and sandals, a folded paper in one paw. He climbed onto a stool and tapped the bar twice. "Easy now, easy. Before anybody drink anything, mi have a small ting to read." He unfolded the paper and held it up. It was a supply contract, signed and dated three weeks back, granting Fat Tony a registered stake in any product distilled using his pressure rig. At the bottom sat Bo's signature, clean and clear. "So the blue batch, it come through my rig, and it carry my mark. Any bottle without the mark, it not the real ting." He pulled a small stamp from his pocket and pressed a wax seal onto the base of the decanter. The green coat lowered his vial. The woman in the dust jacket set hers down and walked out. Aiden grabbed Bo's arm. "Bro, when did you sign that?" Bo stared at the paper. He remembered the night with the rig, a stack of forms, Tony saying it was for insurance. Fat Tony leaned in and smiled. "Relax, Grizzleback. Mi save your night. But the paper real, and the stake real. We partners now, on the blue." He clapped Bo on the shoulder and turned to pour. The fakes were dead. The batch was Bo's, stamped and safe. And half of every bottle from here on belonged to Fat Tony.

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Chapter 7

The traders left near dawn, and by noon Bo had a list of orders longer than his arm. Three ships wanted crates by the next moon cycle. One wanted a standing shipment every quarter. Bo sat at the bar and stared at the empty space where the crystal skull decanter had stood. He had eight pods left and no way to make, bottle, or ship what the traders now expected. If the crates didn't move in a few days, the orders would die and his name with them. Fat Tony came in still wearing his flowered shirt. He set two coffees on the bar and slid one over. "Grizzleback, mi see the face. You winning and losing at the same time, seen?" Bo showed him the list. Tony whistled low. "You need glass, you need labor, you need a boat. Mi rig can pull the liquid, but mi nah run crates. You want move like this, you talk to Malcolm." Bo frowned. Malcolm Whitfield ran the casinos. He didn't ship moonshine. Tony grinned. "Him ship everything. Him just don't advertise. Come, mi drive." Malcolm met them at his mansion in a white suit, sunglasses on despite the shaded porch. He read the order list once and handed it back. "Bottling line in my basement. Cargo runners in and out every night for the tables. I can have your first crate on a ship in four days." He smiled slow. "Sixty percent. That's my number." Bo felt the room tilt. Sixty to Malcolm, half of what remained to Tony. He'd be paying to make his own drink. He opened his mouth and nothing came out. Fat Tony leaned on the arm of the couch. "Malcolm, mi love you, but sixty a joke. Grizzleback carry the recipe, the pods, the name. Without him you shipping colored water. And mi already hold half through the rig contract. You take sixty, we all fighting over crumbs. Twenty, and you move volume for years." Malcolm's smile thinned. Bo found his voice. "Twenty-two. And you bottle at cost, no markup on glass." He set the list on the table and kept his hand flat on it. "You said cargo runs every night. Empty space on those runs costs you nothing. Twenty-two on full bottles is real money for empty room." Malcolm looked at Tony, then at Bo. He took off the sunglasses. "Twenty-five. Glass at cost. First crate leaves Thursday." He put out a hand. Bo shook it before his nerve broke. On the drive back, Tony laughed the whole way, saying Bo had bargained like a man who'd done it before. Bo watched the road and thought about the eight pods in his cellar. He had a shipping plan now. He had four days to fill a crate of decanters, and every skull he filled belonged a little less to him.

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Chapter 8

Bo counted the pods again on the cellar floor. Eight, ribbed and heavy, cool in his palms. The traders wanted a full crate by Thursday. Eight pods would not fill a crate unless he thinned the mash, and a thin pour would break the name he had just built. He was still staring at the count when Fat Tony came down the stairs with two coffees and a grin that meant he had been thinking. "Grizzleback, put down di fruit," Tony said. "Mi know a man who grow tings other men cyaan grow. Him name Ziggy. Him got a glass house full of sun and dirt. You bring him one pod, him might bring you a hundred." Bo shook his head. "Every partner takes a cut. Malcolm has twenty-five. You have half. What does this one want?" Tony laughed. "Ziggy nah want money. Him want di plant. Him love a puzzle more than a payday. Trust mi, come." They drove out to a greenhouse that glowed orange and yellow against the pale dirt, the glass panes catching the sun like lit coals. Inside, the air was wet and warm. George Beetlesby was up on a ladder with a wrench, tightening a mister line. "Bo Grizzleback! Heard about your skull bottle. Nice work, nice work. Ziggy's in the back with the seedlings, go on through." He waved the wrench and went back to the pipe, whistling. Ziggy sat at a bench under a grow lamp, sleeves rolled, hands stained green. Bo set a pod on the bench. Ziggy leaned in and did not speak for a long moment. He turned the pod, weighed it, pressed a thumb to a ridge, then split it with a small knife and looked at the seeds. "North ridge. Twin-moon rain. I have read about these. I have never held one." Bo cleared his throat. "I need more than I have. Eight pods, a crate to fill, four days. If you can grow them, I keep most of what comes out. You keep the plants. Every cutting, every seed after the first crop, yours." Ziggy looked up. His eyes were wet. "You would give me the line?" "Grow me pods," Bo said. "The rest is yours to name." Ziggy took the pod in both hands like a baby bird. He said he could force a fast cycle under the lamps, that the first green fruit could swell in weeks, not seasons. Not in time for Thursday, but in time for the next order, and the one after. Bo walked out into the orange light feeling the crate problem shift. Thursday was still a wall. He would have to thin one batch, or beg Malcolm for a smaller first shipment, or lose a contract. But the two-year drought was over. He had a farm now, and he had not paid a cent for it.

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