Chapter 84
After church, Kiersten brought up the roof. They sat on the porch of the old house, and she pointed at the sagging shingles over the kitchen. "That corner leaks again," she said. "We should patch it this week."
Eduardo already had a plan. He'd replace the whole section, strip it to the beams, do it right. He opened his mouth to say so. Then he stopped. He heard himself about to decide for both of them, the way he always had.
"What do you want to do?" he asked.
She looked at him like she was testing the words. "Patch it. We don't have money for the whole roof. Not yet."
The old Eduardo would have pushed. He would have made his plan sound like her plan. He felt the pull. He breathed and let it go.
"Okay," he said. "We patch it. Show me where."
They worked the rest of the afternoon. She held the ladder. He cut the tar paper. When he reached for the hammer, she said, "Measure twice." He did. He didn't argue that he knew how. He just measured twice.
It felt strange. Smaller. He was not the man with the plan. He was half of two people fixing a roof. The leak got patched. The corner held.
That night, after she slept, Eduardo pulled a small box from his jacket. Inside sat a rose gold locket. The front read "forever in my heart" in curved script. He had bought it weeks ago and hidden it.
He remembered the first years. Kiersten had wanted a necklace once. Something small, something that was just from him. He had told her it was a waste. He had made her feel foolish for asking. She stopped asking after that.
He could have handed it to her today, after the roof. Made it a reward. Made it his gesture, his moment. He knew that trick now. That was the old way, turning a gift into a stage.
So he waited.
In the morning, Kiersten found the locket on the shelf, next to the two cups. No bow. No note explaining himself. Just the locket, open, empty, waiting for her to fill it.
She picked it up. She read the words. Her thumb moved over the engraving.
"When did you get this?" she asked.
"A while ago," Eduardo said. "I was waiting."
"For what?"
"For it to mean something. Not to win anything."
She was quiet. She turned the locket in her hand. Then she said, "It's empty."
"I know. I didn't pick what goes inside. That's yours."
Kiersten closed her fingers around it. For a long moment she didn't speak. Then she fastened the chain behind her neck herself.
"I'll fill it," she said. "My choice."
Eduardo nodded. He had given her something without steering it. The gift was hers to shape. For the first time, the house felt like it ran on two hands, not one.
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