Bonnie Gremlin

Bonnie Gremlin's Arc

6 Chapters

Bonnie Gremlin's dream is learning Dottie's complete beauty routine without triggering her security traps..

Bramble's avatar
by @Bramble
Chapter 1 comic
Chapter 1

Bonnie Gremlin pressed her pink nose against the crack in the bathroom wall. Through the gap, she watched Dottie apply her morning face cream in perfect circles. Bonnie's large ears twitched with excitement. She wanted to learn every step of Dottie's beauty routine—the creams, the tools, the secret techniques. But Dottie protected her bathroom like a fortress. Trip wires hung across doorways. Pressure plates hid under rugs. Motion sensors blinked red in dark corners. Bonnie pulled back from the wall and smiled. She would figure it out. One way or another, those beauty secrets would be hers. Bonnie crept down the dusty hallway and peeked out a window. Dottie's white house sat in the middle of the desert like a pearl in sand. The 1950s home had charm, but it also had problems—for Bonnie, at least. Every room held a new trap. Every doorway meant danger. Bonnie's polka-dot dress swished as she moved to the kitchen. She grabbed a notebook from her hiding spot behind the breadbox. Inside, she had drawn maps of the house and written down everything she had seen so far. Step one: face cream in circles. Step two: unknown. Bonnie tapped her pencil against her pink nose. She needed to get closer to that bathroom. She needed to see the whole routine from start to finish. Outside, the morning sun heated the desert sand. Bonnie slipped through a window and landed softly on the ground. She pulled a brass spyglass from her dress pocket and extended it with a soft click. The leather grip felt warm in her small paws. She aimed it at the white house and watched Dottie move from room to room. Through the lens, Bonnie could see the bathroom window. She could see shelves lined with bottles and jars. Her heart beat faster. Every bottle held a secret. Every jar meant another step to learn. Bonnie collapsed the spyglass and tucked it away. She would watch and wait. She would learn the patterns. And when the time was right, she would sneak past every single trap. Bonnie walked across the hot sand toward the edge of town. A metal trash can sat near an old building, stuffed full of magazines. She pulled out a stack and flipped through the glossy pages. Beauty tips covered every page—face masks, hair styles, makeup tricks. Bonnie tucked three magazines under her arm and headed back toward the desert. She had Dottie's house to watch. She had her spyglass to see with. She had her notebook to record everything. And now she had magazines to study between visits. Bonnie looked back at the white house in the distance. That building held everything she wanted to know. Soon, she would know it all.

Read chapter →
Chapter 2 comic
Chapter 2

Bonnie sat cross-legged in the shade of a rock outcrop. She opened her notebook to a fresh page and drew a line down the middle. On the left side, she wrote "What I Know." On the right side, she wrote "What I Need to Learn." Her pencil moved quickly across the paper. Under "What I Know," she wrote three items: face cream goes in circles, Dottie has many bottles, traps are everywhere. Under "What I Need to Learn," she wrote a longer list: how to apply makeup, which creams go first, how to style fur properly. Bonnie stared at the lists. The right side was much longer than the left. She needed help before she could tackle Dottie's routine. She needed someone to teach her the basics first. Bonnie closed her notebook and stood up. Past the rock outcrop, she spotted a vintage well with a wooden frame and pulley system. Beyond it, a tall wind turbine spun slowly in the breeze. Someone lived out here in the desert, far from town. Bonnie walked toward the structures, her polka-dot dress swaying. As she got closer, she saw a small figure sitting on the well's edge. The gremlin had gray fur and wore a purple shawl. She knitted tiny socks with quick, expert movements. "Excuse me," Bonnie said softly. The older gremlin looked up and smiled. Bonnie held up her notebook. "I need to learn about beauty routines. Can you teach me the basics?" The gray gremlin set down her knitting and patted the space beside her. "I'm Granny Gremlin, dear. Sit down and show me what you know so far." Bonnie climbed onto the well's edge and opened her notebook. For the first time since she started watching Dottie's house, she felt like she was taking a real step forward. The dream was beginning to feel possible.

Read chapter →
Chapter 3 comic
Chapter 3

Granny Gremlin taught Bonnie how to wash her face properly and apply basic cream. They practiced on a flat rock, using water from the well and samples from Granny's collection. Bonnie learned to dab, not rub. She learned which products went on first and which came last. By noon, her notebook had five new pages of notes. Granny smiled and patted Bonnie's shoulder. "You have the basics now, dear. The rest is just practice and observation." Bonnie tucked her notebook away and thanked the older gremlin. She looked toward Dottie's white house in the distance. The desert stretched between them, hot and wide. But now Bonnie had real knowledge to build on. She knew how beauty routines worked. She understood the steps. All she needed now was to see Dottie's specific methods—and find a way past those traps. Bonnie adjusted her pink headband and started walking. The dream felt closer than ever. Bonnie followed a path that led toward the center of town. A stone statue stood in the town square, taller than any gremlin. The figure wore a dress from another time and held a mirror in one hand. A bronze plate at the base read "Miss Magnolia - Beauty Master." Bonnie circled the statue slowly, studying the carved details. This gremlin had been important enough for a monument. She had learned everything about beauty and become a legend. Bonnie touched the cool stone base. If Miss Magnolia could do it, then so could she. Past the statue, Bonnie spotted wooden steps leading down into the ground. A sign pointed toward an underground spa carved into the sandstone. Bonnie descended into the cool darkness and found herself in a room with smooth walls and small pools of water. Three gremlins sat on stone benches, soaking their feet and talking. One held up a small jar. "This cream works better than anything I've tried." Another gremlin laughed and passed around samples. Bonnie sat on an empty bench and listened. They talked about which oils worked best and how long to let masks dry. She opened her notebook and wrote down everything she heard. When Bonnie climbed back into the sunlight, she noticed a bright wooden stand near the path. Glass bottles hung from hooks, catching the light. Hand-painted signs advertised beauty lessons in bold letters. One sign read "Learn from the Best - Ask Granny." Bonnie smiled. Granny was teaching others, just like she had taught Bonnie. The town was full of gremlins who cared about beauty. The spa, the statue, the teaching stand—it all meant something. This place understood what Bonnie wanted. It showed her that her dream was worth chasing. She walked back toward the desert with her notebook full and her head high. The world was helping her learn, one step at a time.

Read chapter →
Chapter 4 comic
Chapter 4

Bonnie walked back toward the edge of town, where the buildings gave way to open desert. Her notebook pressed against her side, heavy with new information. She had learned the basics from Granny and overheard tips at the spa. She had seen the statue of Miss Magnolia and knew what was possible. Now she needed to test herself. A wooden practice station stood near the last building, painted bright blue with a small mirror attached. Bonnie set down her notebook and pulled out the sample cream Granny had given her. She dabbed it on her cheeks in small circles, just like she'd been taught. The movements felt natural now. She smiled at her reflection. Every step brought her closer to understanding Dottie's complete routine. Every practice session made the dream feel real. The desert stretched ahead, wild and bright under the afternoon sun. Desert primroses dotted the sandy ground with soft yellow petals that would open later at dusk. Bonnie walked between them, careful not to crush the delicate flowers. The heat made the air shimmer, but she liked the quiet out here. It gave her space to think about what came next. A strange cactus rose from the sand ahead, its arms twisted upward in spiral shapes. Bonnie stopped and stared at the Dancer's Spiral Cactus. The plant looked frozen in movement, like it had been spinning and suddenly turned to stone. She walked around it slowly, studying the curves. Even the desert had its own kind of beauty—wild and unexpected. Further down the path, an old sundial stood in a clearing, made from weathered stone with faded carvings. Bonnie traced the worn numerals with one finger. This town had history, layers of time pressed into rock and metal. She sat in its shadow and opened her notebook to review her notes. The basics were solid now. She understood cleansing, moisturizing, and the order of steps. Soon she would be ready to watch Dottie's house again—this time knowing exactly what she was looking at. The dream wasn't just possible anymore. It was getting close.

Read chapter →
Chapter 5 comic
Chapter 5

Bonnie practiced her routine three times that afternoon at the blue wooden station. Each time, her movements grew smoother and more confident. The cream spread evenly across her fur. Her dabbing technique matched what Granny had shown her. She checked her reflection and grinned wide. She decided to walk through town to celebrate her progress. Near the square, she found a beautiful cascade well made from polished desert rock. Water flowed down through tiered basins, each level catching the light. A plaque at the base honored a gremlin who had mastered beauty techniques decades ago. Bonnie touched the cool stone and watched the water move. If that gremlin could become a legend, Bonnie could learn Dottie's routine. The well proved that others had walked this path before her. Beyond the square, Bonnie spotted Granny's outdoor teaching area. A tree stood nearby, covered in stained glass bottles that hung from every branch. The bottles caught the desert sun and threw colored light across the ground—blue, green, amber, and red. Bonnie walked through the dancing colors and spun slowly. The light patterns shifted and mixed on her pink dress. Even simple things could be beautiful when you paid attention to them. That evening, Bonnie climbed down into her hidden underground space beneath an old storage building. She had set up mirrors along the walls and placed candles for good light. This was her private place to practice without anyone watching. She unpacked her notebook and the cream samples Granny had given her. The room felt safe and quiet. Here she could rehearse every step until her movements were perfect. When she finally approached Dottie's house again, she would know exactly what she was looking at. Bonnie smiled at her reflection in the mirror. Her dream was taking shape, one careful step at a time.

Read chapter →
Chapter 6 comic
Chapter 6

The next morning, Bonnie rushed to her practice station, eager to show off her improved technique. She squeezed too much cream from the tube and it splattered across her dress. The white blob spread into the pink fabric. She tried to wipe it away but only smeared it worse. Her paws shook as she dabbed at the stain. The cream wouldn't come out. Bonnie looked at her reflection and felt her confidence crack. She had been so careful during practice, but one mistake in the morning light ruined everything. Maybe she wasn't ready after all. Bonnie walked back to her underground space and sat at her vanity set. Sample bottles and tubes covered the surface in messy rows. She picked up each container and examined it. Some were half-empty from failed attempts. Others still had their caps loose from rushed practice sessions. A poster hung on the wall above the vanity, showing makeup tips next to pictures of common mistakes. Bonnie stared at the mistake column. Her reflection matched those warning images too closely. She needed a break from the basement. Bonnie climbed up and walked into the desert heat. A yellow palo verde tree stood in the open space, its green bark bright against the sand. She sat in its shade and pressed her back against the trunk. The spreading branches blocked the harsh sun. Her stained dress felt tight and uncomfortable. She had moved too fast this morning, skipped steps, rushed through what she knew. Granny had warned her about that. Bonnie pulled out her notebook and flipped through the pages. The steps were all there, written clearly in her careful handwriting. She had learned the basics. She had practiced the techniques. But knowing something and doing it right were different things. Her paws still trembled when she tried to move quickly. One squeeze of a tube and her confidence fell apart. Dottie's house had security traps that would catch bigger mistakes than a ruined dress. Bonnie closed the notebook and watched the desert shimmer in the distance. She would go back to the basics tomorrow. Slow down. Practice each step until her paws stopped shaking. The dream was still real, but the path there was longer than she thought.

Read chapter →

Play your story to life

Storycraft is a mobile game where you create AI characters, craft items and locations to build their world, then discover what direction your story takes. Download the iOS game for free today!

Download for free