Thorgrim Frostborne

Thorgrim Frostborne's Arc

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Thorgrim Frostborne's dream is discovering the origin of the enchanted ice sword bonded to his hand and unlocking its true buried power..

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Chapter 1

Thorgrim Frostborne could not open his sword hand. The blade had frozen into his fingers three days ago, and now the frost was climbing. It reached his wrist by the first night. His elbow by the second. This morning he watched pale crystal spread past his shoulder, and he knew the truth. The sword was eating him. He had carried it out of a buried tomb to learn where it came from and what power slept inside it. Instead it was killing him, one inch at a time. He stumbled through the snow toward the only light on the ridge. Behind him, his hawk circled, its frost-brushed wings cutting the wind. The bird would not land. It sensed the wrong thing in his arm. The light came from a low fire outside a tangle of frozen crystal vines. A small figure sat beside it. Elara Nivareth did not look up when he fell to his knees. Her white hair spilled over a snowflake-marked cloak. Elves like her had been driven out of the halls years ago for the magic she now practiced alone in the cold. "You should have cut it off at the wrist," she said. "Two days ago. Now it's too late for the easy way." "You know what this is." His voice cracked. "I know what it is." She rose and gripped his frozen arm without flinching. "A frost curse. The blade doesn't serve you. It's trying to make you part of itself. Ice all the way through." Her blue eyes found his. "Where did you dig it up?" "A tomb under the ice." He shuddered. "Can you stop it?" "I can't stop it. You can." She pressed his crystal fingers hard against the sword's hilt. "You've been fighting the blade. That's why it's winning. It feeds on struggle. You have to take command instead. Speak to it like it's yours." "It isn't mine." "Then you die tonight." The frost reached his collarbone. Cold crawled toward his heart. Thorgrim stopped pulling away. He closed his eyes and reached into the sword the way she said, not fighting, but claiming. He felt something vast and old push back. He pushed harder. He named the blade his own. The frost stopped. Then it reversed. Crystal retreated down his chest, his shoulder, his arm, until only his sword hand stayed sheathed in cold. The blade glowed a deep, steady blue. For the first time, it obeyed him. Elara stepped back, and her face had changed. Not relief. Fear. "You didn't just stop the curse," she said quietly. "You woke it. That tomb you robbed had a keeper. It will feel this. It will come for the sword." She looked at the dark horizon. "And now it knows exactly where you are."

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Chapter 2

By dawn the fever in Thorgrim's arm had cooled, but the sword would not go quiet. It hummed against his palm, low and steady, a sound he felt in his teeth. Faint marks ran along the blue crystal. He held it up to the weak light and traced them with his thumb. They were letters, or something older. He could not read a single one. Without them, he had no way to learn where the blade came from, or what power slept inside it. He needed those markings read. Only one person still nearby knew the old cold magic. He found Elara at the fire outside her tangle of crystal vines. The exiled witch sat with her knees drawn up, watching the horizon where the keeper would come. She did not turn when his shadow fell across her. "You should be running," she said. "Not standing there with that thing." "I can't run until I know what it is." Thorgrim knelt and laid the sword between them. "There are words on the blade. You taught me to command it. Teach me to read it." Her blue eyes moved to the crystal. Something crossed her face, quick and afraid. She reached out, then pulled her hand back. "I know this script," she said quietly. "My people carved it. Before they threw me out." She leaned closer. Her lips moved over the marks, slow, careful. Then she stopped. "What?" Thorgrim said. "What does it say?" "It's a name." She sat back hard. "Not the smith's name. The blade's. Every cursed thing my people made, they named after what it took from the world." She looked at him. "This one is named for a river. A river that froze solid in a single night, with a whole village still on it." The hum in the sword climbed. Thorgrim felt it answer to the sound of the word, like a dog to its master's voice. "There's more," Elara said. She pointed to a cluster of marks near the hilt. "These aren't words. They're a map mark. My people used them to point back to the forge that made a blade." Her finger stopped on a small carved shape. "A stone hall. Wind-worn. In the high passes." Thorgrim's breath caught. He knew that hall. He had sheltered in its cold rooms a hundred times. He had never once guessed what lay beneath it. "That's where I've been living," he said. "That's my home." Elara stood and stepped back from the fire. The fear had not left her face. "Then whatever forged this waited for you your whole life," she said. "And now you've woken it, and the keeper both. You have your answer, barbarian." She looked at the dark passes. "You'll have to walk back into your own house to find the rest. And you won't be the only one going there."

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Chapter 3

Thorgrim reached the stone hall by dusk. Wind had beaten its walls smooth for years. Icicles hung from the arch above his door. He knew every crack in it. He had never once dug beneath its floor. Now he had to, and fast. Behind him, across the white slope, the keeper came. He could not see it yet. He could feel it, a cold that pressed harder than the wind. His hawk landed on the arch. Its feathers were brushed with frost, its eyes sharp. The bird had followed him the whole climb. It watched the slope now and did not settle. That told Thorgrim enough. The thing hunting him was close. Elara came up behind him, breath ragged. She had not turned back. "You feel it too," she said. "It won't stop at the door. It wants the blade returned to the tomb." She looked at the hall as if it might bite her. "My people built the forge under there. I never thought I'd stand on it." Thorgrim pushed inside. The main room was bare stone. He dropped to his knees and shoved his hands across the floor, hunting a seam. The sword hummed at his hip. As he passed one flat slab, the hum climbed. He struck the stone with his palm. It rang hollow. "Here," he said. "Help me." They pried at the slab's edge. It would not give. Outside, the hawk shrieked once. The cold at Thorgrim's back sharpened to a blade. He looked over his shoulder. A shape filled the doorway, tall, wrapped in old frost, moving slow and sure. Elara went pale. "No time. You can't fight it. It'll drain you." Thorgrim did not reach for a fight. He drew the sword and spoke the name Elara had read from the blade, the name of the river that froze a village. The crystal blazed blue. The hum became a roar. He drove the point down into the seam of the slab. The stone cracked. Cold light poured up through the break. The blade knew this place. It pulled his arm down, splitting the slab wide, and a stair opened into the dark below. Warm air rose from it, the first warm air he had felt in years. The keeper crossed the threshold. Elara grabbed his cloak. "Down. Now." Thorgrim jumped through the broken floor. Elara came after. The stair carried them into the forge, and the keeper's cold could not follow past the light of the pit below. It stopped at the edge and did not descend. Thorgrim stood at the bottom, chest heaving. Around him, cold fires still burned in stone pits, though no one had tended them for lifetimes. Tools lay ready on the benches. The forge had been kept lit, waiting. The keeper paced above them, trapped at the stair's mouth. He had reached the place that made his sword. But now he could not leave until he learned how to face what guarded the door.

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Chapter 4

The keeper paced the stair above them, a shape of old frost trapped by the fire's light. Thorgrim turned his back on it. He walked the forge floor and searched the benches for some record of the sword's making. He found tools, cold anvils, and dead stone. No book. No mark that said how the blade was born or what slept inside it. Elara ran her hands along the walls beside him. She was the exiled witch whose own people had forged this blade, and even she looked lost. "There's nothing written here," Thorgrim said. "No maker's mark. Nothing." His grip tightened on the sword. It hummed against his palm, warm and awake. Elara stopped at the far wall. A frozen bush grew from a crack in the stone. Its crystal vines spread wide, blue and violet, tangled like frozen roots. "My people didn't write," she said. "They grew." She touched a vine, and it rang like glass. "This drank from the same magic as the sword. If it grew beside the forge, it remembers the forge." Thorgrim did not understand. Elara pressed his sword hand toward the crystal bush. "Speak its name," she said. "Not to fight. To ask." He hesitated. The last time he spoke the name, the blade tore stone apart. But he had no other path. He laid the crystal blade against the frozen vines and spoke the name of the river that froze a village. The bush lit from within. Light climbed the vines and poured into the blade. The forge shook. Images broke open behind his eyes, sharp and cold. He saw the forge alive, fires roaring, smiths pouring frost into a mold shaped like his sword. He saw them weep as they worked. He saw them bind something living into the crystal, a storm caught and folded small. And he saw one thing more. The storm was not finished. The sword held only half its power. The rest waited, sealed, for a wielder whose blood matched the makers'. The light died. Thorgrim staggered back, chest heaving. The frozen bush went dark and still. "You saw it," Elara said. It was not a question. Her face had gone pale. "A storm," he said. "They put a storm inside it. But only part woke." He looked at his hand, welded to the hilt. "It needs blood like the makers to finish. Your blood, Elara." Her hand dropped from the wall. She stepped back from him, the same way she'd stepped back from the tomb's keeper. "No," she whispered. "That was never meant to wake again." Above them, the keeper stopped pacing. It went still at the stair's mouth, listening. Thorgrim now knew what slept in the blade. He also knew the one person who could unlock it feared it more than the thing hunting them.

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Chapter 5

The vision left the sword cold. Thorgrim raised the blade and spoke the river's name again, softer this time. The crystal bush stayed dark. No light climbed the vines. No images broke behind his eyes. He pressed the blade to the frozen tangle and waited. Nothing came. He looked at Elara, the exiled witch whose people had grown both the sword and this bush. "It's empty," he said. "The name doesn't work anymore." Elara touched the crystal vines. They rang once, then went silent. "You drained it," she said. "The blade spent everything to show you the storm. It needs to fill again before it can speak." She met his eyes. He knew she was glad. A dead sword could not ask for her blood. Above them, the keeper still waited at the stair's mouth, held back by the forge fire. Thorgrim could not climb past it. He could not draw another vision. He had one question left and no way to ask it. He gripped the cold hilt and felt only his own pulse in the metal. Then a cry cut through the forge. High and sharp. A pale bird dropped through the crack in the stone ceiling and swept over the fire pits. Frost trailed from its wings. Thorgrim knew it at once. His hawk had followed him from the stone hall, down through the broken slab, past the thing that hunted him. The bird landed on a cold anvil near the crystal bush. It folded its wings and watched the vines. Then it hopped closer and pressed its breast against the frozen crystal. Light bloomed where the feathers touched. Faint at first, then stronger. The vines drank from the bird the way they had drunk from the blade. "It carries the same magic," Elara whispered. She stepped back. "They were grown from one root. My people kept birds like that. I forgot." Her face went tight. She had wanted the sword to stay silent. The bush filled with pale fire. Thorgrim did not wait. He laid the blade against the glowing vines and spoke the river's name. Light poured back into the sword. It struck him hot and fast. He saw the sealed half of the storm, folded tight in the crystal. He saw the lock that held it. And he saw the shape of the key. Not just blood from any maker. Blood spilled on the anvil where the sword was first poured. This anvil. Here. The light faded. The hawk slumped, spent, and Thorgrim caught it in his free hand. It breathed. It lived. Elara had gone white. "You saw where," she said. "I saw where," Thorgrim answered. He looked down at the cold anvil under his hand. The place waited. Now he needed the one thing Elara would not give. Her blood, spilled here, on the iron that made the blade.

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Chapter 6

Thorgrim set the spent hawk on the anvil. It breathed slow, feathers dull. He drew the blade and looked at Elara. She had taught him to survive this sword. Now he needed her to bleed for it. "You know what has to happen here," he said. Elara stepped back until the crystal bush stopped her. She was small, her cloak torn at the hem, her white hair loose. Her people had forged this blade and named it after a river that killed a village overnight. She had spent her whole exile keeping the rest of that power locked. "My blood," she said. "On that iron. You saw it in the vision." "I saw it." "Then you saw only half." Her voice shook. "The storm was split for a reason. My people sealed it because the first half already froze a village. The other half was worse. That is why they sent me away. So no one could ever open it." Thorgrim gripped the hilt. The metal was cold under his palm. Above them, at the top of the stairs, the keeper still waited in the dark. It could not cross the forge fire. But it would not leave. He could not climb past it while the blade stayed half-dead and mute. "The keeper won't move until this sword is whole," he said. "That thing hunts me because I stole the blade. Finish it, and I have something to answer it with." "You have a lie." Elara wiped her eyes with the heel of her hand. "You think power buys you past the keeper. It buys you nothing. It kills us both." Thorgrim raised the sword over the anvil. His arm did not shake. "Then give me a drop. Not the sacrifice. A cut. Enough to wake it partway." He held out his free hand. "Show me I'm wrong." Elara stared at him. Then she pulled a small knife from her belt. She drew it across her palm. One line of blood welled up. She let a single drop fall on the anvil. The iron drank it. Light ran up the blade, blue and fast. The sword screamed in his hand, a high sound like wind through a crack. The crystal bush rang. The hawk lifted its head. And above them the keeper made a sound Thorgrim had never heard from it. A low groan, hungry, closer. Elara clamped her hand shut. "Stop. Do you hear it? One drop and it strains toward you." She backed to the stairs, then away from them. "The full pour won't open a door for you. It opens one for that." Thorgrim looked at the blade, still glowing, still crying. He looked at the dark stair where the keeper leaned against the light. He had wanted her blood to free him. Now he understood the sword did not want to free him at all.

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Chapter 7

The blade still glowed in Thorgrim's fist. Its cry faded to a low hum. Above him, the keeper leaned against the fire's edge and groaned. He lowered the sword to the anvil and looked at Elara. She stood against the crystal bush, her cut palm pressed to her chest. "Your people split this storm," he said. "I need to know why. If I don't understand that, I can't tell if I can ever tame it." Elara did not move. "You saw a village frozen in one night. That was half." "Half a storm still froze it. So why cut the power at all? Why not seal the whole thing and be done?" He set his palm flat on the cold iron. "There's a reason you don't want to say." Her jaw tightened. She crossed to the fire pit and knelt by it, close to the light. "Because my people didn't seal it to protect anyone. They meant to use it. Two halves. One blade for freezing. One for something else." She swallowed. "A door. My grandmother built the keeper. She bound it to guard the tomb. The second half of the storm was the key made to open the way back to it." Thorgrim's hand went still on the anvil. "So the sword was never a weapon." "It was a lock and a key, forged as one. The freezing half hides the truth. Pour my blood, and you don't wake a storm. You turn the key. The keeper walks free and takes the blade home. And you with it." He understood now. He had spent chapters chasing power he thought would save him. There was no buried weapon to unleash. The sealed half was a leash, and it pointed the wrong way. "Then it can't be disarmed by finishing it," he said. "Finishing it arms the thing on the stairs." "Yes." She met his eyes. "You wanted a sword. You carry a chain." His hawk stirred on the anvil, feathers dull, one blue eye open. Frost trailed from its wing across the iron. Thorgrim watched the thin line of ice creep toward the drop of dried blood. An idea moved in him, cold and clear. The bird's magic had recharged the bush. Its frost was the same magic the forge had used. He wiped the blood from the anvil with his sleeve before the keeper could taste more. "The key needs your blood," he said slowly. "But a key only works if the lock still holds." He looked at the anvil, the fire, the frozen bush. "What if we break the lock instead of turning it?" Elara stared at him. For the first time she did not look afraid. "Break it," she whispered, "and the keeper has nothing to walk through." Above them, the keeper went quiet. It had heard. And it was no longer sure of its prize.

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Chapter 8

The keeper's silence broke. Above the stairs, it screamed and raked at the forge's threshold. The warm light held it back, but only just. Thorgrim looked at the fire pits. The flames had sunk low. Coals glowed red where tall fire had stood an hour before. When the last light died, the keeper would step down and take him. "The fire's failing," he said. "We break the lock now, or we lose the chance." Elara pressed her cut palm to her chest. "Break it how? I don't know how to unmake my grandmother's work." Thorgrim set the glowing blade against the anvil. The anvil was the lock. The blade was the key, still half-formed. He remembered the vision. Blood turned the key. But a key snaps if you force it against a lock that won't yield. He needed the lock to hold hard while he drove the wrong thing into it. His hawk lay on the iron, feathers dull, one wing trailing frost. Its magic had recharged the crystal bush before. That frost was the forge's own magic. Thorgrim lifted the bird and set it against the crystal vines. "Give it your cold," he said. "Fill the bush." The hawk's eye opened. Frost poured from its wing into the tangled vines. The crystals brightened, blue and white, humming with stored magic. Thorgrim pressed the flat of the blade to the charged bush. The sword drank the cold and glowed hard. "When I strike," he told Elara, "the lock has to fight back. It feeds on resistance. So resist it. Push your will into the anvil. Make it hold." Her eyes went wide. "That will only make it stronger." "Yes. Strong enough to shatter the key against it." He raised the blade above his head. "Now." Elara slammed both palms onto the anvil. She spoke words in her people's tongue, low and fast. The iron rang and turned white with frost. The keeper howled above, sensing the door it wanted. Thorgrim drove the ice blade down onto the anvil with all his weight. The frozen edge met the frozen iron. Neither gave. The sword screamed its own name back at him. Cracks spread up the blade from the tip. He pushed harder. Cold bit through his bonded hand into the bone. The sword broke. It split from tip to hilt in a burst of white light and a sound like a river breaking. The two halves fell ringing to the stone. Above them, the keeper made one long cry. Then the clawing stopped. The threshold went still. No door had opened. The key was gone. Thorgrim stared at the broken hilt still bonded to his palm. Half a sword. His hawk folded its spent wing. Elara lifted her hands from the cold anvil, shaking. "It's trapped," she whispered. "You did it." But the frost curse in his hand had not stopped. It crawled past his wrist, spreading again, now that the bond was cut.

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Chapter 9

The broken sword lay in two halves on the anvil. Ice edges already misted in the forge heat. Thorgrim knew the shards held the last of the blade's magic. If it faded, he lost his only chance to learn where the sword came from. The frost curse crawled up his arm, past the wrist now, blue and hard. He had traded the bond for the break. Now he needed answers before the pieces went dead and cold. "Elara," he said. "The magic's leaving them. If it drains, we learn nothing." Elara knelt beside the anvil. She had wrapped her cut palm in cloth. She touched the larger shard and pulled her fingers back. "Still warm. Barely." Her blue eyes moved to his arm. She had taught him how the curse worked. She recognized its spread at once. "It's climbing. Your bond kept it slow. Now it runs free." "Then help me read the shards first," Thorgrim said. He gathered the two halves against his chest. "The bush. It drew visions before. It might draw them from the pieces." He carried the broken sword to the crystal bush. The vines still glowed faint blue from his hawk's frost. The bird huddled on the iron, one wing dragging. Thorgrim pressed both shards to the crystal vines. He spoke the sword's name low, the name of the river that froze a village. The vines flared. Light crawled up the broken edges. A vision came, thin and flickering. He saw the forge as it once was. He saw hands at the anvil, exiled hands, Elara's people. They did not forge a weapon. They bent the metal into a shape that fit a lock. He saw them weep as they sealed the storm inside. "They made it here," Thorgrim said. "Under my home. They chose this place." He held the shards harder. The vision sharpened. He saw one figure lay a hand on the anvil and speak into the stone. He saw a mark cut into the iron, a mark he had not noticed before. "There's something in the anvil. A name. A maker's name." The light in the vines died. The vision broke. The shards in his hands went dull. The last magic was gone. Thorgrim set the dead pieces down. Elara had gone pale. "That mark. I know the hand that cut it." Her voice shook. "It was my grandmother's. She didn't only seal the storm. She left a way to answer for it." Thorgrim looked at the anvil, at the mark now clear in the iron. He had his lead. But his cursed hand had gone numb to the knuckles. The frost climbed toward his elbow, faster now. He flexed dead fingers and felt nothing. "I have where it began," he said. "Now I need to stop this before it reaches my heart."

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Chapter 10

Thorgrim knelt by the anvil. The maker's mark stared up from the iron. Elara's grandmother had cut it. The old woman had left an answer somewhere, a way to stop what she started. But the vision had not shown where. The frost had reached his elbow. His whole arm was blue and stiff. He had a name and no place to point it. "Your grandmother," he said. "She sealed the storm here. Then she left. Where would she hide the cure?" Elara pressed her wrapped palm to the anvil. She had cut that palm herself to break the sword's spell. She feared its full power more than she feared the curse killing him. Yet she stayed. Her people forged this blade. She would not walk away from the mess her blood carried. "She never spoke of a cure," Elara said. "Only that she paid for it. She said the village would remember what we did." Her eyes went wide. "The village. The one the storm froze. She went back there. She said the dead held the account." Thorgrim's hawk lifted its head. The bird had flown these passes his whole life. "You know the ruins," he told it. The hawk shook loose snow from its wing and hopped to his shoulder. They climbed from the forge. The frozen village lay a hard walk across the ridge. Wind cut through Thorgrim's ragged cloak. His dead arm swung useless at his side. When they reached the ruins, ice sheeted every wall. Broken homes stood open to the sky. Snow filled the streets where people once walked. Elara moved through the wreckage. She stopped at a house with a lantern still hung by the door. "She always marked her work," Elara said. She dug at the frost on the doorframe. A small carving showed under the ice, the same mark from the anvil. Inside, the floor had buckled. Thorgrim kicked through frozen boards with his good arm. Beneath a cracked slab lay a bundle wrapped in oiled hide. He dragged it out. The wrap held an old scabbard, dark with age. A stone sat at its center, blue and threaded with pale lightning. "The lock was never the whole cure," Elara said. She touched the stone. It hummed under her fingers. "This holds the other half. A way to draw the storm out of a person, not seal it." She looked at his frozen arm. "The curse in you is the storm's cold. This can pull it." Thorgrim gripped the scabbard. The frost had climbed above his elbow. His shoulder ached with new cold. He did not know how to use the thing. But he held it, and for the first time the answer had weight in his hand. "Then we learn how it works," he said. "Before it reaches my heart."

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Chapter 11

Thorgrim held the blue stone in his good hand. The frost had passed his shoulder now. His neck ached with cold. He turned the stone over and pressed it to his frozen arm. Nothing happened. The stone stayed dead. The scabbard beside it hummed, but the stone gave him no answer. "It won't wake," he said. "I don't know how to make it pull." Elara knelt in the wrecked house. She was the exiled witch who had taught him to survive the curse, and her own grandmother forged the lock that had bonded the sword to his hand. She took the stone from him and held it to the light. "My grandmother built the lock to read intention," she said. "So does my ice. The stone is the same craft. It won't answer a hand. It answers a will." "Then tell it what I want," Thorgrim said. "You have to fight it," Elara said. "The cold in you is part of a storm. The stone won't beg it out. It has to force it." She pressed the stone flat against his chest, over the heart. "Push against the frost. Make it resist you. The stone drinks whatever pushes." Thorgrim shut his eyes. He drove his mind against the cold in his arm, the way he had once fought the blade. The frost fought back. It climbed faster. Pain lanced through his chest. He gasped and nearly dropped to his knees. The stone flared. Pale lightning threaded across its face. It grew warm, then hot. Thorgrim felt a pull under his skin, like water dragged down a drain. The cold in his shoulder loosened. It flowed toward the stone and vanished into the blue. "Keep fighting," Elara said. "Don't stop." He pushed until his teeth chattered. The frost retreated down his arm, past the shoulder, past the elbow. The stone drank it all. Then the stone shuddered in Elara's grip. It swelled with light. Frost burst from its surface and spread across the floor. The ice climbed the broken walls and gathered outside the door. Elara yanked the stone away. "It's full," she said. "It can't hold a whole storm's worth." Outside, the gathered ice began to move. It rose and took a shape. A huge body pulled itself up from the drifts, half water and half jagged frost. Spikes grew across its chest. It stood taller than the ruined house and turned its head toward the door. Thorgrim looked at his arm. The frost had fallen back to his wrist. His fingers moved again. The stone had saved him. But the cold it drank had not gone away. It stood in the street, breathing, waiting. "The stone doesn't destroy it," Elara said, flat and quiet. "It only moves it." Thorgrim gripped the empty scabbard and stood. The curse was out of his body. Now it had a body of its own.

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