Lovable Viking

Lovable Viking's Arc

4 Chapters

Lovable Viking's dream is continuing to be known as the Lovable Viking. Not allowing his crew to raid women and children..

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Chapter 1

Men called Marcus the Lovable Viking, and he had beaten a man half to death to keep the name. His rule was simple: his crew did not touch women or children. He learned it in a burned village, where he found a boy sitting alone in the dirt. Now Marcus stood on the deck of his longship and watched his men mutter over their oars. The name held them. So did fear. He no longer knew which one held harder. Marcus called a landing on a stretch of coast. A fishing village sat above the beach, cook-fires still smoking. He gave the order himself. "Take the silver. The nets. Leave the people be." Then he did something new. He walked back to the ship alone and climbed to the dragon-headed stern. He would watch from there. He would not stand over them. He wanted to see what his men did when his fists were far away. Franklin led the first row up the sand. He carried his axe loose and his round shield high, red beard bright against the smoke. Benjamin followed, golden-bearded, quieter, his eyes always sliding toward Marcus. They knew he was watching. That was the whole test, and Bjorn hated that it was. A woman ran from a doorway with a child on her hip. Franklin stepped into her path. He raised his axe. Marcus’ hand went to the rail. He did not shout. He waited. Franklin held there a long moment. Then he lowered the axe. "Move, then," he growled, and shoved past her toward the silver. He had not spared her for mercy. He had spared her because Bjorn might be looking. Marcus saw it in the man's shoulders, and it turned his stomach. They came back with full sacks and no blood on their hands. On the beach Marcus faced them. "You held the rule," he said. "We held it because you sat up there like a crow," Franklin said. He spat in the sand. "Turn your back for real, Marcus. See what we do then." No man laughed. No man argued. Benjamin looked at his boots. That silence was its own answer. Marcus had his proof now, and it was worse than not knowing. His crew obeyed the rule. They did not believe in it. Fear had done the work, and fear only worked while he watched. The name he guarded sat on nothing but his own two fists. He made his choice on the sand. He would not rule by fear alone anymore. He needed his men to want the rule, not dread it. "Load the ship," he told them. He looked at Franklin as he said it. "When we make port, you and I talk. All of us. Not fists. Talk." Franklin's brow creased, surprised. For the first time, the Lovable Viking had shown his crew something other than a raised hand.

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Chapter 2

They made port at dusk. Marcus meant to hold his talk on the beach, with every man sitting in the sand and no axes in reach. He counted heads by the moored longship and came up one short. Franklin's oar bench was empty. His shield was gone from its peg on the rail. Benjamin stood at the gangplank, blond beard wet with sea spray, and would not look at Marcus. Benjamin had watched his boots on the beach when Franklin dared Marcus to turn his back. He was doing it again now. "Where," Marcus said. "Inland. There's a farmstead over the ridge." Benjamin swallowed. "He said he wanted to see if the rule was real or just your fists. He took two men." "And you stayed." "I stayed." Benjamin opened his hand. A silver coin lay in his palm, bright and worn thin at the edge. "He dropped this going up the sand. I marked the trail. He didn't cover it." Marcus took the coin. Franklin had not hidden his path. He wanted Marcus to follow. Every man on that deck was watching to see whether Marcus went, and how he came back. He lifted a lantern off its hook and lit it. Then he pulled a coil of heavy iron chain from the ship's stores and hung it over his shoulder. The links dragged loud across the planks. Nobody spoke. "Come," he told Benjamin. "You'll see it done." They climbed the ridge fast. The lantern lit hoofmarks and a second dropped coin in the grass. Marcus heard the farmstead before he saw it. A woman was shouting. A dog barked itself hoarse. Franklin stood in the yard with his axe low. Two crewmen held the farmer against a wall. The woman had her back to a doorway with two children behind her skirts. Franklin had not swung yet. He was waiting, the way a man waits to be caught. "You came," Franklin said, and grinned into his red beard. "So it's still just you, then." Marcus set the lantern down. He walked past Franklin, past the axe, and stopped in front of the woman. He put his back to Franklin's blade and stood there. The yard went quiet. The two crewmen let the farmer go. "Swing," Marcus said. "You wanted my back turned. There it is." Franklin's grip shifted twice on the haft. He did not swing. He lowered the axe and looked at the two crewmen, who were already backing toward the gate, and at Benjamin holding the lantern like a witness. Marcus dropped the chain in the dirt at Franklin's feet. "Carry it to the ship. Wear it at the oar until I say otherwise. The crew will see that." Franklin picked up the chain. He carried it down the ridge without a word, and every man in the yard saw him do it. But Marcus had won the yard by standing in front of a blade, not by talking. He had proved the rule with his own body. Now nine other men knew exactly what it cost him to prove it, and the talk he had promised had not happened at all.

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Chapter 3

By morning the longship pulled hard for open water. Franklin sat chained at his oar, red beard crusted with salt, pulling half-strokes and glaring at Marcus's back. The iron dragged at his wrist with each stroke. The other men rowed in silence, but Marcus felt them listening. Franklin muttered under his breath, and two benches over, a man laughed. The chain had cowed Franklin, but it had not made the crew love the rule. It had only given Franklin something to bleed against, out loud, where all could hear. Marcus knew the danger. A beaten man poisons a crew slowly, one grievance at a time. He could break Franklin again. But another beating would only prove Franklin's point: that the rule was fists and nothing more. So Marcus did something else. At midday he called for oars up. He walked to Franklin's bench and knelt. He took a key from his belt and unlocked the iron from Franklin's wrist. "Stand up," Marcus said. Franklin stood, rubbing the raw skin. The crew went still. Benjamin, at the next oar, gripped his shaft and watched, the same way he had watched in the yard. "You said the rule was only my fists," Marcus said. He spoke loud, for all of them. "In the yard I turned my back to your axe. You know why I didn't die." Franklin said nothing. "Because a man who kills women and children is a man his own crew won't follow." Marcus set the chain in Franklin's hands. "That night, my back to your blade, it was you who couldn't swing. Not me who stopped you. You. Because some part of you knows I'm right." Franklin's jaw worked. His eyes flicked to the watching men. "You want me to thank you for the irons?" "No. I want you to carry them to the sea and drop them." Marcus stepped back. "You're free. If the rule is only fear, leave at the next port. Take who'll follow. But if you stay, you stay because you choose the rule. Not because I chain you to it." The longship rocked. Franklin held the heavy chain, and every man waited to see it splash. He looked at Benjamin. He looked at the two who had followed him to the farmstead. None of them moved to back him now. Franklin walked to the rail. He heaved the chain over. It hit the water and sank. Then he sat back down at his oar. "I'll pull," he said. "For now." It was not loyalty. Marcus knew that. But Franklin had chosen the bench with his hands free, in front of the crew, and the muttering stopped. The poison had a name now, and its name had sat down and taken up the oar. Marcus had traded a controlled enemy for a free man who might yet turn — and the crew had seen him do it.

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Chapter 4

Three days after Franklin dropped the chain, the grumbling changed. It was no longer about the rule. It was about gold. The men had spared two villages and taken little. Now they muttered over thin plunder and thinner mead. Benjamin spoke for them at the fire one night. "We follow your law," he said, rubbing his blond beard. "But mercy fills no chests. Give us richer prey, or the men will drift back to easy targets." Marcus knew he was right. A rule with no reward would not hold. So Marcus found them richer prey. He had heard of a warlord's stronghold up the coast. Dark stone, iron gates, banners on every tower. Inside sat a hoard built from years of taking. No women there. No children. Only fighting men who had grown fat and slow behind their walls. Marcus called the crew together and pointed north. "There," he said. "A hard raid. A fair one. And gold enough to end your griping." Franklin laughed, but not against him this time. "You'd throw us at a fortress to keep your pretty name?" "I'd throw us at men who can fight back," Marcus said. "Not farmers. Not mothers. Are you afraid, Franklin?" Franklin spat over the rail and grinned. "No." They landed at dusk and climbed the rocks below the walls. Benjamin found a low gate near the sea, half-rotted and lightly watched. Marcus sent Franklin and six men over the wall to open it from within. He waited in the dark, listening. A shout. Steel. Then the gate groaned wide, and Marcus led the rest through. The fight was short and ugly. The warlord's men were slow, as Marcus had guessed. His crew took the courtyard, then the hall. They broke open the strongrooms and hauled out chests heavy with silver and coin. No woman crossed their path. No child cried in a doorway. The rule held because Marcus had chosen a place where it cost nothing. They rowed out before dawn, the longship low in the water with plunder. The men laughed and counted coins by lantern light. Benjamin dropped a fistful of silver into Marcus's hands. "This," he said, "is a rule worth keeping." The grumbling was gone, drowned in gold taken clean. But Marcus watched the fortress shrink behind them, and his jaw tightened. The warlord had not been in his hall. His banners still flew, but his seat was empty. A raiding lord did not sit still under a stolen hoard without answering it. Marcus had fed his crew and saved his name. He had also robbed a man who commanded far more swords than eight benches of oars. The men slept content. Marcus stayed awake, watching the dark water for sails.

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